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Originally posted by: hima_taarey

👏haaye!!!

sooo nice nd ossom 1 yaar!!!
u kno wat... iss episode me sab kuch hai...
seriousness, anger, jealousy, pain, comedy, love... everything!!!
u r an allrounder!!!
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Edited by saadahaq - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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karan singh Grover as Asad
surbhi jyoti as zoya
Mohit sehgal as samrat
sneha kapoor as sharon
pratik kalsi as Vicky
shakti as kriya

We would like to thank all those people who liked n commented on our post...
A big hug too you all
n sorry for the late update

so here we continue...

Asad n zoya checks kriya's house
Vicky n samrat follows Rey
sharon handles kriya

As Sam n Vicky reach near Rey's house they see Rey moving lonely on the road.
They come out of their car.
Sam: Vicky tu handycam laya hai naa
Vicky : Haan video recorder naa???
Sam : Haan bahar nikaal usse..
Vicky takes out his phone n handles it to Sam
Sam : what's this???
Vicky : mera phone, isme hai video recorder..
aur mera phone 8 MP hai
kisi handycam se kam nai hai
Sam : hum Rey ke saamne phone bechne wale Nahi, reporters hain
tera phone leke video record karenge Toh kitne gareeb reporters lagenge...
It doesn't suit my image yaar...
Vicky: Toh tu mere Paas hi rehena as Jo bande mere saath rehete hain unke standards apne AAP rise Ho jaate hain..
Sam : Ab chal Rey ke Paas

They follow Rey slowly n quietly n suddenly Vicky shouts sammm
Rey turns back
sam slowly asks Vicky kya hua idiot? Chillaya Kyu??
Vicky : Woh mere phone Ki battery 50% reh gyi agar video record Karte hue phone band Ho gya Toh???
Sam : hum sachi mein reporters nai hai
Vicky: Ooo sorry
Rey: How come you guys r here???
Vicky : woh AAP itne ache dancer Ho AAP jhalak dikhlaa jaa mein Kyu nai gye??
Sam : (loudly)Vicky shut up...
(whispering voice) woh sirf mere jaise talented logon ko hi offer hota hai...
Sam : Rey actually hum aapka interview lene aaye hain for our magazine..
we would like to know about you, your dance academy
Vicky : and kriii
Sam stops him in between n says : and creativity...

Rey: Now??
Vicky : Aam, love aur Vicky sam ka koi season nai hota...

Sam : so let's start but not here koi achi aur shaant place jaise Ki beer bar
It's a few distance away...
Rey : Theek hai..
The trio reach the bar
When they sit there a girl comes there
Girl: I'm rimjhim.. Need any company??
Vicky: Rey kitna tanha tanha lonely lonely tere bin.
Sam : He is very loyal no chance here rimjhim
Rey Vicky n sam together: oh baaawariyaaa
Sam winks Vicky n they order vodka..
They force Rey to drink ..
n themselves too as they could not control...
Sam : Toh Rey tell me something about your academy??
Vicky : Haan Kuch bhi bata do as doobte hue ko tinke ka sahara bhi bhut hota hai.
Rey: I really love dance n I want that more of people to be indulged in dance..
Maine bhut saare competitions bhi organize liye hain to find new talent..
Vicky: Jaise Ki INDIA'S GOT TALENT..
You know maine bhi uss show ke liye auditions diye the but unhon ne mujhe enter hi nai karne diya woh bole Ki main overtalented hun.
Kismat ka khel dekho...
Sam : I know Vicky Ki kitna zulmy zaalim zamaana hai... Hey did any one noticed ALLITERATION
But Rey kis type ke competitions??
Rey : Please can we stop talking about competition
Sam : kyu?? Batao Rey...
Please apne Mann ka bojh halka karo kyunki bhaaripan se acidity Ho jaati hai..
Hum se Kuch mat chupaao...
Vicky: chupaana bhi nahi aata jataana bhi Nahi aata
ham CBLI hain batana bhi Nahi aata...
Rey : CBLI???

Sam : nothing tum batao
Rey: actually I hate myself ...
Sam : Kyu tum Toh ache insaan Ho
Rey (in full josh) : Ek murderer Kabhi acha insaan nhi Ho sakta
Sam : kya?? Rey ik dost samjh kar please batao kya hua tha??
Rey: Actually ik competition ke finale mein do ladkiyaan shanaya n kriya thi
Jab main backstage tha Toh shanaya mere Paas aayi n mujhse beg karne lagi Ki main usse winner bna Doon n woh suddenly mere upar chadhne lagi n zor zabardasti mein I banged her to the door n killed her...
Fir uss samein kriya ne meri help Ki..
But guys din raat har samein main bhut guilty feel karta hun
Please mujhe mere gunahon Ki sazaa de do
Tum log mere dost ho.. Help meee
Rey then becomes unconscious..

