~*~ AkDha - Ultimate Love STory ~*~Part 2 Updated Nt on Pg4

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Hey friends.😊.I have made a story of Jodha- Jalal which is totally my own work. I have made it the way like I wished. May be there are factual errors but its totally a work of fiction. No resemblance to any real life character😆. (lol I am sounding like TV disclaimer ) Anyways ,, Hope ya like it!! 😉 I am going to make this story seriously very romantic!!
Part 1 :

Jalal, Jodha, the ministers and their soldiers had just arrived Agra after Jalal-Jodha's Marriage. It had been very tiring after returning from Amer. Hameeda Begum welcomed Jalal and Jodha. She was so happy after seeing her new Bahu. She prayed to Allah in her mind, that may be now Jalal will be changed slowly by Jodha and become a kind hearted Man.
Jodha was already fuming in her thoughts. She was unaware of the welcoming rituals around her as she was still in shock that she got married to an Enemy. But, anyways, then she smiled seeing Hameeda who was kind and happy. Jalal's expression was almost nil. He had no interest in this marriage.
It was night time. Jodha was sitting in her chamber. She was angry and scared at same time.
Angry because she didn't even want to see Jalal's face but now she was his wife. Scared, as she knew that Jalal could come anytime in her chamber , as it was marriage's first night. She had took a dagger in her hand and hid it in her dupatta.
Suddenly, she heard footsteps and was scared and tensed again. She was determined that let whatever happen, she would not allow Shahenshah to touch her. SHe was surprised to see Hameeda Begum there.
Jodha - Ammi Jaan! You here?(smile and tensed both)
Hameeda - Jodha beta! I know you hate Jalal. I know how painful it is for you to live life with him now. But beta, I want to tell you that Jalal may seem ruthless and cruel but there is a lost child inside him. He has a soft heart which is yet to be discovered. His upbringing has made him so harsh and stone-hearted! Beta, I will not force you for anything but I still expect that you will help me in changing Jalal to better person. I hope you wont disappoint me.
Hameeda Begum left her room. Jodha was tensed and shocked.
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That's all for Part 1.
Hope you people like my imagination. Guys I will not disappoint you.
Index :
Part 1 - Page 1
Part 2 - Page 2
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Posted: 12 years ago
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welcome to the forum dear...😊
its a nice start... do continue...


will be waiting for more😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😊Thank you so much SShreShthA ... Its really overwhelming ...thanks ..I am very happy that altleast one person liked it..thanks again...sure I will continue.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow nice😊 plz continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyy itsss awsomeee!!!..
do pm wenever u update!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank U so much dear friends.. I don't even know how to thank you for my first story .. U guys have made my day today,, but I don't know whats PM?? I mean, when I update story,, How do I message you all?? Plz tell me more... 😊😉😕 Special thanks to people who liked and replied.. I am so happyyy😊😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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do cotinue dear...want to read more on jodha and her dagger😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2 :
Jodha remembered Hameeda's Words that He was not so cruel if only his soft heart would be discovered. ANyways, She was in her thoughts when she saw Jalal entering the room. She was scared. She tightened her grip over dagger. As Jalal came closer, She lowered her eyes.
Jalal was mesmerised with her beauty. For a second, he forgot that Jodha hated him. He forgot that even he didn't have any interest in her. As he came and sat near her,
Jodha - Wo..WO Shahenshah.. I Have a request.
Jalal raised his eyesbrows.
Jodha said, She is happy that he accepted his condition of worshipping her Lord Krishna. She has another request. That...That She will not allow him to touch her till she approves him. Jalal's eyes angered.
He got up and said - Alright Begum Jodha! Even I am not interested!
As He turned to go away , Jodha held his hand and said - Hame Maaf kardi jiye Shahenshah! I know that I am violating ritual but I am sorry. I am not ready. But I want to respect Ammi Jaan's feelings. She remembered how Hameeda said that she expects a lot from Jodha. Jodha said to Jalal - Please stay in this room. Only for Ammi Jaan's feelings. But there will be nothing between us.
He agreed. (althought he thought why he is agreeing to her)
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Part 3 coming Soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice work!
A job well done..
Continue soon and pm me if possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😉Sure friends.. I'll really write a good story and you'll all enjoy it!!

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