SS/KR - OS *Lost Inside Your Love*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello everyone, I'm here with an OS on swaron/kriyaansh

I had written this for my sweety nish's bday (--NishaGoyal--) around 20 days back..😛
Just posting it separately now..😊
Originally it was written as Swaron version, so their part is updated first, but I'm posting it in kriyaansh version as well .. for me n my friends...🤗
SWARON Version - 2nd Post
KRIYAANSH Version - 3rd Post
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red- sharon's thoughts

blue- swayam's thoughts

***Lost Inside your love ***

*Swaron OS*

'Hiiieee'

swayam was greeted with her seductive sweet voice, as always...

No matter, whats the time.. Whenever He visit rey, sharon always opens the door & greets him in her own sugary way..

She maybe a cold diva for the whole world, but always soft for her friends & extra sweet for him...

"Hii sharon.." he smiled at her & looked around for rey, not trying to stare at her... Afterall, she's his bestfriend's sister... And he had made a mental note- NEVER flirt with friend's sisters...

"emm . . Rey??"

"Right here,, dude" Rey emerged from nowhere... & sharon could'nt do anything but to glare at him..

"what?" rey asked in confusion..

"nothing... I'm hungry" sharon said faking smile & gritting teeths..

"SO . . . Want to eat me?" Rey asked mockingly.

Swayam chuckled.

"Get lost.." sharon mouthed to rey...

On sensing her suppressed anger, Rey bid a quick bye & rushed out pulling swayam along with him...

Sharon stomped her foot in frustration & went back to her room...

It was'nt new to her, that her micromoment with her only crush' was disturbed by her silly brother... Well, it happens almost everyday...

'And whats with swayam, can't he just look at me like a normal girl, am I that bad?' sharon thought sitting in front of mirror..

Life was definitely great.. Earlier, when she was just a diva, who cared just for her looks & never allowed any guy to win her heart...

But things got worse, when she actually met this guy,, she fall for him but he seems plain uninterested...

'don't worry... I'll wait for you to realize your love for me..'

and she knew its not coming any sooner, as he never show any love sign, no matter how much she try.. she couldn't even voice out her feelings to him... Such a BADLUCK!!!!!!

Sharon smiled as she thought of his cute smile & combed her hairs perfectly... Applying smoky eye makeup & strawberry lip-gloss, she made herself ready to blow Mr. Shekhawat's mind...

Now, her every thought included swayam as prime concern... She was positive, that one day he'll see her true love... And that day will be the luckiest day of her life...

*****

Sharon could actually see her charms working... Not on swayam although... But on Nicole mam, who paired up her with swayam for a romantic duet...

According to Nicole, their chemistry is sizzling & sets fire on the stage...

'Well, who wants to argue with mam, she's the best!!!'

Of course she knows everything... Right..

'Well... May god bless you nicole...' sharon chirped in her heart...

"Control, shar" kriya hissed..

"Huh...?" sharon asked in confusion...

"I know you are going mad with happiness... But still... Don't get crazy... Use this opportunity as a deadly weapon to win his heart"

"I know... he won't be spared this time..." Sharon smirked looking at his smiling face from a distance... & both girls broke in fits of laughter...

...

"ok, hold her waist from your free hand & keep looking in her eyes for the whole dance & same goes for you Sharon... I want this dance to be full of love.." nicole commanded...

Even if he didn't feel for her, still he could fake emotions... that was his plus point...

And he expected the same from her,, afterall they were the best dancers...

But little did he know that her emotions were crystal clear, straight from her heart...

And he got that slight hint as soon as the music started...

Surkh wala, soz wala, faiz wala love
Hota hai jo, love se zyada
Waise wala love (Ishq wala love)
Hua joh dard bhi toh
Humko aaj kuch zyada hua (Ishq wala love)
Yeh kya hua hai kya khabar
Yehi pata hai zyada hua (Ishq wala love)
Agar yeh usko bhi hua hai
Phir bhi mujhko zyada hua (Ishq wala love)
Oo..o..

She fit perfectly in his arms & swooned gracefully, like she was craving for him only...

He pulled her close,, her back clashed to his chest & slipped his both hands over her arms, feeling her silky smooth skin & reached her hand feeling the unknown sparks...