Vicky: Rey acha insaan lagta hai..
Sam : Haan yr
Chal Rey ko ghar chodein...
Sam puts Rey on the backseat of the car n himself too
Vicky comes and aakar sam ke saath baith jaata hai
Sam : Abey drive kaun karega Teri kriya???
Vicky: Main drinking n driving ko mix Nahi karta.
Sam comes out n drops Rey home n goes to office...

Scene2
Sharon goes to d main road to c kriya waitng fr d taxi
Shy: hey mis... Wait
Kriya: who r u?
Shy : POLICE
kriya: ohh .. Yes mam Hw cn I help u??
Shy: help ki mujhe Nahin tujhe zarurat padegi chunni bai
Kriya: kaun chunni bai???
Shy: tum or kaun...mujhe apne khabri se news mili hai k tum ladkion ka dhanda krti ho.. Ab main tumhe sabak sikhaungi
Kriya: apki koi misunderstanding hui hai. Mera naam to kriya hai
Shy: tum ne kaha or Maine maan liya..kya main itni bevkoof dikhti hoon
Shy holds her n calls asad
Shy: sir vo Maine chunni bai ko hirasat mein le lia hai... Ab yeh bhaag Nahin payegi... Aap Apni raid zaari rakhiye
Waits fr othr person to speak
Shy: ok sir... Bii
Shy: ab PTA chalega tumhe k police k haath kitne lambe hote hain chunni bai
Kriya : pr mam
Shy: shut up. Ek shabad ni

