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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update and teaser on facebook. Please PM me too about your blog,I promise I will give you regular comments. I was sick for a couple weeks and had surgery so I couldn't comment much last month but I promise to comment if you PM me about the blog.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Whewww i am back to reading all your FFs.. and am glad i started with this one.. Loving this side of Virat.. Kinda reminds me a bit of someone i know.. Dudee... loving every bit of it..
waiting for the next update.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey nisha!
So sorry for the late reply. I just got back from
Italy and checked fb and there it was. An update from you!!!! Your updates are always amazing and make my day. Coming to the update it was great. Glad virat found her and brought her back. Although it was kinda short but hey it was an update. Patience is virtue.
Love
Marissa
P.s Have a speedy recovery and Get well soon. Read about your surfing incident, i broke my hand surfing too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is absolutely amazing
You know what u are reallyan amazing writer
Oh how I loved the care and concern virat had for manvi
it feels as if manvi is really hurt by his words
And now manvi is being distant thats great hope it helps them both realize their feelings
The story is really awesome
If u can pls send me a pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update soon pls
im loving how this story is travelling

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi nisha
just completed reading your story
its superb
you write so well
loved the way you portrayed manvi and virat 's role
manvi is so arrogant rude
loved virman friendship
the way virat supports her in every thing
I loved the bonding between virat and manvi 's mom
and now manvi falling for virat
but he doesn't know it
and she is distancing herself from him and this is hurting him
hope he understands soon
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 16:

Manvi's POV

I don't know what is wrong with me! Why am I taking everything so seriously? For Godsakes it is Virat, my best friend. He is always mean to me, that is how we have always treated each other. I say things to him that I don't mean and so does he. But why are his words affecting me so much. I disappeared on him for the whole day, of course he is mad and is yelling at me. Why does this make me feel so bad? What is wrong with my brain!!!!

He lifted me up and I swear to God I forgot to breathe for like a minute. What is happening to me? Whats up with all these butterflies in my stomach and this tingly feeling? Breathe in breathe out Manvi you are alright. He is yelling at me and all I can think of is that I can feel his heartbeat.

"Put me down." I order him not because I didn't like that he was holding me but because all this is confusing me. I hate myself, I hate Virat, I hate everything.

He sat close to me and asked me what is wrong. What am I supposed to tell him when I don't know it myself?! As soon as Virat left I got up and dialed the one person who I needed the most right now.

"Hello Mom." I barely whispered.

"Hun how are you? Why do you sound so low?" She sounded worried. I shouldn't have called her.

"Umm nothing. I just got back from the beach. You called me today?" I tried to make normal conversation so that she would ignore the fact that I called her.

"Yeah. How is your trip going?"

"Good good. Listen I will talk to you later I am too tired right now." I don't know why I called my mom and now I don't know what made me not want to talk anymore.

"Good night sweetie. You know I'm here and so is your dad if you need anything right?"

"Night mom. I'll see you soon." I terribly miss home right now. I just want to go home and stay in my room. Why do I feel like I want to away from Virat. I don't want to see him anymore or even talk to him. He'll never understand me, he claims he does but he won't. How will he if I don't know it myself!

With so many thoughts in my head I finally fell asleep.

Virat's pov

I sat in the lobby waiting for Manvi. I called her several times but she never answered or called back so I sat in the main lobby waiting for her. I need to know what is going on in that head of hers.

"Viraaattt." One of the girls squealed my name making me flinch internally. What is Paige doing here? Last I heard she was going to Miami for the break.

"Paige." I nodded but my eyes were still looking for the one person who was ignoring me without any reason. Where are you Manvi?

Frankly speaking I don't even know what Paige was babbling about and I couldn't care any less. My whole energy at the time was focused on Manvi.

"Oh Virat you look so hot. I can't get over the fact. Have you been working out a lot lately?"

I gave her a are-you-out-of-your-mind look but she was way past noticing that. The girl was literally feeling my abs while simultaneously unbuttoning my shirt. God what has the world come to? Have some decency lady. I tried to get her hands off me but she was all over me.

"Manvi you are finally here!!!" I heard one of her friends exclaim and my eyes immediately wandered off to find her. There was Manvi standing by the counter wearing a light pink dress looking as beautiful as ever. It was a tube dress and she was showing just enough skin. How does she manage this every time? I mean look at Paige, if not for the feet long top and may be a feet and a half long shorts she'd be naked and yet she repulses me. But Manvi still manages to look hot in her knee length dress. Before I could kick myself for thinking that my best friend is hot, something else distracted me. Manvi looked at me and she looked hurt. Before I could even call out to her she left.

"Manvi Manvi." I pushed Paige off of me and ran after Manvi.

I finally caught up to her and pulled her towards me. Holding her shoulders I yelled at her, "What the f**k is wrong with you? I can't do this. I can't keep up with your ever changing mood. I am not a toy okay. You can't claim to be my best friend one day and then be indifferent towards me the next day."

I was extremely angry and I did everything I had in me to not yell at her more. Her staying quiet with lowered eyes was not helping me calm down. I held her chin roughly and made her look at me. The teardrops in her eyes unarmed me for a second; Manvi never cries. "What is it?" I asked her calmly- well as calm as I could get.

"I can't be friends with you anymore. I hate you." She yelled back before jerking my hands away. She began to walk away from me but I was not going to let her go without an answer. I caught her by the elbow and told her everything that was on my mind. I took out all of my pent up frustration, my disappointment on her, my family, everything out on her. In my defense she had no right walking into my life then ruining everything the very next second.

"Fine. LEAVE." I shouted. Pointing my finger at her I told her things that I know I shouldn't have ever told anyone. "News for you- I hate you too. You are just like my other family members. You made me feel wanted, loved, you acted like you cared and the second I started to trust you, you abandoned me. You are like everyone else Manvi. Forget about being friends with you, I don't even want to see your face. When I didn't look back once and acknowledge my own mother after she left me who are you. I swear to God after today you are dead to me. What else can I expect from someone like you- you disgust me. LEAVE because I HATE YOU."

Without another word she left, never to look back at me again.

After that day I didn't hear another word from Manvi. It was like she never existed. After spring break I thought I would see her in school but I never did. She went to London as a foreign exchange student and didn't even come to see me before she left. No phone calls, no emails, no messages nothing. After few months I graduated from high school too and went to East coast for higher studies.

SONG: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vf0qw6aVt_E

Busy as f to update my blog. i guess i'll use this forum for a while. thanks for ermm voting for me for best OS- means a lot to me.

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update.love virman pov.why manvi do this with virat.they are separta manvi in other school.can't for future update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting for future updates hope they realise that they are inseparable
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update.
they are separated. 😭😭😭
i wish they will meet soon.

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