MG FF-Winter Sonata-Thread 9 - Page 19

maaneet so cute

wow nice part di really loved it soo much and ths song was good selection must say maaneet bonding was getting strong with these stones called dev tara

Loved the update di so much,,,,
Thank god dadi and maan came on time and gave nicely to nt n dev...
uff now they will seek help from their mother and tried to harm geet...oh no...
loved maaneet's emotional yet lovey dovey talks, song selection was also awesome...
pls update soon...

Eagerly waiting for the update!!!

Chapter 57...

Awesome up-date...
Loved it...
Made me very nostalgic...
Took me back to the good old days of GHSP...
Thanx for pm dear...

Chapter 58...

Mindblowing update...
Hats off to Dadima and Maan...loved the way they told off Dev and NT
Waiting for more...
Thanx for pm dear...

Originally posted by: Shruthe

Eagerly waiting for the update!!!

Thanks Shruthe and Ash for the banner

Thank you all for such nice comments. One thing I felt was that most of you think Dev-NT to be just jealous people who will probably make things difficult for Geet. This chapter will clarify further but Dev-NT are based on the original Dev-NT (beginning episodes). So they are sinister and not involved in just petty kitchen politics. They mean real business and are as greedy as it gets. On other side Maan is duty bound by his promise to his late mother and Geet is based on character of Krishna - the woman who forgave her husband while she was terminally ill. The way characters may behave will not be ideal and I am sure there will be a time when you would want Maan to go berserk but Maan here will be bound by his maryada and if he falters ever then Geet herself will never let that happen.

On a very different note, Avi, thank you so much for helping me with song selection. As a matter of fact I had a feeling that I was lacking something since I came back from vacation. But yesterday reading your updates inspired me and I feel fresh and rejuvenated.

All - Please do try Avi's FF. It is one of the best stories I have read with so much romance - sweet and spicy mixed with thrill and music. It has so many shades that every chapter will entice you into a different world. I feel sad when I see less likes for such a brilliant piece of work. It is a shame if we don't support writers who take courage to write and then do so well. If you have faith in my recommendation, I will suggest you read this story and I can guarantee you that you will not be disappointed.

Link - The Locket by Avi - Thread 1

Dumas - dear, I did not translate because Hindi dialogues were very less. Check this update out if and I will translate if you feel it is tough to understand.

Madhuri53 - Are yaar DD sirf Maan ho sakta hai...and yes Avi's and my Tara are like poles apart...

Chinni - Welcome back dear

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Chapter - 59 - Ek Tera Saath

Pammi was gravely worried hearing all the happenings from Dev and Naintara. But she was not the one to take any step in haste. Her every move was part of a well thought plan and executed perfectly and hence she gave strict instructions to Dev and NT to not do anything rash and just go with the flow. She knew very well that any wrong action can be counter productive especially if Maan found out about it. Kids nowadays could be hot blooded and this could land them in more problems

"Humari baat dhyan se suniye Dev...hum khud wahan aa rahein hai aur tab tak tak koi galat kadam nahi..."

"Thik hai mom...aap aa jayie...lekin mein ab bhi yahi kehta hoon ki is engagement ki announcement se pehle hi us Geet ko...

"Oh please Dev...aap toh rehne hi deejiye. You got two chances but kya hua...isi mahine ki baat hai na...aap to ek truck accident tak thik se nahi karwa paye...you were so sure that he will not be able to survive it but lol behold he is not only alive but marrying also"

"What the hell can I do if he is born with nine lives and that Geet...I am sure she is the Mishty who gave him new life...but this time I will not leave both of them..."

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QuvzuiEygX4&feature=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

Link - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QuvzuiEygX4

Ek tera saath,

ek tera saath, humko do jahan se pyara hain
Tu hain to har sahara hain

Na mile sansar
Na mile sansar, tera pyar to humara hain
Too hain to har sahara hain

"Shut up both of you. Ek baar phir keh rahe hain...keep quiet and don't do anything till we reach there. And Dev, you need to calm down. Hum log isiliye safe hain kyonki no one has related Maan's this accident with the one which happened two years back...but if anything happens to him now so soon then...don't forget he is Maan Singh Khurana. He and that Savitri Devi both are very well connected...one mistake and if they are alerted, they will leave no stone unturned to find out the truth.

First thing ask that truck driver to remain underground for at least three more months...hum Geet aur us Maan ko kabhi apna haq cheene nahi denge...yeh waada hai aap dono se...but be vigilant and watchful...hum wahan aake sab thik kardenge...now it is time for my return to India...

Geet...bahut badi galti kar di hai tumne...bahut badi...Maan ke saath tum apni bhi zindagi mitane aayi ho..."

