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Chapter 60 - Shukran Allah

Feeling shy, she hid her face in the crook of his neck as they parted after that sensational kiss. Butterflies roamed in her stomach and there was no way she was going to face him after this. But Maan was not going to leave her now or ever. He bent and placed numerous small pecks starting from her forehead onto her hair parting.

Finally she looked up at him in reverence and he continued on to place wet smooches all along her jaw and neck line as she squirmed and wriggled in his arms pushing herself even closer...

"Kitna tadpati ho tum Mishty but you are the tastiest dish I have ever had..."

Holding her even tighter he captured her lips again not having enough of his favourite dish. Sensually, slowly he took his time exploring and plundering her sweetness which she willingly and eagerly offered to him. They broke for air but then he continued his assault and dipped his head further down sucking on to the hollow of her neck just above her shoulder.

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Shukran Allah wallah Alham dulillah

Nazron se nazrein mili to
Jannat si mehki Fizayein
Lab ne jo lab chu liya to
Aasmaan se barshi Duyaien

Aise apni mohabbat
Aise rooh-e-ibaadat
Hum pe Meherbaan Do Jahan

Shukran Allah wallah Alham dulillah

Geet gasped for sanity and with heartbeats going erratically crazy, her mind went into frenzy as she leaned to hold his head in the passionate moment. His wet moist mouth was making her utter erotically sinful words. Her chest was heaving trying in vain to rein in the desires now cruising entire length of her body and she blushed furiously seeing that from her angle, it almost felt as if he was nestled into her bosom.

Image of his face so close to her curves burned in her eyes and finally shyness overpowered her when she felt his tongue tasting her skin. Pushing him away slightly, she ran to the couch calming her raging breath.

Through her hooded eyes, she saw him approaching the sofa and plopping himself next to her. A small shy smile played on her lips to see him grinning so wildly as if cat got its cream. She knew that the colour of their love was clearly reflected on her face and waited for him to tease her further when he unceremoniously laid down, keeping his head in her lap. Placing her one hand in his hair, he held on to the other one pecking it.

"I feel so contented and happy...never knew life could be so beautiful again..."

Teri bahaon mein yeh jism khil gaaya
Teri Saanson mein chain mil gaya
Kaise rahein abb hum juda
ho ho
Teri Paas hum itne hue
Tere khwaab apne hue

Kaise hue abb hum fida

Aise uski inayat
Mit gayi har shiyaat
Hum pe Meherbaan Do Jahan

Shukran Allah wallah Alham dulillah
Shukran Allah wallah Alham dulillah

His simple words echoed such a deep meaning. He was truly home in the arms of his life partner. Geet just smiled at his gesture and fingered his hair softly while Maan relished the moment closing his eyes.

"Bahut thak gaye hain na"

"Hmmm...thoda thoda lekin ab acha lag raha hai...bas few more reports to review and then I will sleep in your lap."

Geet blushed slightly as he pulled the laptop on himself and started working still laying in her lap.

"Mein help karoon"

"Tum bas mujhe aise hi pyaar karti raho..."

Geet blushed at his demand. She kept on caressing his hair and silently observed how he was looking at project's details in multiple dashboard views and taking notes and action points. Maan carried on the review for few more projects when Geet noticed his droopy eyes.

After a long time, he was relaxed in her arms and affect of medicine was making him sleepy. Geet had enough of his stubbornness and snatched the laptop away from him

"Hey...kya kar rahi ho"

"Chup bilkul chup...bahut hua ab...ab thodi der rest kijiye. Doctor ne kam karne ke liye kaha hai lekin itna stress leno ko nahi...baad mein kar lena ab bas..."

Maan opened his mouth to argue but shut it seeing her half angry and half pleading eyes. She looked so cute and no way could he refuse to her "chup bilkul chup".

"Bilkul meri carbon copy hai"- Maan chuckled at his own thought as he decided to carry on his work later and take a nap for now. With Geet caressing his head, he finally drifted in a calm sleep.

