Tu saanson mein hai..tu dhadkanon mein bhi tu (poem for Shantanu)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello guys...i know i m inactive here...but still i culdnt stop myself from posting this 😊
Wrote a few lines for SHANTANU MAHESHWARI 😳


Tu saanson mein hai tu
Tu dhadkanon mein bhi tu



Tu ANKHON ki ARJOO mein hai tu
Tu BARISH ki BUNDON mein bhi tu
Tu CREATIVES ki CRAZYNESS mein hai tu
Tu DANCE ki DHOOM mein bhi tu
Tu EFFORTLESS se EXPRESSIONS mein hai tu
Tu FANS ka FARISHTA bhi tu
Tu GEETON ki GOONJ mein hai tu
Tu HOTON ki HASI mein bhi tu
Tu IQRAAR ke IJHAAR mein hai tu
Tu JASBADATON ke JHANKAR mein bhi tu
Tu KHUBSOORAT si KHUSHIYON mein hai tu
Tu LAJAWAB sa LOVERBOY bhi tu
Tu MITTI ki MEHAK mein hai tu
Tu NATHKAT si NAUTANKI mein bhi tu
Tu OCEAN ke OYSTERS mein hai tu
Tu PYAAR ke PALON mein bhi tu
Tu QUITENESS ke QAMRA mein hai tu
Tu RISHTON ke RABTA mein bhi tu
Tu SMART si SHAITANIYON mein hai tu
Tu TAQDEER ki TASVEER mein bhi tu
Tu UNIVERSE ki UNPREDICTABILITY mein hai tu
Tu V ki VERSATALITY mein bhi tu
Tu WEAKLINGS ke WAJOOD mein hai tu
Tu XCLUSIVENESS ki XQUISITY mein bhi tu
Tu YAARON ki YARIYON mein hai tu
Tu ZINDAGI ke ZODIAC mein bhi tu

P.S: Qamra means moon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yeh kab likha😲
OMG shrutu🤗🤗

Outstanding yaar...
Perfectly describes swayam..
U stole my heart away..
Its just superb..
Tere charan kahan hai yaar..
Pranam tujhe..
Thoda talent mujhe bhi de de😆😆
Loved loved loved it👏👏

Yepeee mein first🥳
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just like ur pure heart...

Ur words are so pure...
They touch the readers heart..
And makes one smile from his heart..
As i mentioned before..
This poem is for PERFECTION PERSONIFIED to SWEETNESS PERSONIFIED...
Love u baby...ur sweetness and pure heart are ur biggest qualities...never loose the innocence in u 😳
Love u my sweetest heart❤️🤗
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

Yeh kab likha😲

OMG shrutu🤗🤗

Outstanding yaar...
Perfectly describes swayam..
U stole my heart away..
Its just superb..
Tere charan kahan hai yaar..
Pranam tujhe..
Thoda talent mujhe bhi de de😆😆
Loved loved loved it👏👏

Yepeee mein first🥳


thank u thank u thank u pasta...tera heart mere pass...chal ab mein woh jiju ko de dungi 😉

tu hi mujhe de de talent...mere pass kami hai uski 😭

i m glad ki tujhe itna pasand aaya n u luved it so much 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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di...meine aapke liye res kia hai 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Just like ur pure heart...

Ur words are so pure...
They touch the readers heart..
And makes one smile from his heart..
As i mentioned before..
This poem is for PERFECTION PERSONIFIED to SWEETNESS PERSONIFIED...
Love u baby...ur sweetness and pure heart are ur biggest qualities...never loose the innocence in u 😳
Love u my sweetest heart❤️🤗


awww di 🤗 🤗...ab mein kya bolu...aankhon mein asun hai...mein itni bhi achi nahi hun 😛

but i m glad that mera bhi koi work kisi k dil ko chuha...thanks di for this comment...aapko nahi pata yeh comment kya hai mere liye 😳...dil jhamping jhapang karing

luv u dher saara my dil touching di ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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shrutu dii kya mast poem likhi h yar...mindblowing...👏
i mean its just superb yar...😳
shaan har jagah aajkal bas cha raha h...😉
do write more dii...😊

Edited by bhavz_vrushan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shruts awesome poem re...

You very well described Shantanu...

Wonderful 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was awesome!!👍🏼
Perfectly defines Swayam
Luved it👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its awsum amazing
I luved it allooot shrutika aapi
Just perfect for SHAN
Mein toh aapki fan bangayi

Edited by sadafarsha - 12 years ago

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