Outhouse

Meanwhile everyone was working hard in outhouse but it was quite a taxing job for all. After all it was lot of effort for Adi because he was working sincerely, lot of pain for Sasha to focus on the job at hand especially with MK not giving her any attention, very hard for Maan to concentrate on anything when his Mishty was so alluring and distracting and poor Geet...she was just trying to breath without getting all red under his heated love filled gaze.

But what could bechara Maan do. First his eyes didn't seem to get enough of the mesmerising beauty in front of him. His heart still ached with want and if it was up to him, he would just hold her in his arms and run away from the world. And then even if he tried, it was like whole surrounding was filled with her aura and conspiring against him. Her every ada' was fuelling his desire and passion for her.

When she will be lost in her thoughts, the way she chewed on her pen made Maan's heartbeat rise to another level. Then when she will get the answer to her conundrum, twinkle in her eyes and the smile on her face will warm his insides. She would shift a little and write on the file and her bangles will make tinkle, filling the silence of the room with sound of her love. He gazed lovingly at those fair hands which adorned the same red bangles which he had himself made her wear yesterday and his heart burst with emotion "She was his and He was hers"

Hum akele hain, shehnaiyan chup hain,
To kangana bolata hain

She will walk from Adi to Sasha and her anklets will sing a song making his life full of music chun...chun...chun. It was as if his heart was a garden and his angel danced in there...

Too jo chalati hain, chhote se aangan mein,
Chaman sa dolata hain

His house had become a home today...after all the owner of his life had entered in it...

Aaj ghar hum ne,

aaj ghar hum ne, milan ke rang se sanwara hain
Too hain to har sahara hain

Maan's eyes were making all her senses tingle. Her eyes pleaded him for some respite but Maan...uh hun...he was not going to let her go today. Everyone seemed to be busy but even while managing that both Adi and Sasha stay engrossed, he didn't remove his chocolate eyes from her. She could feel his gazes on her...sometime caressing her face and sometime following her every move...it almost felt as if he was part of her...inside her.

Majboor from her heart, her insides melted with the way he was looking at her even with everyone around. But still her shyness was making her restless and worst were his silent talks like that one time when their eyes had met in the evening. She had avoided meeting his eyes whole day but when they did; her hazels were just pulled to the deep dark and mischievous chocolate brown ones. And then smack...just like that he had puckered his lips and blown her a kiss. Cheeks deep shade of red, she almost fainted with his gestures but then what else she could do other than crib to her Babaji

"Dekha aapne Babaji...dekha...kitna pareshaan kar rahein hain mujhe...haye mujhe to sharam ke mare dekha bhi nahi jaa raha"

Maan was enjoying his red Mishty and he just loved teasing her with his antics. Finally, few hours later, she left out a sigh when it was evening and Maan excused Sasha

"Sasha, you can leave now and work on these blueprints with your team. I need them all corrected by tomorrow morning."

Sasha was clearly miffed but she knew she was dismissed. She left glaring at Geet while Geet just wondered what did she do wrong.

As Sasha stepped out, Maan gave some instructions to Adi as well and then asked him to leave.

"Lekin sir Geet...she came with me and it will difficult for her to go on her own."

Maan's heart warmed up seeing Adi's care for Geet but there was no way he was going pass this opportunity of spending some quality time with his Mishty ALONE. Finally it was the moment he had been waiting for and he was not gonna let it slip.

"I am sure Adi, I can ensure her safety as well...don't worry but I need to work on new dashboard with Ms. Geet."

Adi gave a nervous laugh but knew better to stretch the topic and calmly left. Geet was feeling a little shy knowing she was now alone with her Maan sir and also little anxious as to what was going on in his mind when she saw him walk out after Adi.

Maan stopped Adi and glanced back to ensure Geet was not around.

"Adi, what happened to the report on Brij and Rajinder? It has been couple of weeks now and I am worried for Geet's safety."

"Sir I spoke to detectives today only. They have almost gathered all the the information and have promised to have complete details by next week."

"Hmmm...ok...just ensure they keep their promise."

"Ji sir...waise sir ek baat puchoon...aap khud personally kyon...I mean it can lead to problems for you also sir...let me handle it with police etc because if you get involved then it can become a media issue unnecessarily."

Maan would have been hell angry if someone other than Adi would have said this but he knew he had sincere concern for Geet and himself at heart when he spoke those words.

He sighed and decided to confide in the only person he trusted outside his family.

