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avni_barun

@avni_barun

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

OMG dis one is for ME only Me...

I am Sooo happy...

Look at my crazy dancing...

A tight wali jhapi...

Di I hope u know how much I love you but one thing you don't know is that coz of u only I became friends wid Astha Di, CC n Pooja...
And u inspire me to write as well...

Love u Hameshaaa Di... 🤗

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@whiterose29

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

A big fat RES

*Edited*

Gaah, I always blush after reading your OS ☺️ ☺️

Just loved it! <3

I'm reading an OS from you after a long time 😳 <33

Keep writing more SF Ji... Love you so much!

Yours WR Ji 😎

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avni_barun

@avni_barun

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

Wow Wow Wow itna besharam wala OS vo bhi sirf mere liye...
Tusi ta cha gaye Di...
This OS has topped my list of all the OS I have ever read...

9 years and still so besharam...This can only happen with Arshi and shown by you... 😉
Di sachi aapki fan ho gayi mein...
Maan jao Di... Start writing a novel...Change my name if it will not acclaim bestseller...
Your writing has all essence Di and its sooo Perfect...Every emotion, every situation, every action is described perfectly... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️

Back to OS...

Khushi was morning his name in sleep. I was wonderring what exactly she was doing in her dreams???

A true business man never leave unfinished business...I am glad he finished the unfinished deal before going for his meeting...I am proud of you ASR...

Arnav's wet form creates a mess in my head... ☺️

Arnav's torture was making me restless...

And of course a true business never pays heed to the place for finishing his work...Just an opportunity is enough and the storeroom can act as bedroom... 😉

This OS would have have been incomplete if Arnav would not have licked the chocolate from Khushi's face... 😉

I could not stop blushing in the entire OS... ☺️

Aashi is sooo adorable...I just love her...She has traits of both Arshi which makes her more loveable... 🤗

This one was the best surprise I have ever got...
Love you Dr. Jiji...
I will wait for more OS now...

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

😭😭

JIji humse dushmani achi naii😡😡

Itna hot os and wohh besharmo wala meri bholi bhali dii ka liye

Back to os jiji

Mar do garmi mein mjhe aap

Itna sexy os

Poor parents

aashi jo agyi

Addhi raat kov chain se nai sone deti heheheeh

Par arnav v armav hai hum subah subah tease karna strt krnge loll

And besharmi in the storeroom i mean mann gye raizadas koo

bahauuahahahah

choclate stain mitana ka naya tarika mjhe pasand aya

bloody meetin nai hoti toh intermissin nai hota

par ki parak penda hai

asr ki company hai meeting gyi tail lena

bii nai bhag jaye

Edited by Barun_Gf - 12 years ago

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Kinu22

@Kinu22

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Me
Hmmm..it was Chocolate & much more...
So Kitchen is their second bed room now a days & store room also...
Aashi always disturbe their intimate moments...
Lovely update...

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

badi dii😡😡

unrs by badi dii

Hawww... Wat ws IT??? 😲 😲 😲

I sooo luv d fact wen dey cnt keep dere hands off each other...

Aashi aka Whiterose, teri to nikal padi yaa... 😉 😆

After 9 yrs of marriage dey r still beahving lyk newly weds... I'm nt surprised... Wen 2 AJEEB ppl lik dem meet, IT has 2 happen... 😉 😳

Kitchen n Storeroom... Ahaan... I LUVD 'IT' ☺️

Chocolates added more sinfulness 2 IT...

Itna sensuous n scandalous Update sirf Avni k liye??? Mujhe bhul gayi JiJi???? 😭 😭 😭

Still, U knw I luv u n I'll always do... 😃

Luvd each bit of IT... 😉 😳 😆

Edited by Barun_Gf - 12 years ago

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sana48

@sana48

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

Mind blowing Os... 😳

read it with full of excitement... and at last i concluded... HAWWW... that's Naughty,Hot... and Romantic... ☺️

cant get enough of ur OS... 😉

I love it DAMM IT... ❤️

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Pas_love

@Pas_love

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

OH MY GOD!!!!! AAAHHH JIJIII THANK YOU...THANK YOU THANK YOU SOOO SOOO MUCH FOR THIS BESHARAM OS!!! Gosh do you realize its been a while since you've written such a sexy...hot BS??? I've been waiiting with baited breath...Awwwh the hot scenes and sexxxyyy arnav!! Not to forget the very willing Khushi :D I LOVE everything about that OS...
I hope you remember how i used to go all crazy when you wrote fan the flames and thosr earlier BS...i've been silent cz i didnt get my dose after that...NOW IM BACK!!! you poked the sleeping lion..hahahaa :D HOPE YOU'LL WRITE MORE OF THESE...IM REALLY HUNGRY FOR THEM...Keep up the writing Jijii..love you! <3