Scene3
Asad n zoya reach kriya's house to find some evidence..dey reach d door
Zoya rings d bell... Once.. Twice.. Thrice...
Zoya: Lagta hai ghr mein koi ni hai..
Asad: mrs khan humne hi shy ko kriya ko Rockne k liye kaha tha... Remember...To ghr pr kaise koi hoga..??kabhi kabhi aap bilkul vicky jaisi baatein krti hain...
Zoya: ni mr khan... Main to bus confirm kr rhi thi...
Asad: yea rite... Ab andar jane ka tareeka dhoonde Agr apki chkng poori ho gyi ho...
Zoya: Kyun ni... I gv u full permission..
Dey move al around d house to find place frm where dey cd sneak in but no luck..
Asad: humein kriya k bag se keys bhi nikalne k baare mein sochna chahiye tha..
Zoya: le mr khan... Itna easy ni... Hum khidki se andar chlte hain..
Asad: pr koi khidki khuli to ni hain..
Zoya: to apki kya Laga k kriya hamare liye Ik window khol kr jayegi taki hum bade aram se us k ghr k talaashi le sakein..??
Asad: ahhh... Mera voh mark ab ni tha.. Phir kaise jayenge
Zoya: Apke 6 packs abs kb kaam ayenge... Abhi warm up to ho hi gya hai in d parking lot...to Kyun na ek dhai kilo ka mukka pad jaye is nazuk si khidki par..
Asad: r u serious..!!
Zoya: of course mr khan... Kya main apki smile krti dikh rahi hoon..
she says so while showing her over serious face..
Asad: ok fine.. Wtevr u say
Wid dis he punches one of d window n d glass breaks.. Dey open d window m enter..
Dey lit on dere torches n move abt in d house in different directions
Suddenly asad hears zoya screaming
Zoya: jaldi ayiye mr khan..
Asad a bit scared runs in her direction to find her standing in a room
Asad: kya hua..??
Zoya: yeh dekhiye.. Yeh kitna cute teddy bear hai...zarur kriya k bf ne dita hoga...
Asad: what..!!!
Zoya: kya what whatt...aapneto Aj tk mujhe ek phool bhi Nahin diya.. Kya kharab kismat hai Meri Jo aap jaisa unromantic shohar mujhe mila... Sighs
Asad: kya aap hum Jo kaam krne aye hain vo Nahin kr skti.. Meri shikayat aap baad mein bhi kr skti hain..Aur moreover aap ek phool ka karengi kya..?? Ik hi din mein murzha jata hai
Zoya: frgt it mr emotionally challenged khan...yeh Apke level ki baatein ni hain.. Aap to bs sabot dhondhiye...
N wid dis she moves Bt suddenly asad catches her by her wrist n pulls her towards him..her back strikes on his chest
Asad: ummm.. Kya keh rahi thi aap...
Zoya: voh ...main...actualllyyy..
Asad: acha to ab bolti band
Zoya: ni vo... Actu..ally.. Saboot dhondne hain
Asad : Haan to dhoond lenge..
He turns her so dat dey face each other
He moves his hands around her waist
Zoya turns tomato red...She z constantly looking down
Asad: kya hua..??? zameenpr Aisa kya khaas dikh gya hai..??mujhe nb ho batayie..
He tightens his grip m pulls her more close so dat dey r Jst inches apart
Zoya: asaddd... Plz leave me... Ab hum duty or Nahin hai kya..??
Asad: dutyy...vo kya hota hai mrs khan...
He says so moves her bangs behind her ear
She closes her eyes wid his touch...n puts her arms around his neck
She hs nvr seen her jahanpannah being so romantic n she z lost in d moment..she feels goosebumps at d thought of her husband being so so so close to her..
Her thoughts r broken by her husbands breath in her face
She opens her eyes to c him gazing at her wid his eyes full of love desire n passion..
( bg music : ishqzaade..eee..ishqzaade )
She sees him decreasing d space btw thm... She hs nvr been so close to a man evr b4 in her lyf n nw she stands in dis manz arms Jst inches away n she z loving it
Asad sees zoya blushing hard n smiles at d thought at he hs do mch effect on his WIFE... Yes his wife n he had full right in her.. She belongs to him... He sees her standing in his arms fully surrendering herself to her husband
He moves towards her lips n put his lips on thm
N started kissing her... She responded him wid full passion n moved her hands in his hair...
Suddenly asadz phn rang
Dey broke up frm d kiss
Asad saw his phn... It flashed sharonz name
Asad: ahhhemm ... Itz shy
She stood dere still fully red n Jst nodded nt daring to look at him
Asad on his phn: ok shy.. Datz gd .. U keep her busy.. V r Jst abt to finish... BiAsad n zoya feel awkward to even look at each other Bcz of d passionate moment dey Jst shared
Bt dn asad broke d silence
Asad: ahhh.. I think v shd do some real work nw Bcz of wt v came here...
Zoya: yea..
Wid did dey moved away in diff directions n started ransacking d house
Uddenly asad found a bag under d bed
It had REYANSH SINGHANIA written on it
Asad: zoya... Comd here
She reached towards him
Zoya: mr khan.. Isn't it d same bag which rey gave to kriya to gv to d kidnapper I guess...Bt why is it stil wid her
Asad: datz what I m thinking..
Zoya suddenly sees some paper m picks thm up reading thm
Zoya: mr khan look at dese.. Dey r some property papers stating an flat being bought in d name of miss kriya n mr shivam...
Asad: Bt kriya isn't in dat gd financial condition to buy a flat.. N whiz did shivam
Zoya: I guess her bf.. D one who gave her dat teddy.. Ohhh it ws so cute...
Asad: FOCUS ... Mrs khan
Zoya : ohh sorry..
Dey wr Jst moving her clothes up n down n saw few photographs newspaper cuttings dere
D photos wr of kriya n dat guy whom dey saw in d club...
Asad: so he z shivam.. Kriya's bf my nt d blackmailer which v thought. Sat means kriya is cheating rey.. Dere no other blackmailer in d scene .. Itz kriya n shivam onLy who r doing al dis...Bt why..???
Zoya: n d ques still stand...who ws murdered ..???
Dey saw d paper cuttings which read something abt a dance competition in reyz academy abt 2 months back...
Zoya: c mr Khan.. Kriya n dis gal (she points to a photo ) wr d finalists... Bt den dey say she didn't come fr d finale n wnt missing...
Asad: so u suspect dat cn she b d one who ws murdered..???
Zoya: may b
Asad: v need to tell d whole team abt dis.. Lts leave fr d office b4 anyone finds us here
Dey both leave fr d office...
Zoya calls shy on d way
Zoya: hey shy..
Shy: yes mam ( as kriya z standing near her)
Zoya: uuuhhh..itni izzat... M so blessed
Shy: yes mam
Asad: mrs khan will u plz come to d point
Zoya to asad: okay
Zoya to shy: acha listen .. V hv left frm kriya's home... Ab tum use chod do n meet us in d office... Bahut zarur I baatein batani hai tum logon ko...
Shy : ok mam
Dey cut d phn
Shy: ohh m sorry... Humein galat information mili thi..chunni bai to raid mein pakdi gayi... I guess tum sahi keh rahi thi miss...
Kriya: KRIYA...
Shy: yes kriya... Vo kabhi kabhi humse bhi galti ho jati hai... Sry fr d inconvenience... Aap ja skti hain
Kriya leaves fr home fuming in anger..
Sam reaches taarey house. Vicky rings the bell. Taani opens the door, and sees Rey with Vicky and sam. Sam : He is fine Don't worry. Just take care of him...
They leave their house...
Rey gains conciousness n tells her that he wants to go to bed..
Taani wants to clear her doubts about kriya so she asked Rey if she was pretty, he said "No". She asked him if he wanted to
be with her forever, he said "No". Then
she asked him if he would cry if she
walked away, he said "No". She had heard
enough; she needed to leave.
As she walked away he grabbed her arm
and told her to stay. He said "You're not
pretty, you're beautiful. I don't want to
be with you forever, I need to be with you
forever. And I wouldn't cry if you walked
away, I would die."
Taani had a tear in her eyes and she hugs Rey.
Rey hugs her too...