Geet just adored his innocent face lying in her lap. Now she could observe and drool over him at her heart's content. She slowly took in his every feature and blushed beetroot when her eyes lingered on his lips. She could still feel the heat of their previous kiss and her inside stirred with the picture he made just lying there

"Haye marjaawan...kine sone lagde hain sote hue..."

With lips pulled by her teeth, she lusciously imagined herself touching and kissing his face. Shying with her own thoughts she looked away. Oh boy, she was a gone case and was so much in love. Today she felt like a teenager who was stepping into the world of love and romance. Emotions full of tender and passionate love were brimming inside her heart when her eyes went to the laptop on the table. Being inquisitive, she filled in the password (Maan had mentioned to her while working) and noticed his notes closely.

"Maan sir toh wahi sab parameters note kar rahe hain jis ke base pe maine priority select kit hi. Yeh thode kuch naye fields bhi hain. Mein na baki project ke note down kar deti hoon...phir unka kam aasan ho jayega and he can review it...waise bhi mein toh khali hoon...nahi toh aisa hi sab sochti rahoongi."

With little coyness and little concern, she started diligently to go through various projects and making notes for him. Soon she was lost in her work but still she did not forget to pat his head or peck his forehead in between letting him sleep calmly.

Maan got up after sometime feeling completely refreshed. Her hair was falling on his face making a curtain of sorts. He noticed her eyes which were scrunched up in concentration and then at her lips where she was chewing a pencil mercilessly. Maan smiled seeing her this avatar - "Yeh pencil...jab bhi iske muh mein dekhta hoon ise khane ko man karta hai". He looked at her mischievously when he realised she was focussing onto something seriously and followed her gaze.

He got up with start seeing her typing away merrily at his laptop.

"Geet yeh tum kya kar rahi ho?"

"Ek minute bas...ho gaya"

Maan looked at her open mouthed as she completely ignored him and continued the task at hand. Only after few seconds had elapsed did she realise whom she was talking to and turned to look at him.

Maan felt like kissing her senselessly the way she caught her tongue between her teeth and looked at him cutely...

"Sorry woh...mein bas kuch kar rahi thi...ab kaisa lag raha hai aapko"

"Bahut acha lag raha hai lekin aap kar kya rahi hain madamji"

"Nahi mein toh bas woh...I just thought I will make some notes in similar fashion as you were doing so that your work will reduce later...bas."

Being a workaholic, he was quite intrigued with what she was doing. He immediately started reviewing her work and was amazed at what she had done.

"You know Geet; I always thought you have lot of capability. And today it is confirmed that you are a natural manager who has instinct to observe, categorise and present the information in the right way. Your dashboards themselves were great but just by seeing what I was doing the reports you have made are really very good."

Geet beamed at the appreciation he gave and they both spent next few minutes with Maan explaining the things she had missed and objective of each report. He could clearly see her aptitude for business and management and he made a promise to himself to not only make her realise her full potential but to give her every opportunity to achieve it also.

Later in the night, they both went to KM where Geet bade Daadima bye. Naintara and Dev were missing from the scene but everyone felt it was for the better. Along with apologising for the evening again, Daadima asked her to stay back for dinner but Meera was waiting for her so she refused.

Maan walked with Geet till the door. As they passed the same corridor where Geet had pecked him yesterday, he jerked her closer to him...

"Good night to bolti jao Mishty"

Geet looked on at her love as he naughtily placed his finger on the other cheek reminding her where she missed last night.

Geet blushed and shook her head while he pouted at her denial. But then he was not the one to give up...

"Good Night Mishty"and with that he pecked her one cheek and then another.

She just looked at the floor and made run for the car waiting for her when Maan pulled her dupatta from behind

With abated breath she held onto the one corner while he held another...he pulled the dupatta slightly till she walked backwards. Her back was almost touching his chest when he leaned in to whisper his final bye

"Dhyan rakhna aur pahunchne ke baad phone karna aur haan kal subah shyam (driver) pahunch jayega. I will order a new car tonight but tab tak you use mine..."

