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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Karkit

Nice update anii...
Finaly uday say truth to manyata n she so hurt...
Rajdep so cheap person he knw she is married to bhi use panke bare mai soch raha hai...
So sad fr uday bt he deserve this bcoz he hurt manyata so much in past...
Love the update
thanks 4 pm n update soon


thank you so much jiji
indeed he confessed
no he is just a cameo
awn it was my duty

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hai, awesome as always...! Loved it. Iam that Uday told her the truth. What happened to Manyata? Is she is in her periods? Continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: capriya

Hai, awesome as always...! Loved it. Iam that Uday told her the truth. What happened to Manyata? Is she is in her periods? Continue soon..


thank you so much
yes he confessed to her
nope that a mystery actually

i have planned to introduce Uday new lady love


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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey... Aneesha...
The chappy was as always awesome...
I loved it to the core...
Manyata and Uday sleeping one the edges of their bed was really one of its kind...
Rajdeep is surely gonna create more rifts between Manveer...
Aww.. Manyata is so much hurt...
But so is Uday..
Dono hi apni jagah sahi hai...
I hope Manyata gets fine...
And Manveer too gets fine soon... ( Soon... close to impossible right)...
Vaise u described the emotions so well...
Update soon...
And thanx for the PM..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nityatandon

Hey... Aneesha...

The chappy was as always awesome...
I loved it to the core...
Manyata and Uday sleeping one the edges of their bed was really one of its kind...
Rajdeep is surely gonna create more rifts between Manveer...
Aww.. Manyata is so much hurt...
But so is Uday..
Dono hi apni jagah sahi hai...
I hope Manyata gets fine...
And Manveer too gets fine soon... ( Soon... close to impossible right)...
Vaise u described the emotions so well...
Update soon...
And thanx for the PM..


hey
thank you so much
yea when there a breaking of trust they are distanced too
no he is just a cameo
lips completely closed about this
thank you so much
awn it was my duty

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update Anni, I'm so pleased that Uday revealed his past. Everything that Manyata back-answered him with , was excellent! Well done with her dialogues👏. I hope Manyata's health-issues are not too serious, ... could she be pregnant, perhaps? Please continue soon, dying to read more!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Awesome update Anni, I'm so pleased that Uday revealed his past. Everything that Manyata back-answered him with , was excellent! Well done with her dialogues👏. I hope Manyata's health-issues are not too serious, ... could she be pregnant, perhaps? Please continue soon, dying to read more!


thank you barfi jiji
after all he needed to
that was the most hardest part for me
ok will update ASAP

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 17

All happy couples resemble one another, but each unhappy couple is unhappy in its own way. Everything was upset between Manveer, just the previous night a word even looked at him. But to the others they were the happiest couple ever. He made his entire attempt to seek her forgiveness but went in vain all he could do was hear his beloved break down into silent tears each fe had found out about her husband affair and she could just not digest this so easily. She maintained her distance and behaved like a stranger to him, it had been three whole days now, she neither talked n night. No matter how hard she tired and decided to forgive him still she could not as anger over powered her love. She had been someone who have been deceived and cheated in her entire life but all she wanted was a little love from her husband but he too left her deceived. It was the day of Atul marriage as she stood near the mirror and reapplied the makeup for the fifth time as every time her tears spoiled it entirely. He glanced at her from the corner of her eyes he was all dressed and sitting in the sofa in the corner of his room. In these three days he had to allocate himself there as she did not like his presence near her. After feeling she was done she looked down and said in a stern voice

MANYATA: I am done I think we should leave now

He looked at her and was completely mesmerized by her beauty everything was forgotten and forbidden to him as his eyes were blinded by her beauty. He stood up and took slow steps towards her, his eyes pierced into her she was could not avoid his glance and stood up to walk away but by then she realized that he had already come to close to her. Her eyes were fixed down as his index figure went caressing her cheek moving slowly towards her chin as he whispers huskily in her ears

UDAY: you look beautiful Wifey

She looked up at him with her eyes brimming with tears as she ask him

MANYATA: MORE beautiful then that Jai also

He could see the pain she had gone when he said her about his past. Her heart was hurt and it needed time to be smoothed as he wiped the tears from her eyes and replied to her question

UDAY: you are more beautiful than any other girl in this wife as you simplicity is the best make up anyone can wear

MANYATA: But being simple always gets you fooled

He look at her, he has no answer to her now, except for one for the first time in his entire time he sits on his knees with his head bellowed down as he says to her