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To b continued


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Edited by Reyansh23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome yr luved all the updates..!!

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Originally posted by: hima_crazyD3fan

awesome yr luved all the updates..!!



hey thnx for commenting:)
was feeling bad as no other comment..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing concept
n really nice update
i really like ur characters :)
especially sam and vicky 😆
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing concept...update soon...

i like ur dp too much...KSG...*blushes*😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heyyya guyz
V r back wid d supposed last part of dis TAAREY case
Ltz c if v succeed...

Dis part z esp fr QWEERRTTYYUUIIO, Aileen134, awesome, mohit_monaya, hima_taarey,lovely taarey, asha_taarey,shanaya-taarey, MrMrsAsyaKhan , -yaariyan-, shanakyasharan n u me n D3
Lv u guyz fr ur support n comments
Plz agey bhi saath dena
Plz bear our bakwas...
So here it goes

Case-1 TAAREY
Part-5

Al d team members reach d CBLI office
In discussion room
Asad: so guyz... V hv gr a lot to tel u..so mch happened in dat kriya's house
Sam: Arey mamu seeing dat red mark on lips I cn understand dat wht wht cd hv hpnd dere... Bt I guess k yeh pati ptni k beech ki baatein humare saath share krna isn't a really gd idea.. Kyun Mrs zoya asad Ahmed khan...???
Zoya ws totally red after samz question n ESP after he saw her lipstick marks on asadz lips...
Vicky: hmmm... V missed dat...
Shy: will u both shut up n focus on taarey n leave dese pati patni alone..
Vicky n Sam bcm quiet wid fingers on dere lips
Asad: thnx shy...n nw listen to smthng serious...
He started after wiping off his lips wid his hanky...
Asad: wn v searched her house v found a lot of money dere
Zoya: n dat too in d same briefcase dat rey handed it over to her to gv to d blackmailer
Asad: yes... N thn v also found out dat she hs bought a new apartment wid shivam recently
Shy: SHIVAM..!! Yeh naam suna suna lag rha hai
Zoya: u r rite shy.. Yeh vahi ladka hai Jo humein club 16 mein mila tha wid kriya... He looks lyk her bf
Sam: whattt..?? N hum use blackmailer samjh rhe the
Asad: black mailer to vo hai hi n us k saath vo kriya bhi mili hui hai... Yeh dono rey se paise niklwa rhe hai fr dere benefit
Vicky: hmmm
Asad: aur tum log batao.. Rey se kya baat hui??
Sam: yr mamu vo bechaara to bhut hi zyada depressed hai..Usne humein btaya Ik ladki k baare mein at a dance competition Jo uski vajah se Apni jaan se haath dho bethi
Vicky: aur usi ki body ko dhikane lagane mein kriya ne rey ki madad ki thi
Asad: ohh... Mrs khan kahin yeh vahi ladki to Nahin Jo finale mein kriya k opp thi n bilkul competition se pehle gayab ho gyi thi
Zoya: I guesss but rite mr khan..n us k na hone se hi kriya vi competition jeet payi
Shy: n usi k karan hi vo Aj Yahaan par hai... Moving towards success...
Asad: right... Chachu.. Kya rey Khud bhi kriya k saath gya tha wn she took d body???
Sam: ni mamu...
Asad: is he sure k vo mar chuki thi..???
Sam: I guess not... Vo to itna darr chuka tha k use Kuch hosh hi Nahin tha...
Vicky: use to kriya ne hi kaha tha k she z dead.
Asad: vicky Zara Chk karo ki yeh photo vali ladki k kahin bhi lash mili hai k ni... I mean Chk in police records
He said so n handed over dose magazine clips he n zoya gt frm kriya's home wid D other gals photo
Vicky wnt to Chk n came back in abt an hour
Vicky: hey I chcked al d police stations out here to c if dey hv any nws of d missing girl... Bt dey al replied in a no except one.. Vahaan Unhone btaya k is ladki ka naam Anjali hai n uski missing complaint darz ki thi around 1.5 month back by a friend of hers... Bt d case z still pending as koi clue Nahin mila na hi koi body
Asad: so Ltz work up guyz shayad vo ladki Anjali ki lash mil jaye
Zoya : for to rey bekasoor sabit ho jayega
Sam: yes of course... Bt vo lash hogi kahaan
Shy: yeh to kriya hi Jane ya for vo SHIVAM bhi shayad
Sam: perfect... I guess humein vi maya apartment Chk krna chahiye Jo Unhone recently kharidi hai
Asad: right Chachu... Lts go..I l c d addresss frm dese property papers