Meri neend jaise pehli baar tuti hai
Aankhien mulke maine dekhi hai subah
Hui dhoop zyada leke teri roshini din chadha (Ishq wala love)

Jhaakein baadlon ki jaali ke peeche se
Karein chandini yeh mujhko ittelah
Leke noor sara chand mera yahin pe
Hai chupa chupa hua
Ishq wala love

Every time, he made her body dance freely, he felt the need to pull her more close...

And every time, he lift her, he could feel the rush of emotions unknowingly...

He was holding her in arms & her minty breath inviting him to capture those luscious lips...

He could've leaned forward in frenzy, but thunderous claps brought them out of reverie... The music was stopped already...

"PERFECT!!

You guys are brilliant...

I'm proud of my choice...

Just be the same way on the stage..." nicole hugged them..

Sharon tried to hide her blush while swayam remained puzzled in his thoughts...

'This is getting all wrong... A mere dance can't affect me..'

he looked at her side, she was laughing with her friends...

A smile appeared on his face 'beautiful..'

...

While everyone was busy rehearsing,, Sharon decided to go to swayam...

'Just a dance is not enough, I must spend time with him too..'

"Hey swayam, your dance was flawless...

Soo amazing..

Plz teach me na.. Some steps... plzzz"

Sharon stopped in her tracks as soon as she spotted Ayesha clinging to swayam...

While swayam seems uninterested, still she wasn't ready to let him go...

"Oh c'mon... It's just a dance... Even I want to dance so beautifully... You don't want me to learn it.." she moved more closer & traced his face with her sharp pointed nails...

Sharon's eyes frilled with anger over her cheap tactics... 'How can she just do that, practically throwing herself on him.. B**** just get off him... He's all mine..'

She would've scratched her face, if she were swayam's gf.. But no.. She'll have to work upon that too... :(

Swayam agreed to teach her 2-3 steps just to get rid of her...

He was so confused with his new feelings, & here this skimpy chic is literally molesting him...

Hua joh dard bhi toh
Humko aaj kuch zyada hua (Ishq wala love)
Yeh kya hua hai kya khabar
Yehi pata hai zyada hua (Ishq wala love)
Agar yeh usko bhi hua hai
Phir bhi mujhko zyada hua (Ishq wala love)
Oo..o..

Sharon's eyes widened as he started dancing with Ayesha...

She controlled herself from breaking down,, what she was witnessing was beyond her imagination...

Swayam glanced at her, but she was quick enough to move away her face... But she could'nt do it everytime...

Her hazel eyes got locked with his brown orbs many times, secretly asking him to move away...

He was busy analyzing her thoughts from a distance,, but this unwanted situation was getting on his nerves... He faked a smile over Ayesha's silly joke & turned his attention towards Sharon.

He frowned to see the empty spot,, she was gone...

"I guess you learned it pretty well..

Plz excuse me, i've got some important work"

He rushed out ignoring that drama queen's tantrums.. He really needed alone time to think...

***

"Hey buddy..."

Swayam frowned on not finding Sharon on the door, instead Rey welcomed him...

Moreover, he came to meet him the same evening, but in actual he wanted to see Sharon... His mind was still churning with new thoughts..

"Hey.. I'm amazed..

Aaj sharon ne door nhi khola??" he asked suspiciously, looking around for her..

Strange... Everything is offtrack today...

"Must be sleeping" rey said glancing at her bedroom door...

"Oh" swayam muttered inaudibly...

'Why does her absence is affecting me, its not that I come to her house at this hour daily... She've her own life as well..'

But that goes on for everyday he came there, he won't get to see her ever on the door... It hurted him & made him think- whats wrong had he done...

Still, he could see her in college, always adorned with perfect makeup n style, even her smile was same,, but still he noticed something was missing whenever he looked in her eyes...

She used to look away after a brief moment... Not that she was ignoring him, but things weren't alright now...

He even tried to talk about her changed behavior with kriya n rey, but their replies confused him more...

Even at rehearsals, they were plain dancers; their 1st day chemistry was less on sparks... No wonder, she was just not talking with him like earlier... He was actually missing the real Sharon...

...

He sits back in old staircase & played their dancing song & closed his eyes leaning his back on wall...

