SS/KR - OS *Lost Inside Your Love* - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
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Dear Gigu, 🤗

NEVER flirt with friend's sisters...

Hahaha! Pata ni kitni baar Rey ne yeh rule banake toda hoga. Uncountableee times now! ... 😆

'don't worry... I'll wait for you to realize your love for me..'

Oh God! Bhaai ki sangati ka asar Behena pe aana hi tha. Nahi toh Diva's chessy ni hoti. 😳

she couldn't even voice out her feelings to him... Such a BADLUCK!!!!!!

Hahaha! Diva kis kaam ki then. Rey is the asli mard jiske saamne kriya ... kriya ni rehti.Bheegi Billi ban jaati hai. 😆 🤣

She was positive, that one day he'll see her true love...

Itni shidat se kisi cheez ko paane ki koshish ki God ko majbur hoke use vo cheez deni padti hai. 😉

'Well, who wants to argue with mam, she's the best!

Wat ?! I Love this abt u ki tu characters ko hi change kar deti hai Gigu. Just like me! Yo. 😎

B**** just get off him... He's all mine..'

The Diva was incomplete without using these words for sure. Go protext ur Love nai toh maina le jayegi tera gehna. 🤣

Rey frowned on not finding Kriya on the door, instead Swayam welcomed him...

Yehi dosti hai Rey. Ab swayam paraya ho gya. Poor Swayu unknown about the thoughts. 😆

"Anyways... Better late than never" he smirked & rushed out fast...

Saare ladke are always late in these matters. Thank god kisi ne kriya ko pataya ni abtakj nai toh rey ko apni feelings realize krte krte 21-2 yrs pass ho jaate. 🤣

"mujhse??" she whispered in disbelief..

Ab finally sapne sach hone ko hai. Anybody would be confused. Awww. Kriya i can understand teri feelings jo ubal rahi hogi ab tak.🤣 😆

Something was definitely wrong... He never came her home to rehearse..

And he never came there to propose her either. Paagal . . . 🤣

She shivered as his hot breath kissed her nape... ☺️

😳

And now they ever lived happier . . .
Kahaani khatm. 😆

Loved it totally. ❤️
Ek ek line ki lagai hai maine. 😆😆 🤣 🤣

But overall i Loved it totally. 😛

Der se meri comment aayi but aayi toh. Hope you like it. 😆

Ab 1 month mujhse koi comment expect mat kariyo jaanU. 🤣

Lobbbhhh you and ur Os. 🤗 ❤️

Do write more. 😳

Muhhhaaa! 🤗

~Ur's Tingi. ☺️

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RiyaArShaKapoor thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Haye di kya likha hai
mei toh dhanya ho gyi itni der baad aapse koi update pake
itna sweet os hai
loved it
rey bhi na jb btao toh samjta ni n ignore maro tbi line pe aata hai
bt bahut shana hai kissy leli usne besharam kahin ka 😆
di likho aur pm krte jao muje bas 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
that was superb and fabulus... title is good...
both the version were brilliant and perfect... loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
awesome update!!!!!
loved it...
dono ek saath kitnne cute lagte hain!!!!
love them...
rey realised his feeling a bit late par he realised and the dance
wat should i say...
it was awesome!;!;!!!!!perfectly described!!!!!
loved the one shot!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Such a cute OS
Kriya showed Rey so many signs that she luvd him..but our hero being d dumb-skull couldn't understand that! Lol..
Thank God finally he realized his feelings only when Kria started to avoid him!..
Ending was so sweet..
Luvd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Awesome OS

Amazing

Superb

simple n sweet

KR confession was Adorable

Loved it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
hayee dat was amzinggg... yaaa
I lovedd both the versions..
its was really cuteee.. one i must say...
thanxxx yaa fr the pm <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Ishq wala love..

Haye all I can say is Nicole ma'am ke duet dance performance ke idea ne aur Aayesha ke clinging act se Rey ke dimaag ki batti jali aur jhalle ko finally realise hua that he loves Kria.. Finally.

Rey ne I love you bolne ka kya tareeka nikala.. ghar pe dance rehearsal woh bhi swayam ke absence mein..

kyun ab Dost ki behen nahi hai kya woh.. idiot..

CHalo finally Kria ke tactics aur Nicole ma'am ke aashirwaad se love safal hua 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Perfect ending to d os...
Sharon ws super cute.
Luvd dis one.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os.. loved both d versions a lot.. n had different feel for both... kria/sharon waiting for rey/swayam to c her signs that she s in love with him... but he s dumb not seeing d signs.. loved d dance part n d she was praising nicole for making them d dance partner.. d jealousy scene was superb n he was not able to understand d sudden change in her behavior n sad wen she didnt open d door... atlast after making her wait for a long time he understood her signs n proposed her was cute.. loved d os a lot it was awesome n superb.. brilliantly penned os..

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