"Adi, actually...err...I don't know how to say this. First of all ensure no one knows about this not even Pinky...err I mean your family at least not yet...not till Daadima announces this formally but fact is that...fact is that just yesterday I got engaged with Geet. She is my fianc now and you probably know I mean you are probably the only one who knows I have always had a soft corner for her...fact is I liked her a lot and Daadima agrees with my point of view so we are engaged now...yes"

Adi had never seen his Maan sir struggle with words to say something but in the end when he finally heard the whole thing he was pleasantly surprised. As a spontaneous reaction he hugged the man whom he had seen languishing in loneliness and now happily tied up with the girl he himself regarded highly. He had always wondered why life played such a cruel game with her (Due to his talks with detective he knew her past) and was ecstatic that both Maan and Geet had found happiness in each other.

Maan was emotionally taken aback when Adi hugged him but then he was always like a brother for him. Only when Maan hugged him back, Adi realised that what he did. He came out quickly with beaming smile

"Sorry sir...woh...but a big congrats sir...congratulations to both you and Geet...if u don't mind can I go and wish her too."

Geet was surprised when she saw a visibly very happy Adi sir coming back.

He held her hand and wished her gingerly "Congrats Geet...I am so happy for you and Maan sir"

Geet looked at Maan seeking confirmation and as soon as Maan nodded she blushed looking down

"I still can't believe it and I promise not tell everyone till Daadima announces it but sach mein bahut khush hoon"

Geet smiled and bent down to touch his feet when Adi stopped her

"Yeh kya Geet"

"You are like my elder brother Adi sir...I need your blessings"

Adi smiled and caressed and her head "Tum dil ki bahut achi ho Geet. My blessings are always there with you...I only wish ki tum khush raho and I know Maan sir will take care of you aur saath mein Maan sir ko woh har khushi do jo woh deserve karte hain..."

Adi took his leave but as he turned Geet stopped him. She went inside bringing a bowl "Woh muh toh meetha karna chaiye na sir...kuch meetha nahi hai but I saw yogurt (curd) earlier...isliye meethi dahi..."

Even Maan was touched with her gesture...sach mein jaise ghar ki Lakshmi ne kadam rakha ho

Adi took the bowl when Maan made a face and spoke pouting "Yeh kya Geet...meri Mishty dahi kahan hai?"

Geet's cheek burned as Adi laughed at Maan's teasing. Sensing their need for privacy, he finished the bowl quickly and left wishing them once again. Needless to say that door had not even shut properly when Maan caged her in his strong arms...

"Maan sir!!!"

But Maan completely ignored her incredulous reaction- "Meri Mishty kahan hai Geet"

"Sir..."

Geet's breathing laboured in anticipation at his suggestive words. And soon enough, without wasting another second Maan proceeded to taste his Mishty. It was like he could not wait any longer and with urgency pulsing in his veins he just grasped her lips with his.

Geet was literally blown away with the hotness of his lips as they engulfed hers. His moist tongue played at the entrance and she didn't even realise when she started responding. Maan deepened the kiss feeling her passionate hold on his shirt and hair. Their bodies glued together as finally they quenched their heart's cravings.

Dekh aanchal mein kayee chandani rut ke
Najare bhar gaye hain

Feeling shy, she hid her face in the crook of his neck as they parted after that sensational kiss. Butterflies roamed in her stomach and there was no way she was going to face him after this. But Maan was not going to leave her now or ever. He bent and placed numerous small pecks starting from her forehead onto her hair parting.

Nain se tere is maang mein jaise,
Sitare bhar gaye hain

Finally she looked up at him in reverence and he continued on to place wet smooches all along her jaw and neck line as she squirmed and wriggled in his arms pushing herself even closer...

"Kitna tadpati ho tum Mishty but you are the tastiest dish I have ever had..."

Pyar ne is raat,

pyar ne is raat ko, Aakash se utara hain
Too hain to har sahara hai

Precap - Shukran Allah

main first aayii

awesome part...

the start was shocking... yes i too had thought that dev tara was just jealous of maan and are behind his property... but they turned to be such a dangerous as well as cheap people... they tried to kill maan not once but more times... and now the master mind pammi is to enter... am so curious to know what will this evil minded people will plan ...

hope sooner maan or dadima comes to know about all this...

loved chori chori chupke chupke romance by the two...

maan-geet-adi moment was lovely... loved geet when she offered kuch meeta to adi... though a small gesture, it showed her good heart...

naughty maan is always a treat to read... and here too maan trying to steal more moments with his mishty was adorable...

The start was so difficult to read

this means the accident was done by dev to kill Maan and they have been trying since long but neither maan nor dadima knows about it

and now pammi will be coming back.. wat will she do to geet.. will dadima let her inside or will they come to know

loved the way maan told adi and how he wished happiness for them