Jo aise hota
jo milte tum
Ho jaate gum
Saath mere..
Hotey hotey hoga
Samjhaayein hum
Thum jaaye tham
Oh dil mere

Tutta zyada zyada taara jab gira
Zara zyada zyada mangoon dil tera
Kabhi zyada zyada maaney na
Dil yeh surfira
Ishq wala love

This soft n soothing song reminds him of Sharon, maybe bcoz they were dancing on this track from a week...

But no, all he could see was her smile, her eyes, her touch, her lavender perfume, her thick beautiful ebony hairs... Her voice, her pretty face & that look- whenever she opens the door for him...

He smiled widely but sprang up in shock suddenly, as realization finally dawned upon him...

'Is she giving signs..

OMG . . . She loves me'

'I'm such a fool'he slapped his forehead...

'And, I . . I love her too' he smiled n blushed at the sametime...

"Anyways... Better late than never" he smirked & rushed out fast...

***

He grinned wide as she opened the door...

She looked at him, trying to analyze the reason of his happiness...

'Zaroor, ayesha ko gf bana liya hoga aur ab rey ko batane aaya hoga... Idiot!'

"Rey ghar par nhi hai" she said coldly n tried to close the door but he was quick enough to hold it & open it back...

"But, main yahan tumse milne aaya hun" he said looking directly in her eyes making her shock with surprise...

"mujhse??" she whispered in disbelief..

He moved inside, making her walk backwards & closed the door behind him...

He replayed the song, kept his phone on nearby table & gently pulled her hand signalling her to dance...

Sharon remained confused on his behaviour, but still gave in, when he snapped her out of her thoughts...

Bada yeh dil nadaan tha
Aaj kuch zyada hua (Ishq wala love)

Jo tune kaha tha dhako
Toh tune hi kyun zyada hua
Ishq wala love

He was surprisingly warm n soft...

She wanted to snuggle closer but she had no right to do so...

But she liked the feel of being in his arms...

Something was definitely wrong... He never came her home to rehearse...

But still she couldn't ask him the reason of his arrival...

She looked in his eyes questioningly as she felt his palm on her cheeks...

"Why didn't you tell me before" his question surprised her,, but maybe he just guessed it finally..

"as if you care" she said looking at other side...

He smiled at her cute pout & turned her back close to him & swayed with rhythm...

"More than words can explain"

She shivered as his hot breath kissed her nape...

Hua joh dard bhi toh
Humko aaj kuch zyada hua (Ishq wala love)
Yeh kya hua hai kya khabar
Yehi pata hai zyada hua (Ishq wala love)
Agar yeh usko bhi hua hai
Phir bhi mujhko zyada hua (
Ishq wala love)
Oo..o..
Ishq wala love

She freed herself & turned back, looking in his eyes...

"You made me wait so much"

"I'm sorry..." he was holding his ears & pleading, but Sharon wasn't satisfied...

"I'm all yours... "

She felt herself smiling for what she heard him say... Feeling contented, as her true love finally won...

He cupped her face lovingly & looked in her eyes...

"I love you Sharon... With all my heart...

Sorry to made you wait for so long..

I promise.. I'll make it up to you..

Your wish is my command now"

Touched with his honest love, she hugged him immediately, as her eyes filled with unshed tears...

"I love you too & I want nothing else, but your love"

He hugged her more tightly & kissed her tears away...

Surkh wala, soz wala, faiz wala love (Ishq wala love)
Hota hai jo, love se zyada, waise wala love (Ishq wala love)

His gaze fell on her rosy lips, which were now quivering with his intense look... Taking her consent with eyes, he leaned forward & pulled her gently in a soft kiss...

Sharon closed her eyes, lost in moment & circled her arms around his neck, pulling him closer...

They broke the kiss after showing all the love to the other one, but didn't let go of each other...

Swayam smiled mischievously, making her blush & she hid her face in his chest... & they swayed along with the serene music celebrating their love...

Edited by yogini64 - 12 years ago
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red- kriya's thoughts

blue- Rey's thoughts


***Lost Inside your love ***

*Kriyaansh OS*

'Hiiieee'

rey was greeted with her seductive sweet voice, as always...

No matter, whats the time.. Whenever He visit swayam, kriya always opens the door & greets him in her own sugary way..

