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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Thnx poo for d wonderful story...ur story compells me to visit d forum nw...

Keep up d grt wrk...

I wud love to b pmed...

I rmmbr u tuk d trouble of sending pmz fr ur previous ff bt m vry sorry i wz too busy to even rply to u

In dis ff u hv kpt updates sshort & sharp& dis is a totally difrnt concept...

Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Another amazing chapter poo..!! So the little angel is all set to mark her entry..! Lovely update..!
Eagerly waiting for the next epi..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kirthi 🤗, will you hate me, if Monu loves Megha sitting inside her own house??!! 😉😳

Oh yeah Pranay, The King 😃! I am privileged to have your likes and having you like the story! I am honored! 😆

Angeala - Thanks! Yes, I get the flashes of their faces too, everytime I pen down their dialogues and actions! Happy that you saw Monu's sexy smile in front of you! 😳

Pratiksha 🤗- Thanks dear for your patience! I will make sure that your wait is fruitful! 😃

Thanks Anu 🤗!!!! Which serial you are talking about?😕

Shourie 🤗🤗!!!! This greed is ofcourse very good and I'm happy to have stirred it in you! Hope to feed your greed well 😉!

Thanks Yashi! 🤗

Jonaki, Sure please share the links of your writeup! And I'm happy about you being greedy to get more of this story! 😃

Meg! Yeah little one's entry to make MM's life all the more special or confused 😉! Whom do you think is going to come? 😉

Sakhi 🤗!!! Thank you Thank you and Thank you!!! Happy to see you going through all these emotions!!! Keep it up, girl! It's good for health! 😃

Asmit! Thanks for your love and your wish to see it onscreen! Hope I can do better in getting more of your visual alive to keep up! Enjoy! 😃

Hilaa Leee🤗!!! Good job in doing a good back-to-back completion of the chapters 👏!!! Thanks for liking the characters and story! 🤗

Thanks a lot Pravesh!🤗

Maanvir 😊! Not a problem about the previous FF! I am happy that you were able to catch up with this! Sure will message you the updates! 😃

Thank you, Champ 🤗!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Poo...I cnt simply ignore u 😉 nor ur FF u knw that 😆
mujhe indirect line maro ing in direct heroine ki house mein reheke idea accha lagta hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Senpoo

Thanks Purvi for liking the new shades of MM 😊! I will be happy to keep their characters gripping enough for you to enjoy them throughout the FF! 😃



yup i am sure you ll grip them😃

ohhh.. mohan's smile and smirk😳😳😳
awesome blossom update...👏👏

eagerly watitng for the next update 😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter Five

Mohan froze at the announcement. Megha found it embarrassing. She expected him to run away at the first chance, considering the situation. He wasn't sure what to expect out of the situation but decided to take control of it.

"I will be more than happy to take you to the hospital but I don't think my bike is the right mode of transport for this situation" He turned to David

"I will drive her" David was prompt

Renu helped Megha into the van. Mohan supported her on the other side, trying to be of some help. He found her to be soft and great. He chided him for stirring such feeling for a woman in labor but ignored it.

"Hey man, you don't have to come with us" Renu warned him

"I am not. I will just follow behind on my bike. If you need anything like ice cream or pickles, I can get them"

Megha giggled. "I am past the point of pickles"

"Never mind. I will follow" He rushed to his bike

At the hospital, he hurried to help Megha walk inside. He found her so fragile that he thought he had upset her so much that she got into labor. He had had quite a different set of experiences during that trip but the current one made his heart race the fastest. He didn't know why but he felt like he was the one having the baby.

He had always wanted them in life - a complete family with a loving wife and adorable children. Engaged only for six months he and his ex-fiance fell apart for wanting different things in life. They parted ways smoothly, just leaving friendship continued without any romance. This trip had followed their breakup and he wanted to make time to think something for himself.

"And you are?" The nurse's question got him out of his thoughts

He saw Megha being checked into a birthing room.

"I am Mohan Bhatnagar. I just met the mother-to-be and..." He didn't know what else to add

"Oh, so you are Mohan! She had asked you go on your happy way" Small towns' advantage of knowing people personally

"Did she?" Mohan was disappointed

"May be Miss Vyas had meant to make yourself comfortable elsewhere, as this could take a while"

His disappointment faded. "Is there any room where patient's onlookers are waited?"

She grinned and showed the directions to the room. She added "You could be here for a while; you better see yourself to the canteen"

He didn't mind that. Hanging around was the least that he could think of doing. He doubted whether it was only obligation that held him back or was there anything to do with Megha herself. And he really wanted to ensure that she was going to be all right. May be he wanted to get a glimpse of the baby too.

He managed to everything that he could except for sitting at one place. He believed himself to be a calm and confident person handling any situation but this experience proved him wrong. He found himself in different shoes. And he felt nice about that.

"Haven't you gone yet?" Renu walked into the room where only one other attendant awaited along with Mohan

"I am just waiting to be sent for some parathas or pizza or whatever"

"I will not need any of those from you" She took a seat far away from Mohan

"Sure you won't. But Megha may need it" Mohan pursed his lips and controlled himself bursting out in laughter

David joined them accompanied by a woman with a duffel bag. He introduced her to Mohan as his wife

"I have got this throwing some things Megha had asked for" She pointed to the bag

"Is everything alright?" David sat next to Mohan

"I don't know. I haven't felt anything like this before"

"You think that you made her go through this?" David questioned him teasingly

"I don't know what I am thinking" Mohan confessed frankly

Few hours later, David and his wife left the hospital informing to come back after the baby's birth. Mohan didn't sleep as the night set in.

After fifteen hours, Megha held her new daughter close to her.

"She's beautiful" Renu said and added "That man is still waiting outside"

"Is he still here?" Megha didn't think that Mohan would stay around. He hadn't ran away at the first chance, as she thought he would do so

"Yes, brave fellow! He really believes that he pushed you into labor early"

Megha felt sorry for the young man who probably didn't know how such things worked

"Don't tell him that I said this but I feel sorry for him" Renu added and chuckled

"Renuji, if you don't mind getting him in..." She trailed off as Renu stepped out quickly

Mohan walked in, a few moments later, carrying a flower bouquet, a soft teddy bear tied with balloons and a beautiful smile on his face.

Chapter Six
Edited by Senpoo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Wow nice this keeps getting better
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
superb Poo...👍🏼
so ..."nanhi" pari aa gayi😃
Uff ...Poo NBTains ka sapna tume pura kiya 😉
Monu havng look at chotu baby in hospital😳 (ppl wanted ths scene b/w Meghan always rite frm ssn1 😉)
n Monu ka million dollar wala sexy smile 😳gazing at baby
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Please get them fast... u are pretty quick though!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update Poo! I can so imagine the myriad of emotions going through Mohan's face and I am so enjoying it. So we have our own version of lil nanhi here, I agree here with Vyas. This keeps getting better.

Ps why Monday is so far..., waiting eagerly for Monday once again.

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