UDAY: see manyata I need to tell you since childhood I had never seen my dad, he left us when we needed him and after him the responsibility was upon me and being pressurized in all this I completely forgot that I too have a life. It was Jai who bought the happiness in my life but one day she too left my side I was broken and scattered I blamed all the girls for my heartbreak and included yourself too but it was only when I met you I realized that I had committed a mistake you are the bright sun light in my dark night I am incomplete without you.. I need you ... I love you. I know I deceived you but I had my reason I did not want to lose you

MANYATA: You think that if you had confessed to me earlier I would leave you? You should know uday that if you forgave me for confessing about ayaan I would also forgive you. Didn't you trust your love? Is this the faith you had in this marriage?

UDAY: I was just afraid and scared. But don't you think that I should be forgiven by now see I did confesses my mistake now please wifey do not be so cold towards me anymore

MANYATA: if confession meant to resolve everything then you should have done it a lot for earlier Mr Uday Veer Singh

Saying this she moved away with her eyes brimming with tears as he watched her leave helplessly. But there was someone else who viewed it entirely and it was Menuka. As manyata tried to walk away she landed banging into Menuka. She tried to wipe her tears off as Menuka said

MENUKA: beta can we talk in my room please

She nodded in a yes and menuka took her to the room. She made her drink a glass of water and took her head into her lap. Menuka caressed manyata as she no longer could store her pain, she found a mom in Menuka and said out everything menuka heard her each and every word very carefully as she said him

MENUKA: beta all I have to say is do not let your past ruin your presence everyone in their life needs a second chance after all mistakes are regrets are something that shows we care

Manyata looked at her face blankly as she could witnessed a lone tear escaping from her eyes as Menuka continued

MENUKA: I am not saying so as he is my son but I am saying so as you are my like my daughter. I do not want you to repeat the same mistake...

MANYATA: Mom what do you mean by same mistake?

MENUKA: At a time even I was at your place but it was Udays dad I was so egocentric that I refused to forgive him. I left him when he needed me the most ... later when I realized that his regrets were true and he needed to be forgiven it was too late...he was dead

She sat up, her face was pale as she mumbled

MANYATA: But uday

MENUKA: I know he does not know anything about this and neither do I want to tell him and break him down more

Manyata wiped the tear and said hugging her

MANYATA: do not worry mom your son will have me by his side till I take my last breath

Both of them assured a happy smile as she walked out of the room feeling happy and contemned. She went down to the car as she saw him already seated; she sat beside him but pretended to be angry as the drive started. It was not before they reached the venue as she stepped down from the car and marched inside the hall without even looking back at him. Feeling dejected he carefully parked the car and made his way inside the hall. They both wished the married couple and stood watching the marriage ceremony takes place; she watched them with awe as she recalled her own marriage day as for uday he was too tensed to watch anything other than his wife face. After long hour the marriage was finally over, it was nearly mid night when they drove back towards home. The drive was quite one none spoken. Finally the car stopped near a ravine. He looked at it disheartedly and said

UDAY: I think the petrol over wait here till I go and get some from a petrol pump

She felt a lump struck on her throat she could not let him go and if she did then her plains will get ruined as she said

MANYATA: No way can't I stay here alone what if goons attack me or I become a prey to the man-eater and moreover how will you reach the petrol pump it is so dark

UDAY: then what shall we do there is no network here!

MANYATA: I think we have to spend our night here and in morning we can go looking for help

He nodded in a yes as he too knew this was the best thing they could do for now. She continued to look outside the window as he closed his eyes and rested his head. It was clam and peaceful as manyata sudden said

MANYATA: uday I need to talk to you

He opened his eyes as she continued

MANYATA: I think it is better for us if we divorce each other I mean how long will we stay this way where none is happy with each other company. After divorce you can be with jai and even if I can be with someone who will not deceive me someone like rajdeep

He was boiling with anger, he wanted to stop her before he hurt her due to his anger but the last word set him insane. Without a word he grabbed the back of her hair and pushed her face closer to his. As his tongue took control over her mouth quite well


done with the update

i am sorry if i offended any body

please hit the like button and no res box

hugss anni


Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey awesome update anni...
Manyata bhi na tension k time par mazaak soojh raha h, ab bhukto 😉 😆 (I think manyata wanted this only 😉 )
Bt i m happy atleast manyata finally forgave him

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