She maybe a cold diva for the whole world, but always soft for her friends & extra sweet for him...

"Hii kriya.." he smiled at her & looked around for swayam, not trying to stare at her... Afterall, she's his bestfriend's sister... And he had made a mental note- NEVER flirt with friend's sisters...

"emm . . Swayam??"

"Right here,, dude" Swayam emerged from nowhere... & kriya could'nt do anything but to glare at him..

"what?" swayam asked in confusion..

"nothing... I'm hungry" kriya said faking smile & gritting teeths..

"SO . . . Want to eat me?" Swayam asked mockingly.

Rey chuckled.

"Get lost.." kriya mouthed to swayam...

On sensing her suppressed anger, Swayam bid a quick bye & rushed out pulling rey along with him...

Kriya stomped her foot in frustration & went back to her room...

It was'nt new to her, that her micromoment with her only crush' was disturbed by her silly brother... Well, it happens almost everyday...

'And whats with rey, can't he just look at me like a normal girl, am I that bad?' kriya thought sitting in front of mirror..

Life was definitely great.. Earlier, when she was just a diva, who cared just for her looks & never allowed any guy to win her heart...

But things got worse, when she actually met this guy,, she fall for him but he seems plain uninterested...

'don't worry... I'll wait for you to realize your love for me..'

and she knew its not coming any sooner, as he never show any love sign, no matter how much she try.. she couldn't even voice out her feelings to him... Such a BADLUCK!!!!!!

Kriya smiled as she thought of his cute smile & combed her hairs perfectly... Applying smoky eye makeup & strawberry lip-gloss, she made herself ready to blow Mr. Singhaniya's mind...

Now, her every thought included rey as prime concern... She was positive, that one day he'll see her true love... And that day will be the luckiest day of her life...

*****

Kriya could actually see her charms working... Not on rey although... But on Nicole mam, who paired up her with rey for a romantic duet...

According to Nicole, their chemistry is sizzling & sets fire on the stage...

'Well, who wants to argue with mam, she's the best!!!'

Of course she knows everything... Right..

Well... May god bless you nicole...' kriya chirped in her heart...

"Control, kri" sharon hissed..

"Huh...?" kriya asked in confusion...

"I know you are going mad with happiness... But still... Don't get crazy... Use this opportunity as a deadly weapon to win his heart"

"I know... he won't be spared this time..." Kriya smirked looking at his smiling face from a distance... & both girls broke in fits of laughter...

...

"ok, hold her waist from your free hand & keep looking in her eyes for the whole dance & same goes for you Kriya... I want this dance to be full of love.." nicole commanded...

Even if he didn't feel for her, still he could fake emotions... that was his plus point...

And he expected the same from her,, afterall they were the best dancers...

But little did he know that her emotions were crystal clear, straight from her heart...

And he got that slight hint as soon as the music started...

Surkh wala, soz wala, faiz wala love
Hota hai jo, love se zyada
Waise wala love (Ishq wala love)
Hua joh dard bhi toh
Humko aaj kuch zyada hua (Ishq wala love)
Yeh kya hua hai kya khabar
Yehi pata hai zyada hua (Ishq wala love)
Agar yeh usko bhi hua hai
Phir bhi mujhko zyada hua (Ishq wala love)
Oo..o..

She fit perfectly in his arms & swooned gracefully, like she was craving for him only...

He pulled her close,, her back clashed to his chest & slipped his both hands over her arms, feeling her silky smooth skin & reached her hand feeling the unknown sparks...

Meri neend jaise pehli baar tuti hai
Aankhien mulke maine dekhi hai subah
Hui dhoop zyada leke teri roshini din chadha (Ishq wala love)

Jhaakein baadlon ki jaali ke peeche se
Karein chandini yeh mujhko ittelah
Leke noor sara chand mera yahin pe
Hai chupa chupa hua
Ishq wala love

Every time, he made her body dance freely, he felt the need to pull her more close...

And every time, he lift her, he could feel the rush of emotions unknowingly...

He was holding her in arms & her minty breath inviting him to capture those luscious lips...

He could've leaned forward in frenzy, but thunderous claps brought them out of reverie... The music was stopped already...

"PERFECT!!

