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Pravesh.P thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Another Awesome update Poo Keep it coming.
Could visualize Mohan's and Megha's expressions.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Awww so cute
Mohan is so sweet
great going

cheers
Yashi

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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Tempting..! :D
Loved it.. Monday, come soon..! :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Thanks Pranay 🤗!

Hiya Kirthi 🤗! Yeah if not MM's original baby, any baby for MM to have cute moments with the baby from day one!

Anu, yes Ma'm! 👍🏼

Hey Sakhi 🤗! Mohan is so inspiring, that any character with simplicity and subtle emotions suits him very well! Yeah I could imagine the actor playing this part flawlessly giving the life into the character as always ! Here comes Monday again!!! 😃

Pratiksha 🤗! Just giving time off for the weekend so that you can enjoy the Monday episode afresh! 😃

Thank you @AJlovesArshi! 😊

Angeala! Babies are always cute 😃! Mohan being equally cute is the essence here !

Jonaki 🤗🤗! Hope you are not mad at me anymore! 😃Just to have Monday thru' Friday sweet instead of overburden 😉! Relax the weekend, girl! 🤗

Thanks a lot @Meghan27 😃

Shourie 🤗🤗!!!! Yeah indeed a splendid thought thinking otherwise 😉! Mohan is yet to know a lot but he becomes the big daddy without knowing anything about the process of becoming daddy! 😳😉😆

@Maanvir! Thanks for your dreams and wish they come true!

Thank you @Spidie! 😃

@purplelolo! Thank you dear 😃! Happy to know about your interest in the characters and desire to get more of them! Hope I can feed to the desire satisfactorily 😊! Thanks for letting me know, I will try my best! 🤗

Thanks Purvi! 🤗

Peu girl 🤗🤗!!! You are here finally🥳??!!! Too good and a grand welcome 🤗! You missed it for good and now enjoy the bliss of not having to wait! BTW unreserve it to post your actual comments on the FF! 😃😆

Thanks Jia! 😊

Hiya Dharu desi girl 🤗🤗! How are you dear? And you are in pink!!! Congrats girlie! 👏 Happy that you managed to hit the page and liked it too 😃! Continue reading, girl! 🤗 Hope to catch you on MMT soon!

Hiya Pravesh 🤗! MM are the expression masters! They make any simple story beautiful and awesome with their simple presence in it!

Thanks Yashi, Champ!!! 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
poo please update soon...😳
sorry for being impatient😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Hellooo lovely people 🤗!!! Hope you had a wonderful weekend!!! I thought of waiting till evening to post the next chapter but here I am with it early...
Purvi, you gotta treat me for this! 😉😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter Six

Megha didn't expect him like that lest any gifts from him.

She said "Hi"

Mohan didn't think he had seen anything lovelier than the scene in front of him. Megha was in her tender and soft outlook holding a pretty pink baby

He forcibly dragged away his staring eyes from her. "For the new baby!" He said laying the flowers and teddy on the table

"She's beautiful" He said looking at the baby

"Thank you" Megha couldn't express her wonderful feelings and the happiness she had been filled with. All the months of worry had vanished away when the little angel had been laid in her arms.

"I too think so! Nanhi is the prettiest"

"You both look perfectly pretty and lovely" He steadied his look on them then quickly recovered asking "When can you go home?"

"May be tomorrow, as the delivery was normal"

"That's too soon!" He frowned "You should stay here for a month or more. Just to make sure that the baby is alright"

She smiled at his protective instinct and shook her head hopelessly, at his lack of knowledge

"That's not needed. It's a very normal procedure. Moreover I would go crazy"

Mohan moved closer to the baby and touched her hand

"She is so small"

"Three kilos and two fifty grams, you know" Megha said proudly

"She must be a strong girl like her mother" He said with a smile

"Strong enough to trouble you" Both laughed

All at once, both went silent thinking how easily they conversed like a couple and shared the thoughts for the baby. They looked into each other's eyes and felt a bond developing. She was scared. He was excited.