Geet smile froze at his words. He was getting her dropped home tonight but then why should he buy her a new car.

"Nahi nahi Babbji yeh sahi nahi hai...how can I take advantage of him like this"

She kept on looking down but spoke her mind

"Please aisa mat kariye...mera matlab yeh thik nahi hoga...aise shaadi se pehle...car koi choti cheez anhi...itna expensive gift mein kaise le sakti hoon...mein nahi kar paungi."

She waited for him to say something when she felt his hand on her shoulder. He turned her around and lifted her chin with his finger.

She noticed pain in his eyes but still there was a smile on his lips. If he had right to complain then he had right to forgive too...

"Thik hai Geet...shaadi ke baad toh pati patni ka sab kuch ek hi hota hai - tan man dhan - and money is the lowest of it all nahi...lekin bas ek baat batao...yeh kab hota hai"

Geet looked at him confused when he repeated his question again

"Bolo na Geet...when does a man and woman become life partners who can share everything...when they exchange garlands, when they take vows...ya phir jab mangalsutra pehnate hain...ya only after sindoor is put. But even at that point there could be hesitation nahi, so when...when they consummate...when their hearts are one...lekin kabhi kabhi yeh dono cheez nahi hoti phir bhi woh ek hote hain...toh bolo na Geet what is the switch...the trigger when this happens.

Maine toh isiliye kaha because for me you are my life partner...I may not have put sindoor or mangalsutra but for all purposes said, I have written my life with you. But if that is the trigger then I am ready to do it now...so you tell me when will I become that person who is part of you Geet...jiske upar tumhara haq hoga...pura haq...bolo Geet bolo"

Tears brimmed in her eyes as she once again glimpsed what their relationship meant to him...his heart was like ocean of love for her...boundless

She hugged him tight, taking in his essence inside her...

It took her a minute or two to control herself but when she finally did, she could only murmur this much

Tere saaye mein mili har khushi
Teri marzi meri zindagi
Le chal tu chahe jaahan
haan haan
Meri aankhon mein
Nazar Teri Hain
Meri Sham-o-seher Teri Hai
Tu jo nahi to mein kahan

Khil gai meri kismat
Paake teri yeh chahat
Hum pe Meherbaan do Jahan

Shukran Allah wallah Alham dulillah
Shukran Allah wallah Alham dulillah

"Maan sir...please choti gaadi lena...mujhe aadat nahi hai na isliye and it will be comfortable for Meera too..."

Maan smiled as she parted and looked in his eyes with all the love in this world.

Tiptoeing on her feet, she placed a kiss on the cheek he had shown earlier

"Good night"

With that she walked outside still looking at him as he waved her bye.

Precap - Sajda

Beautiful update. maan's recognition and appreciation of geet's work/talent is very much needed boost for her confidence. the way he described her as life partner is awesome. each and every word of his is superbly written.once again need to mention your writing skills...very well done👏

This was such a sweet and romantic update...loved it...wish such moments could have been seen in the serial too,,,,,,,awesome😊

Beautiful Update I hv ever read..
Loved the song Superb !
Continue Soon...

lovely update maneet moments are just superb their kiss and geets submission to his kiss and maan sleeping on geets lap and geets drooling on maan kya kahoo everything just lovely.

the best part is the last one when maan said the meaning of actual relation between two souls.

Wow..wow hats off to you ritzi di..kaise karate ho ap? Omg mera ab tak ka sabse fav.part..mera fav.song n jodi..maaneet romance on the peak...nd maan,i dnt knw whether these kind of persons are exist or not..bt i startd dreamt abt maan..maan n geet pyar ke do labz..ritzi di i want to hug u..nd behalf of my mom also cuz she is very much happy cuz she is still reading update..waiting for next