You guys are brilliant...

I'm proud of my choice...

Just be the same way on the stage..." nicole hugged them..

Kriya tried to hide her blush while rey remained puzzled in his thoughts...

'This is getting all wrong... A mere dance can't affect me..'

he looked at her side, she was laughing with her friends...

A smile appeared on his face 'beautiful..'

...

While everyone was busy rehearsing,, Kriya decided to go to rey...

'Just a dance is not enough, I must spend time with him too..'

"Hey rey, your dance was flawless...

Soo amazing..

Plz teach me na.. Some steps... plzzz"

Kriya stopped in her tracks as soon as she spotted Ayesha clinging to rey...

While rey seems uninterested, still she wasn't ready to let him go...

"Oh c'mon... It's just a dance... Even I want to dance so beautifully... You don't want me to learn it.." she moved more closer & traced his face with her sharp pointed nails...

Kriya's eyes frilled with anger over her cheap tactics... 'How can she just do that, practically throwing herself on him.. B**** just get off him... He's all mine..'

She would've scratched her face, if she were rey's gf.. But no.. She'll have to work upon that too... :(

Rey agreed to teach her 2-3 steps just to get rid of her...

He was so confused with his new feelings, & here this skimpy chic is literally molesting him...

Hua joh dard bhi toh
Humko aaj kuch zyada hua (Ishq wala love)
Yeh kya hua hai kya khabar
Yehi pata hai zyada hua (Ishq wala love)
Agar yeh usko bhi hua hai
Phir bhi mujhko zyada hua (Ishq wala love)
Oo..o..

Kriya's eyes widened as he started dancing with Ayesha...

She controlled herself from breaking down,, what she was witnessing was beyond her imagination...

Rey glanced at her, but she was quick enough to move away her face... But she could'nt do it everytime...

Her hazel eyes got locked with his brown orbs many times, secretly asking him to move away...

He was busy analyzing her thoughts from a distance,, but this unwanted situation was getting on his nerves... He faked a smile over Ayesha's silly joke & turned his attention towards Kriya.

He frowned to see the empty spot,, she was gone...

"I guess you learned it pretty well..

Plz excuse me, i've got some important work"

He rushed out ignoring that drama queen's tantrums.. He really needed alone time to think...

***

"Hey buddy..."

Rey frowned on not finding Kriya on the door, instead Swayam welcomed him...

Moreover, he came to meet him the same evening, but in actual he wanted to see Kriya... His mind was still churning with new thoughts..

"Hey.. I'm amazed..

Aaj kriya ne door nhi khola??" he asked suspiciously, looking around for her..

Strange... Everything is offtrack today...

"Must be sleeping" swayam said glancing at her bedroom door...

"Oh" rey muttered inaudibly...

'Why does her absence is affecting me, its not that I come to her house at this hour daily... She've her own life as well..'

But that goes on for everyday he came there, he won't get to see her ever on the door... It hurted him & made him think- whats wrong had he done...

Still, he could see her in college, always adorned with perfect makeup n style, even her smile was same,, but still he noticed something was missing whenever he looked in her eyes...

She used to look away after a brief moment... Not that she was ignoring him, but things weren't alright now...

He even tried to talk about her changed behavior with sharon n swayam, but their replies confused him more...

Even at rehearsals, they were plain dancers; their 1st day chemistry was less on sparks... No wonder, she was just not talking with him like earlier... He was actually missing the real Kriya...

...

He sits back in old staircase & played their dancing song & closed his eyes leaning his back on wall...

Jo aise hota
jo milte tum
Ho jaate gum
Saath mere..
Hotey hotey hoga
Samjhaayein hum
Thum jaaye tham
Oh dil mere

Tutta zyada zyada taara jab gira
Zara zyada zyada mangoon dil tera
Kabhi zyada zyada maaney na
Dil yeh surfira
Ishq wala love

This soft n soothing song reminds him of Kriya, maybe bcoz they were dancing on this track from a week...

But no, all he could see was her smile, her eyes, her touch, her lavender perfume, her thick beautiful ebony curls... Her voice, her pretty face & that look- whenever she opens the door for him...

He smiled widely but sprang up in shock suddenly, as realization finally dawned upon him...

'Is she giving signs..

