'Meant To Be AR FF' P-3 pg-10(23.11.13)

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Heyyyaaa Guyss...!!!!
This is the first time I am writing a FF...m quite nervous because m not good in expressing...so please bare me...I'm posting the first Part of this FF...If u guyss find it worthy then only I will continue...!!!!


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We can see a beautiful mansion with a huge garden and also sooo many security guards moving around the mansion giving a very tight security...at the backside of the mansion we can see a guy sneaking inside the mansion through pipe...finally he reached the balcony...when he was about to open the door of the room all the lights of the room turned on...he was dumbstruck in his place and murmured " you are gone today" and he closes his eyes and tells to himself that today is not at all lucky...when he open his eyes he felt a sign of relief seeing the person before him ..." oh mom it's you...I thought it was bro thank god " he said while stepping forward to hug her...but he stopped himself when he saw his mom looking angry and glaring..." mom please don't start again at least not from you please" he said while showing the best cutest face ever...seeing that cute face she just smiled and thought only he can manage it..." Armaan kab badlogii" [yes guy's its none other than KSG our ARMAAN MALLIK] said Naina Mallik..." kabhi nahi" said Armaan showing his cute dimple valla smile...

Next Morning...

Mallik Mansion...

we can see an elderly man sitting on couch and reading News paper...at that time a guy entered the house wearing tracks..."Good morning Angad...howz ur jog?? said elderly man...(yes that guy is none other than ANGAD MALLIK)..."Good Morning dad... and yeah my jog is good dad" said Angad...we can see Naina entering the living room with a glass of juice and two cups of coffee...she handed the juice to Angad and one cup of coffee to her husband karan and settled beside him ( that man was none other than KARAN MALLIK)...They all started to discuss about general stuff...after sometimes Karan asked Naina " where is Armaan "...she didn't answer him...he asked again - " where is Armaan did he wake up or not ???"

"yeah...he is doing bath " - said Naina with a bit of hesitation...Angad excused himself and went up to his room to get ready for office...

ARMAAN'S ROOM...

we can see Armaan sleeping on his king size bed with his head buried inside the pillow and pulling his comforters...his mobile was on left side ...and laptop on floor...and closet was left opened with clothes coming out...totally the room was full messy...

Naina thought "he is still a kid and he can never change "...

She went near his bed side and tried to wake him up...

Naina - Armaan get up beta...

Armaan - No mom I am sleepy please mom let me sleep...

Naina - No beta dad is calling he want to talk with you...chalo get up...

Armaan - Mamma pleaseee...

Naina - No Armaan get Up (she said with finality in her tone)

Armaan - Mamma (he whined like a baby)

Armaan got up from the bed ...he was wearing grey vest and trousers...and his body was well shown... (KSG body was like OMG...every girl drool on his body...such a perfect body...)

He moved towards the restroom...after taking shower he came out wearing black denims with white vest and a towel around his neck...he threw the towel on the bed and pulled a white shirt with its first 2 buttons open show his perfect chest...he combed his hair...placed his new Rolex watch on his wrist...he wear his sneakers...pushing his mobile on his left pocket and wallet on right pocket...he went downstairs...

Down Stairs...

Breakfast Table...

A huge 12 seater breakfast table was place with so many different kind of dishes for breakfast...Karan was seated at head chair...at right Naina and at left side Angad...Armaan went towards them and made himself comfortable beside Angad wishing them a small Good Morning...they all started to have their breakfast...

Suddenly

Karan - Armaan what are you going to do today??

Armaan - Nothing dad me and Rahul going out...that's it...

Angad - Armaan tumhari University Kab start horahi hai??

Armaan - 1 week k badh bhai...

Karan - so all set for Uni??

Armaan - yes dad...m done... (He said while getting up from the chair)

Naina - Armaan eat one more parratha...

Armaan - No mom m full

Naina - no Armaan chup chap ek aur parratha finish karo...m sure kal ratt bhi u didn't have Ur dinner properly... (Said Naina with a bit strictness and soo much of love in her tone)...

Armaan - fine mom...

Karan - Armaan try to come back home as soon as possible

Armaan - what dad?

Karan - I am just intimating you that after 12'O clock at night...no one is going to allow u inside the house...in that matter ur mom is also not going to help you...

(Said karan in a very strict manner and glaring towards Armaan & Naina)

Armaan - he just nodded his head in approval...

Saying that karan and Angad excused themselves...went to office...after bidding byee to Armaan and Naina...

Armaan also went to rahul's house after hugging his mom...

Now we can see another side of Mumbai...

We can see another beautiful mansion

Inside the mansion we can see so many maids doing their particular jobs like dusting, arranging things, cleaning etc...now we can see an elderly man talking on phone and inside the kitchen we can see a lady preparing breakfast...

Suddenly the elderly man shouts from the living room

Elderly man - Padma can you please bring my blue file...

Padma - ha Shashank one minute...

She said and went to their room to get the blue file...he handed that file to Shashank after that she went back to kitchen

(And guys they are none other than Shashank & Padma Gupta)

Scene shift to the beautiful room colored in purple shade...a round bed was placed at the centre of the room on that bed we can see two girls lying on each other their heads are buried inside their pillows and pulling their comforters so that they can sleep peacefully...

