looking at the challenge, pehle i thought it might be about KR breakup...
and was a bit aprehensive about reading this one, kyunki nhi hota mujhse...
but the way u framed things up and presented this OS was amazing...😊
the relation between Rey n Kria was potrayed well... and both their feelings too...
at d end..after reading Kriya's diary..almost felt as if this was like an incomplete love story of the two..
Rey should'nt have taken Kriya for granted! things would have taken a different turn then na😃
Somewhere along the lane, other than the orphan part, i felt this was kinda like JTYJN!! one of ma fav!!
especially things between KriYaansh!! ki pata ... shayad Rey ne ab tak jaake shaadi rok di ho... 😃😃
superbb vaishh :* :*