OMG . . . She loves me'

'I'm such a fool' he slapped his forehead...

'And, I . . I love her too' he smiled n blushed at the sametime...

"Anyways... Better late than never" he smirked & rushed out fast...

***

He grinned wide as she opened the door...

She looked at him, trying to analyze the reason of his happiness...

'Zaroor, ayesha ko gf bana liya hoga aur ab swayam ko batane aaya hoga... Idiot!'

"Swayam ghar par nhi hai" she said coldly n tried to close the door but he was quick enough to hold it & open it back...

"But, main yahan tumse milne aaya hun" he said looking directly in her eyes making her shock with surprise...

"mujhse??" she whispered in disbelief..

He moved inside, making her walk backwards & closed the door behind him...

He replayed the song, kept his phone on nearby table & gently pulled her hand signalling her to dance...

Kriya remained confused on his behaviour, but still gave in, when he snapped her out of her thoughts...

Bada yeh dil nadaan tha
Aaj kuch zyada hua (Ishq wala love)

Jo tune kaha tha dhako
Toh tune hi kyun zyada hua
Ishq wala love

He was surprisingly warm n soft...

She wanted to snuggle closer but she had no right to do so...

But she liked the feel of being in his arms...

Something was definitely wrong... He never came her home to rehearse...

But still she couldn't ask him the reason of his arrival...

She looked in his eyes questioningly as she felt his palm on her cheeks...

"Why didn't you tell me before" his question surprised her,, but maybe he just guessed it finally..

"as if you care" she said looking at other side...

He smiled at her cute pout & turned her back close to him & swayed with rhythm...

"More than words can explain"

She shivered as his hot breath kissed her nape...

Hua joh dard bhi toh
Humko aaj kuch zyada hua (Ishq wala love)
Yeh kya hua hai kya khabar
Yehi pata hai zyada hua (Ishq wala love)
Agar yeh usko bhi hua hai
Phir bhi mujhko zyada hua (
Ishq wala love)
Oo..o..
Ishq wala love

She freed herself & turned back, looking in his eyes...

"You made me wait so much"

"I'm sorry..." he was holding his ears & pleading, but Kriya wasn't satisfied...

"I'm all yours... I promise"

She felt herself smiling for what she heard him say... Feeling contented, as her true love finally won...

He cupped her face lovingly & looked in her eyes...

"I love you Kriya... With all my heart...

Sorry to made you wait for so long..

I'll make it up to you..

Your wish is my command now"

Touched with his honest love, she hugged him immediately, as her eyes filled with unshed tears...

"I love you too & I want nothing else, but your love"

He hugged her more tightly & kissed her tears away...

Surkh wala, soz wala, faiz wala love (Ishq wala love)
Hota hai jo, love se zyada, waise wala love (Ishq wala love)

His gaze fell on her rosy lips, which were now quivering with his intense look... Taking her consent with eyes, he leaned forward & pulled her gently in a soft kiss...

Kriya closed her eyes, lost in moment & circled her arms around his neck, pulling him closer...

They broke the kiss after showing all the love to the other one, but didn't let go of each other...

Rey smiled mischievously, making her blush & she hid her face in his chest... & they swayed along with the serene music celebrating their love...



Edited by yogini64 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome work ...rey made kriya wait so long..but altast her true love won..
kriyaansh forever...
njoyed the story a lot

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hayye it was awsum amazing zabardast
I luved it alooot se bhi zyada
Got to read itna acha kriyaansh work after hell lot of tym
I really am missing them alooot
Thanku sooo mich for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely os loved it
Edited by swaronlove001 - 12 years ago
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Wow, that was amazing!!I really liked this os!
I was smiling the entire time!!
It is way too cute!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow loved it
it was awesome
it made my morning
keep up the good work 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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resw
unres
lovely OS...
it was tooo gud...
perfect song...

Edited by Princess_Devil - 12 years ago
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Beautifully written OS...

i loved the cute and adorable SwaRon...

Sharon already fida over majnu boy...trying to get him...

loved the dance connction...

like swayam ignored her on the show..

here sharon went into cold mode😳

Cutely done confession...
loved loved loved the OS...
.u have a natural style of writing😳😃
Keep writing dear😳

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