N dey al wnt to d destined location at night as dey were stepping in someone's private property n dat too without d owners permission
N moreover dey wr CBLI n nt CBI Jo kahin bhi kabhi bhi ja skti hai showing off dere ID cards
D door ws locked so dey used a master keyz to open it
After dey wnt inside ot wd all dark inside
Shy: Lagta hai Yahaan bhut dono se safai ni hui...
Vicky: wait I l switch in d light...
Wid did he moved towards d switchboard
Vicky: Yahaan to light hai hi Nahin
Shy: kya..??ab mujhe darr lag rha hai
Sam: Kyun babes??? Tumhara itna daring bf hai to sahi
Asad: Haan Haan ... Chachu to Khatron ka khiladi hai... 10- 10 gundon se akele nipat leta hai to bhoot se bhi tumhe bacha hi lega..Kyun Chachu..??
Sam...aaa..ahh..Haan..Kyun ni
Vicky: kya..BHOOT???
Zoya: no mr khan... Derez nothing lyk bhoot voot... Maine net or padha hai k yeh sab jhoot vooth ki baatein hain.. I guess humein alag alag rums mein Ja kar dhoondna chahiye... Is se v l finish early...Ltz go shy..
Shy: cmng zoya
Dey both leave towards left side
Sam n Asad sees vicky a bit scared n plans to tease him
Asad: Vaise vicky agar yahaan tumhe koi ladki safed saari mein aur haath mein candle pakde dikheya to plzz plzz is se naam mat puchna..
Vicky:huhhh...
Sam: I knw mamu...keep dat in mind vicky... Vaise Aj tumhe beat Nahin chahiye kya...
Vicky: wht... U r talking abt d beat..I Cnt evn stand properly her in my feet..
Asad: hmmm nt bad... Tumhare mooh se to kisi bhi situation mein rhyme karwa lo..
Sam: le yeh to Aivein hi tha...u listen to me..n today fr d first tym GV ME D BEAT GUYZ
"Raat ka hai samaa
Hum tum hai tanha
light k bina drawana hai lamha
Ahhh..(he tries to think something to more to rhyme...)
N fire brigade mangwa de tu oh balmaa...

