Ariya OS-Gum Sum ho kyun pass aao naa....!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I knw u people must b thinkng ki yeh ladki apna ff toh continue karti nhi h aur ek aur story lekar aa gai bt kya karun guys kuch din se bahut busy hun lot of wrk pressure isliye updt nhi de paa rhi hun isliye sry plz give me sum more time n tab tak njoy dis plz n so thgt ki kam se kam ek compensation hi de dun so here is an os 4 u guys actually yestdy i heard dis song of shann gum sum ho kyun n i jst luvd it n dis thgt came 2 my mind isliye thgt of penning it dwn bt sry if not live up 2 d expectatn coz aaj se pehle kabhi koi os nhi likha so plz bear wid me n my writng sry 4 d spelling mistake...


Arjun n riya r happily married now 4 almst an year n r madly in luv n d entire etf is happy 4 dem n der lifes r moving on happily...bt 1 dy a case came 2 etf n u knw naa our super cop ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte case solve karne ke liye apni jaan ki parva bhi nhi karte n dis made riya hell upset n worried n shez not tlkng wid arjun n our poor arjun apni jaan ko yani riya ko manane mein lag jaata h kaise...??? dekhiye...!




ETF office Afternoon 4pm




Aft d case is solved d entire team came bck 2 etf offc bt every1 knws dat riya is hell upset wid arjun n arjun poor guy lukng at riya ki atleast ek baar toh woh uski taraf dekhein bt riya unhunnn...not lukng 1nc also at arjun n d others r jst giving sympathetic luks 2 arjun coz dey knew aaj toh arjun ki band bajegi whereas arjun was thnkng ki riya se baat kaise karein...? den




arjun: riya zara woh file dena...!



n forwarded his hand bt riya woh file lekar uske samne desk pe rakh deti h n arjun is lk wht d...?



whereas others wer trying 2 control der laugh (ab roz roz yeh sab thode hi dekhne ko milta h) n den arjun stood up n said 2 riya ki




arjun: riya yeh file meri cabin mein lekar aana




n b4 riya cld protest he left riya jst controlled herself n left wid d file 2 arjun's cabin n aft dey left our choree




shree: dekh lena chotu aaj toh pakka arjun sir ki band bajegi...!




chotu: aur nhi toh kya dekhna ri kitni naraaz h



den suddenly



rathod: woh toh hoga hi coz agr woh arjun suryakant rawte h toh riya mrs. arjun suryakant rawte h ab toh baghwaan hi bachaein arjun ko...ab chalo tum log apna kaam karo



choree: jee sir




In arjun's cabin:




Arjun was sittng on his chair watng 4 riya dats wen she enterd kept d file wid a bang on d desk 2 which arjun got shckd bt recoverd quickly whereas riya strted leavng wen arjun hld her hand n pulled her 2wrds him n she landed on his lap she tried 2 move bt arjun hld her waist tightly n said



arjun: jaan plz...m sry itna gussa ho ki meri taraf dekhogi bhi nhi...?




riya: (stopd strugglng bt widout lukng arjun said) mein kyun aapse gussa hone lagi...chodiye mujhe n tried 2 getup bt arjun said



arjun: gussa nhi ho toh meri taraf dekh kyun nhi rhi ho?



riya: aisa kuch nhi h chodiye mujhe




arjun: jaan plz mein...(cut shrt by riya)




riya: (wid tears brimmng her eyes) plz arjun chodiye mujhe...plz



n lukng at her face n tears arjun left her n she ran out of his cabin



arjun: m sry jaan i knw ur upset coz meine apna dhyaan nhi rakha i knw ki agr mujhe ek kharoch bhi aayi toh tum bardasht nhi kar paati n aaj tumhe isliye itni taklif ho rhi hogi par mein kya karun its our work m sry bt i promise ki mein tumhe manakar hi rahunga...i promise (wid a little smile crept on his lips)




