Swaron Os on current track : wanna be with you... :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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short os based on current track...not edited well...just wrote it few hours back...hope u all wil like it...😊

Swaeon OS : wanna be with you.. :)

After ganesh mahostav got over everyone had left...except swayam and Sharon...

Swayam was walking towards his cycle...Sharon called out to him...he stopped and turned around to look at him...Sharon walked towards to him...and stood right in front of him...

Sh : thank u...bahut acha support diya tumhne mujhe...I am really happy ki dance humare life mai...i mean sabhke life mai firse agaya...

Sw; hmm ya...me too...

Dey shared smile... Der ws nothing else to talk...

So Swayam turned around to walk away...he was walking back towards his cycle...

Sh : you don't think we should stop it now..

Swayam turned to look at her...with puzzled look on his face...

Sh cont : hmmm dekho m not gud actor like you...abh ye drama mujse aur nahi hota...

Swayam was still starring at her with confused look on his face...

Sw : sorry..i did nt understand...

Sh: now u will...

Without wasting a second she went running towards him and hugged him tight...he was kind of shocked for a second with Sharon sudden gesture..next moment he hugged her back...Sharon hugged him as tight as possible...not letting him go...dey stood der hugging each other...

Few mins later

Sw: ( in teasing tone) Sharon...mai sas nahi le pa raha hu... ( I can't breath )

Sharon broke the hug...and saw him smiling like an idiot...she slapped him playfully on his chest...

Sh : ( holding her ears ) I am sorry...

Sw : ( holding his ears ) I am sorry too...

They both shared smile...

Sh : I love you...

Sw : ( kissed her forehead ) love too my love...

Sh : ( by putting her hand forward ) will you promise me something...

Swayam just kept looking at her ...

Sh ( cont ) : promise me ki...next time...mujse koi bhi galti ho...ya humare bitch koi bhi fight hui...tho tum mujpe gussa nahi hoge...

Swayam thought of her irritating her bit..

Sw : agar tum mujhpe bina vajah gussa hui...tabhi...

Sh : tabhi...

Sw: agar galti tumhari ho..tabhi...

Sh : ha tabhi...

He was enjoing this and she was getting more irritated by every passing second...

Sw : agar ( before he could complete )

Sh : tum promise kar rahe ho ya nahi...

Sw : jabardasti hai...

Sh : ha hai..tho...

Swayam smiled at her cutness...

Sw : ok baba...as u say...ur wish is my command...

She gave him smile back...

Sh : you know what tum bahut cute ho ( pulling his cheeks )

Sh : cute??...plz mai cute nahi hu...itz sounds girly...

Sh : ( pulling his cheeks again ) yes you are cute...very cute...

Sw : Sharon... ( gave her fake angry look )

Sh : Swayam ( gave him cute smile )

Sw : abh chale...ya yahi rahne ka irda hai...

Sh : vaise idea buri nahi hai ( wink at him )

They both shared laugh...den walked towards to his cycle...she sat in front...and dey enjoyed der ride on d way...

Outside Sharon house...

She got down..

Sw : gud night...

Sh : ( gave him peck on his cheek ) gud night...

They shared smile...and left towards respective home...



my other Os based on current track :

i miss the old you


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Posted: 12 years ago
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YE ye yeee i m the first one to comment and readd
divyaa sweet and small OS dear👏👏
loved ittt a lottt...it is sooo sooo soo lovelyy😃
veryyy sweet oneee dear...and a cuteee oneee
Edited by Hello_Vrushaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hayee cute cute tha just like cute swayam 😆 😆
Simple short cute n sweet os. .
Very well written. .
Very light hearted os. .
I enjoyed it. .
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres

it was cute lovely adorable
i loved it a lot
"u r soo cute" 😆
i enjoyed it
keep writing more
Edited by muskan108 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres

mujh se raha nahi gaya toh maine abhi hi padh liya 😆😆
i loved it di
amazing tha

cute
romantic
sweet
adorable
sab kuch tha ismein...
simply lovable.. ❤️

hai my swaron ☺️
nice title 👏👏
but chotu sa tha 🤔

PS. jaldi se PM kar dena whenever your free.. okay 😃
write more

PPS. and the best part .. i kow apne editing nahi ki 😛
but BEECH ko BITCH likhna 🤣 🤣
Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow
It was cute + romantic + adorable
I luved it alooot
Chotu tha but jitna bhi tha bohat awsum tha
I am toh sooo mich happie
I wish real mein bhi aisa ho
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Diyua it was so so cute...no drama no faltu ka tashan...simple plain short BT importantly full f love...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Divya
This OS is very nyc
lovely!! thumbs up👍🏼👍🏼
short and sweet👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww Divu such a cute update.
Loved it.❤️
Sharon hugging swayam and asking him to stop it.
Lovely part.👏
Please continue soon.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww...that was such a cute OS...loved the way u kept it simple n real...they just need a moment to get back in each others embrace...loved the cute promises...teasing swayam...irritated sharon...cycle ride...awww...cuteee OS😳😳

love the honesty in ur writing...beautiful😊...love u swthrt😳

sorry for short comment..m inactive here
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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