Mohan sensed the doubts in Megha and swiftly turned his head looking around the hospital room

"So what's next?" He asked

"What next?"

"You didn't want to live in the paying guest with other girls now and wanted to move into your own house. But I have spoiled all your plans..."

If only she had delivered the paintings to the hotel would the owner have made the down payment for the house. She wouldn't have had any worries about having no place to go. But she didn't want to sound helpless

"Let us see" She said

"Do we have a little new comer in the town?" An elderly woman walked into the room and headed directly to the baby "Oh, Megha! She's very cute"

"Thank you, Shashi aunty"

The lady took the baby in her arms and Mohan found it discomforting, with the idea. He wanted to take the baby and hand it back into the safe arms of Megha. As he worriedly looked at Nanhi in the rough arms of the elder woman, her glance set on Mohan

"Who is this handsome boy?" Shashi asked

"This is Mohan Bhatnagar from Mumbai. Mohan, this is Shashi aunty, owner of Taj Mahal hotel" Megha introduced

She smiled at him widely and asked "Do you stay in Alibag? I haven't heard your name around"

"Hi! I just stayed in the hospital last night. Not certain about going forward" He tried to throw a smile but his thought of the baby hanging in her arms didn't let him

"You are welcome to Alibag"

"Thanks. Isn't it time to give the baby back to Megha?" Mohan was still looking at Nanhi

Shashi looked surprised at the authority displayed by him. She gently placed Nanhi back on the bed and asked "So what is your story?"

Mohan was finally in ease. "It's a funny story how I and Megha met. I drove my motorcycle, to make enough damage on a beautiful painting that was meant for you"

"Good God!"

Mohan bravely confessed further "When Megha gets back, I would like to be Nanhi's Nanny, so she can work on the painting again. I should have been the one working and she relaxing with the baby; but I think it's better to have the master handle the art while I can do something on my part. She says it may take about three months"

He was relieved to be back in the negotiation part and decided to make it work, at whatever cost

"Are you willing to do that for someone you have just met?" Shashi asked doubtfully

He glanced at Megha who was looking at him carrying the same question in her eyes

"Isn't life at its best to have you holding a baby?"

The women in the room were looking at him in awe unsure of the man talking about an unknown role for him. They hoped that he knew what he was getting into.

"By the way Megha, I got the house for you, already"

Megha's eyes filled with gratitude "I don't know what to say and how to thank you. This means a lot to me" Shashi hugged a teary eyed Megha

Shashi grabbed Mohan out of the room and asked "Now you young boy. Are you sure, you are going to keep up your promise?"

"Yes, I am sure"

"That's good! She's one special girl out there. You won't be needed here tonight. Can you come with me to get the house thing done?"

"You lied about buying the house?"

"Not really. I know the owner of the house and it will be easy to make the arrangements done"

"Can I make the down payment?" He thought he would feel better if he could. Paying for the house was the best way to replace what he had ruined for Megha

"Are your intentions safe, young boy?" She squeezed her brows at him

"How about proving it? I will get the house readied for the baby!" Mohan grinned eagerly

Edited by Senpoo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
🤗aww...Poo...Monu already in Majnu mania😳😳 loving it
a tight hug for u 🤗
Nanhi ka Nanny aka Spiderman is fully charged 😳abh b se😃
Monu at again unknowingly surrender hogaya hai maa😳 aur beti ki chakkar mein
Monu ka pyar bhara intentions humesha safe hi hota hai mirchi ke liye
superb poo...as usual 👏👏👏👏
Edited by raokrithika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Poo what to say the 2 day wait was truly rewarding.
Another wonderful update. So good to see same selfless Mohan again
So Megha has also started to loose her control of emotions. Hmmm.
I know it may be your suspense, but could not resist asking, Is the character Shashi like jiji bua.
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.



Edited by Pravesh.P - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Amazing parts poo👏
monu's irritation at d aunt holding nanhi😆 typical father😳
I felt he wud soon snatch d lil one from her hands😛wonder how megha is gonna handle these two kids😆

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