N after dat d entire day arjun tried 2 tlk 2 riya 2 manofy her bt riya ignored him n kept herself busy in other works n aft sumtime rathod orderd 2 leave as d dayz off n every1 left 4rm offc




ariya left 2gether in 1 suv bt riya din'tspeak a wrd riya kept lukng out of d window n arjun was having glances of her even he tried 2 say sumthng bt riya din't answerd d whole journey went lk dis n dey reached home riya straight awy went 2 der room 2 get freshen up whereas arjun got an idea 2 manofy her... aft 1 hour riya came out of d room n was shckd 2 see d dinning area decorated beautifully



den she saw arjun cmng 2wrds her he came in frnt of her n went down on his knees holding his ears n said "SORRY JAAN"




riya was so touched by all dis she wnted 2 hug him bt suddenly she remembered hw he put his life in danger during d case n tears started brimmng in her eyes n she turned arnd 2 leave bt arjun hold her hand n stood up n started singing


Gumsum ho kyun paas aao na

Ruthe ho yuun maan jaao na

(turned her 2wrds him)



Gumsum ho kyun paas aao na

Ruthe ho yuun maan jaao na

(cupped her face n)



Dil mein hai jo, khul ke kaho

Dil mein chhupaao na

(she put his hand down n strted leavng bt he held her agn n)



Gumsum ho kyun paas aao na

Ruthe ho yuun maan jaao na

(she freed herself n left 2wrds d window arjun went bhind her n hugged her n hugged her 4rm bhind)


jaane kis baat pe tum aise khafa ho gaye

Shaayad anjaane mein koyi mujhse khata ho gayi-2

Bas itna toh bata do ke meri kya bhool hai

Phir chaahe jo saja do mujhko woh kubool hai

(he kissed her neck n she closed her eyes feeling his luv n)



Kuchh toh kaho chup na raho aise sataayo na

Gumsum ho kyun paas aao na

Ruthe ho yuun maan jaao na

(bt den she opened her eyes n broke d hug n went 2wrds d dinning table n closed her eyes as if tryng to reduce her pain whereas arjun turned 2wrds her n)


tum jo hasati ho toh yeh mausam muskuraata hai

Kaliyaan khilati hai saara aalam gungunaata hai - 2

Tum jo hasati ho har sitaara jhilmilaata hai

Mere dil ka sheher khusi se jagmagaata hai

Dekho kabhi rona nahin, mujhko rulaao na

(n riya turnd 2wrds arjun n arjun agn went on his knees n hold his ears)



Gumsum ho kyun paas aao na

Ruthe ho yuun maan jaao na

Dil mein hai jo, khul ke kaho

Dil mein chhupaao na

gumsum ho kyun paas aao na

Ruthe ho yuun maan jaao na - 2

Gumsum ho kyun...




n aft dat riya can't hld herself more n ran 2wrds arjun...n bend down n hugd him tightly n he 2 hld her tightly n stood up




riya: plz arjun phir kabhi aisa mat kariyega aap jante h naa ki mein aapke bager nhi reh skt iphir bhi aap humesha apni jaan khatre mein daaltein h kyun...? agr aaj apko kuch ho jaata toh aapne socha h mera kya hota (n was sobbing badly)



arjun: shhh...shhh jaan plz rona band karo i promise aaj k baad aisa kabhi nhi karunga plz stop cryng u 2 knw naa ki tumhare aansun mujhe kitni takleef deti h isliye plz rona band karo



n dey stood lk dat 4 don't knw hw much time consolling each other n sharing der feeling wid each other den 2 lighten d mood arjun said partng d hug



arjun: ab dinner kar lein mujhe bahut bhuk lagi h (wid puppy dog face)



riya: (laughing) hmm...aapne subha se kuch nhi khaya hoga na chaliye


n dey had der dinner 2gether spending sum romantic time wid each other promising each other not 2 hurt each other ever n lovng each other till der last breath...


{ piu }

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
ariya os... waiting eagerly..
title very interesting

so beautiful and romantic..

thanks for the wonderful os
Edited by pinkerbell - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow i like the title...

shan song and also my fav.

waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
very sweet
loved it 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Piu darling.
Superb and really beautiful.
I just loved it.
Loved the way how Arjun was manaofying Riya.
Made my day.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sweet simple story... loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful OS Piu...
Loved it so much...!!!
The wayArjun manonify Riya was so cute...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice os Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS...
So romantic...

Thanks for PM...keep writing...😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww such a sweet and cute os...
love the way arjun manaofied riya... and the song is lovely...
loved the os...

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