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deepika padukone

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

nice update 👏
im loving all ur chap so far 👍🏼
dey r quite intriguing...keep writing

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krithika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

beautiful write up👏👏👏 loved it😃 continue the same

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srkfanaticism

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

awesome update👏👏
expecting megha's mirchi bhatnagar avtaar 😈 for darling addu😉 which i seriously missed in d show😛
continue soon

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rinku-b

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

An update finally! Nice episode. Do continue soon

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Moner_Radio

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

bgscribe :

sorry for the late comment in the first place. back to the update, it's good to see that Addu's misdeeds are being exposed gradually to his family . unfortunately, since this is Addu whom we are dealing with, this selling off the Bhatnagar house can only be the tip of an iceberg .. and i wont be the least surprised if i'm proven true. hope Beera and others doesnt spare him and gives him what he truly deserves and Mohan too gets so caught up in his Vasu image that he couldnt go to cover up Addu's misdeeds one more time.

update soon.

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

I will be updated next two parts tonight.

Thanks for your wonderful comments and More thanks for your patience.

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

I am way behind my schedule but will make it up. I am giving 3 updates today. Back to back.

I know this part is short but I didn't want to drag it. I am trying to finish it up before you lose your cool and I get busy with my exams.

Part 10:

As long as I am at home, I remembered Mohan. How nice it would have been if I could spend some time with him in this house? Shayad zindagi ko yeh manjoor nahi tha!

I visited NAM Foundation. I could tell by the feel that this was Mohan's life away from me. While I watched the boys playing football, Beera came to me.

"Meghaji, I went to bank for loan. Guess what I found out!"

"What is it, Beera? You don't seem happy about it."

"The issue is like that. The bank asked me to go to register office and bring a confirmation letter that that house belonged to Sirji and after his death, owned by you. When I reached register office, the tables turned on me. The records show that Sirji had transferred the house to Addu and after his death, last year, Addu sold it to someone else."

"But Addu never talked about it. Come to think of it, Mohan never mentioned the transfer."

"On top of that, my concern is, if Addu sold the house and got the money, why did he have to use Foundation funds? The house-sale was clean, then why commit fraud here?"

"Because the house was with his name; the foundation still runs on Mohan's name."

Could it be that Addu and Mohan kept a secret?

Edited by bgscribe - 12 years ago

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Part 11:

I have had enough of it. Past one week in the hospital had been nightmare.

The doctor said I had some minor fractures and some deep cuts. While I was recovering in the hospital, I expected my Nanhi didi to be by my side caring for her brother. After all, I came here and got into all that trouble for her. But no! While I was struggling with the treatment and medication, she was running around for her work. When she came to see e in the morning, she would say, I have some work, let me finish it soon then we can go back home. In the evening she would come to see me and say, today also the work couldn't get done. She has been stacking days. Had it been her Spiderman, she wouldn't have left his side even for a second. I have had enough with this workaholic sister of mine... or rather workaholic daughter of Mohan Bhatnagar.

I thought of calling home. I stopped myself from committing that blunder. If I told Ma that I was in hospital, she may get worried. If I told her that I want to come back home, she would be worried for Nanhi. Nanhi will not come back with getting her work done. After some debating with myself, I decided on not informing anyone. From my hospital room, I called the railway station and booked a ticket to Indore the next day.

When I got home, I saw Ma and Beera discussing something. Guru, as usual, was giving the displeased look. I had stopped trying to impress him long back. But today the look pricked me. Strange! The house was filled with silence. May be I felt so because Rimjhim was at school, Guru was listening to music through his earphones and Ma and Beera would probably be discussing about the family or Nanhi. I couldn't read the expression on their face when they saw me enter the house. After few seconds, the realization dawned on Ma that if I was in Indore alone, Nanhi must be in Mumbai still.

Ma, at first, shouted at me that I left my sister alone. I showed her the bruises and told her that my anger was only halting her work and I got into fights. So I decided to let her be.

Beera, as the henpecked husband, rose to his feet and announced that he will be going to Mumbai to keep Nanhi company and with both of them; they should be able to get work done quicker.

Nanhi is still in Mumbai for work or any other reason?

Edited by bgscribe - 12 years ago

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Part 12:

It has been a week since Addu got hurt. It has been a week that I met Spiderman, rather a person looking like him. It has been a week since I started working with ACP Sanghvi for my project.

Today he invited me for lunch. I usually met him at the station or he came to see me near my flat. The lunch invitation was out of blue. May be I too can relax and probably ask him about that Vasu Bhau now that I am getting to know him better.

I met him outside a restaurant and from there he took me to a nearby open space. I felt he wanted to tell me about something but wasn't able to decide where to start. So I initiated the conversation. "Do you know who this Vasu Bhau is?"

He looked at me as if he didn't expect me to ask that question. Instead of answering my question, he took out his mobile and called someone, "No, come now."

I asked him again, "Do you know Vasu Bhau? My brother is in hospital because of him. I need to know who it is otherwise I may not be able to leave Mumbai with the burden. Please. Do you know him?"

He kept looking down. A few moments passed. The silence around me was making me uncomfortable and I was about to leave the place when I heard a car stop at the road. The car door opened and two people came out of the car. They were none other than Vasu Bhau and his assistant. I turned to leave the place hastily but ACP Sanghvi stopped me. I didn't want to face Vasu Bhau and moreover ACP was also behaving strangely. I wanted an out from that situation. A word cut through the air and fell on my ears - Aye Chavanni! Sunna!

I turned to Vasu Bhau. Was I hallucinating? No it can't be. My Spiderman fell off the cliff and I saw it. Did he come back?

Vasu/Spiderman walked towards me and placed his hand on my head. "At last you found me, Nanhi!"

No, I wasn't hallucinating. He was my Spiderman. He IS! He didn't leave me. I hugged him and let my pent up tears flow. He hugged me back. After sometime, he separated me from him and wiped my tears, "Aye Chavanni! Rothi kya hai?"

Too many questions flooded my mind. Which one should go first?

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Edited by bgscribe - 12 years ago