RishBala FF: Broken Ways - Part 19 - Page 125

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srik1

@srik1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Yippee...me first...prettyB, I am a great fan of u r VMs. Now I see, u write too good. This story is such a triller...keep updating...

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cool_sri

@cool_sri

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

nice update...what is Rk upto????

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

and the suspense builds!

More questions flashing in my head.

Nicely written.

(I was flashing back to the scene from the show where RK takes Madhu to the studio after the four phere shaadi. Madhu was wearing a green and yellow shalwar and I (sigh) oh so remember the possessive way RK held Madhu that time!)

Looking forward to the next part!

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ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#224

You are an amazing writer and the story is getting really interesting. Can't wait for the update. :)

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rekha

@rekha.366

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

amazing pritty👏👏, what is rk upti ,kya karna chaheha hai madhu ke saath😭 ,but i know as always tum hume surprise dhogi 😆😆. waiting for rk ki next karnaama😊