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Nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

That was beautifully written :-)
Feel bad for Kriya but loved how you expressed their thoughts

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Gunika Mehta

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice one. Bt sad ending...
Bt keeping dat aside, d os ws beautiful.

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

bak.. mujhe nahi achha laga yeh...

well aisa bolne ki meri koi ichha nahi hai... because this had a clear picture about how two friends who have been support for each other for a long time.. how they behave.. care for each other..

though yahaan pe it was only Kria.. but I felt boys dont sensible.. never ever.. and so did Rey..

hadh ho gayi.. girlfriend ke aane se best friend ki value kam ho gayi..

but I would say.. uska akela rehna is what he deserves..

and with this mera OS ka quota khatam... I hope so..

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Fida

@aTTiTude_dIvA

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Posted: 11 years ago

looking at the challenge, pehle i thought it might be about KR breakup...

and was a bit aprehensive about reading this one, kyunki nhi hota mujhse...

but the way u framed things up and presented this OS was amazing...😊

the relation between Rey n Kria was potrayed well... and both their feelings too...

at d end..after reading Kriya's diary..almost felt as if this was like an incomplete love story of the two..

Rey should'nt have taken Kriya for granted! things would have taken a different turn then na😃

Somewhere along the lane, other than the orphan part, i felt this was kinda like JTYJN!! one of ma fav!!

especially things between KriYaansh!! ki pata ... shayad Rey ne ab tak jaake shaadi rok di ho... 😃😃

superbb vaishh :* :*

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ArYa/Ash

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Posted: 11 years ago

sad ending.😭... bt overall it wasss nyccc

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