After sometimes Padma walked inside the room and went towards left side of the bed where we can see a girl who was in deep sleep...

Padma - Kripa chalo utto... (Yes guysss she is none other than KRIPA GUPTA)

Kripa - no mom please m sleepy...

Padma - no Kripa chalo utto bahut der hogaya...

Kripa - ok mom...

Kripa got up from the bed and went to restroom with half opened eyes...

Padma smiled seeing the cute face of Kripa and thought now it's the time to wake up the devil of the house...she went towards the right side of the bed...

we can see a girl with a long silky hair not that long...she is wearing Mickey mouse printed night dress hugging her teddy bear so strongly that as if someone is trying to snatch that teddy from her...looking sooo cuteee...

Padma - Ridhima utto... (Yes guyysss she is none other than RIDHIMA GUPTA our ridziii)...

Ridzi - No mom I wanna sleep pleaseee...

Padma - No Ridhima bahut der hogayya utto...

Ridzi - fine but give me 5 min...

Padma - ok but only 5 min...

Padma started picking the soft toys which are laying on the floor...After 5 min...

Padma - Ridhima chalo utto...

Ridzi sat on the bed with her legs crossed...and she started to rub her eyes just like a cute baby...

Padma - chalo Ridhima go and get ready...and come downstairs...

After sometime ridziii and Kripa walked towards the breakfast table and made themselves comfortable on their seats...they all started to have their breakfast...

Shashank - Ridhima Ur looking upset what happen??

Ridzi - nahi dad Muja neend harai hai dad but mom wake me up... (She replied soo innocently and cutely)

Shashank - hmm...Padma tumna mera bachiii ko kyun uttai??

Padma - Shashank please don't take her side...and ladhikhi honko itna time sona shubh nahi deta...sasural jaakara bhi woh hasa karangi tho log kya kahengaa..???

Ridzi - Mom please...and beach mai mera Sasural kaha se hagayaa??

Padma - why u won't marry or what???

Ridzi - yeah I will but iska liya bahut time hai...and I have sooo many dreams for my dream boy u know... (Said giving her cute smile)...

Shashank - like??

Ridzi- hmm...

see he must be cute, hot, handsome in words he must be like prince charming...u know after all he is gonna marry worlds beautiful girl...itna tho banta hai na..???...: P

us insaan ko dekar muja lagna chaiki muja uss par apna app par bhi zyada barosa karna chayiaya...jab ma kuch galat kiya tho zor se nahi balki pyaar sa muja dhattna chayyiya...jab bhi ma rohti hunaha muja uski kandha ka saharaa ka sath sath tissue bhi dana chayyiya...meri kushi ka liya mount Everest se kudna nahi balki aggar me waha se girri rahi tho muja waha sa bachaana kaliya kosis karna chayyiya...he must accept me the way I am...he must be simple at heart...thoda sa attitude chalanga lekin mujsa zyada nahi...he must be a bit romantic... ma kitna bhi shopping karlo ho muja question nahi karangi...jab bhi muja panipuri ( goll gappe) kana ka man kiya tho muja bahar lajana chayyiya...jab bhi raat ko muja ice cream

ki man kiya tho muja kilana chayyiya...roj mera liya coke aur chocolates lana padaga...ma jaisa bhi kaana banahu oh chup chap kana padaga...he shouldn't wake me up before 9'O clock...he must have all this minimum qualifications...then I think I might give him a chance...:)

Padma Shashank Kripa were shocked out of their wits listing dream boy qualification list...

Kripa - OMG Ridzi...mom dad I think u guys are gone...

Padma - yeah...Shashank I think we should start searching or else it will take ages for us to find a groom for ur spoiled daughter...

Ridzi - mom (she said with a pouting look)

Padma - what mom m telling u the fact...

Ridzi - dad (she said giving an angry look to her mom and asking her dad for support)

Shashank - Padma ( he said giving fake angry look to his wife and turning towards his princess he said lekin princess this time I'm with ur mom...srsly its too tough to find ur dream boy...

Ridzi - No dad it's not at all tough because my heart says m close to him...

Kripa - ohhh... (Giving her a teasing smile)

Ridzi - Stop it dii...I think we should leave now or else we won't have enough time...what say

Kripa - m I think u are right mom dad byee cyuu later...

Padma - lekin tum log kaha jaa rahi hoon??

Ridzi - mom we are going for shopping...now byee guysss...

They both bid byeee and went away taking there accessories...after sometimes Shashank also went to his office bidding byeee to Padma...!!!!!

I will wait for a response...and tell me if u want me to continue...and sorry for any errors...!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow nice start dear
its awsome
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
Awesome start
Loved it
Plz cont soon
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Very good start dear
keep it up😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start dear..
ofcourse u hve to cont.
looking forward to read moree..😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey
it's really nice😊
armaan the carefree dude and oh GOD ridhima have so many tantrums!!😆
and padma bringing ridhima's imaginary btw the convo, so typical of mom's😆
loved both AR background's!!!!!!
and AK are here too😊
you should really continue it
and plzzz pm me if u do
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start ojaswi.. i really think u need to cont the story
really like the characters..esp ridz she is soo cute n naughty too
i like her character
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice oneee
looking forward to read ittt
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u thank u sooo much guysss...srsly it means a lot to me...:)
now m posting CS...I will post second part within 2 days...



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