Asad n vicky gvs him d worst of d looks
Vicky: chiii yr..it ne salon mein tu abhi tk itna hi seekha hai mujhse...
Asad: tune to apne cruddy buddy ki bezati hi Krwa di..
Sam: Arey ur itna bhi bura na tha
Tabhi zoya shouts frm another rum...mr khan , Sam, vicky jldi aao
Dey al run in her direction Jst to get a shock
Dere dey c a girl lyng on d floor wid her hands n feet tied to d bed...
Zoya went ahead to lift her face n dey al gt shocked to c dat it ws none other thn ANJALI
zoya chks her pulse..it ws feeble...
Sam n vicky: Anjali z alive...!!!
Zoya: v need to take her to d hospital rite nw
Dey picked her up n took to d hospital
After d initial treatment she became conscious n ws nt in a state to explain d entire scene to d CBLI team
Anjali: Thnku guyz fr saving my life..
Shy : dnt worry Anjali..u r safe now.. Jst tl us d full story...
Anjali: actually dis al started at d tym of national dance competition in which I n kriya both participated n gt selected fr d finals. Mr reyansh singhania ws d judge of d finale round.. Actually I so wanted to win d show as my future depended al on it..so I wnt to him one day b4 d competition Jst to ask him to b fair as I had heard k kriya woos d judges wid her charm n gts d decision done in her favour.. So I Jst wanted him to b fair.. Bt I think he misunderstood me n during did he pushed me away n I gt hot by d door knob after which I thnk I fell unconscious.. Wn I regained consciousness I ws in dat house wid my arms n feet tied.. Firstly I cdnt understand Bt thn I saw kriya n a guy cmng in f rum..she told me day nw she l win d competition n dat scholarship...she went n dat guy wid her used to come once a day to gv me food n datz it. I hv also heard him talk g to kriya abt Hw dey l fool rey abt me being murdered by rey n demand money frm him...
Zoya: datz ridiculous... U mean dey hv.been so harsh wid u..
Shy: Bt dnt worry dey l pay fr all dey hv done
Asad: yeah.. Mrs khan u call taani n tel her to reach kriya's house wid rey...Itz tym fr some TRUTH REVELATION nw

Kriya's house
Kriya n shivam were talking wn suddenly dey heard d door bell ring.. On opening dey found some known faces out
Kriya looked at asad: ahh ..u ..v met at d club..Bt Hw cm u r here
Thn she saw shy too..'o god dis stupid police inspector z here too
Shivam tried to run away seeing asad n Sam again in frnt of him Bt San caught hold of him
Sam : abey itni bhi kya jldi hai..Kuch aur mehmaan bhi aye hai.. Wid dus he points towards d door where rey n taani r standing
Kriya : rey n taani..aap Yahaan..???
Taani: Jst wanted to knw some answers
Kriya: answers..??of what???
Taani: dat d CBLI team l tell u
Rey: CBLI???
Vicky: yes dude..CBLI ie d Central Bureau of Love Investigation.. V help solve d problems related to LOVE... Ur wife Taani met us fr she had some doubt dat u u hiding something frm her n dat z related to kriya..n so v went in to help her ...so al dat magazine thng v told u ws a part of our plan
Asad: n so ws whatever happened wid u miss kriya at d club
Taani: so jeeju..tell him wht hv u found out
D team explained taarey Everythng abt kriya n shivam z blackmailing part ..
Rey: ( furious ) I dnt believe it kriya...I thought u wr my frnd n I trusted wid dl dis.. I evn ignored taani Bcz of al dis n u... U cheated ..Jst fr some money...disgusting...
Kriya: no rey.. Dis isn't true..dese people r lyng ..
Zoya: ohh really...so do u want us to get Anjali here to proove
Rey: wt Anjali.???she z alive
Sam: yes dude ... She very well is..trough ur frnds tried vry hard to lt did happen
Rey: wt..
Sam explained him abt Hw dey kidnapped Anjali n had kept her in d worst of d conditions
Rey: ohh god kriya..m so ashamed of myself dat I trusted a girl lyk u...Jst go away...
Kriya realised dat dis ws d end of her show so she tried to move away Bt
Asad: nt so soon miss kriya...vicky
Vicky went outside n was back wid d police
Police inspector: hum apko aur mr shivam ko miss Anjali ki kidnapping aur dhokadhadi k charges k under arrest krte hain
Kriya n shivam r shocked..
PI: Thnku mr kalsi fr informing us
Vicky: vi mera farz tha..
Wid dis police leaves wid kriya n shivam

Everyone's z happy except rey who stood on one side
Asad: I knw rey u r shattered Bt isn't it gd dat u gt to knw abt dis truth b4 something really bad happened
Rey: yess.. I m so grateful to u guyz..
Sam: so why r u still sad??
Rey: vo I Cnt stop cursing myself..Hw cd I ??mujhe taani ko sab batana chahiye tha..vimujhse itna pyaar krti hai mere baare mein itna sochti hai aur main...I hv lost her trust
Taani: Nahin rey..I still trust u d most... I Cnt c u lyk dis.. Plzzz
Rey: m so sorry jaan.. I wnt lt dis happen again .. I promise
Taani: I knw..n I love u
Rey: I live u too
Dey both hug each othr
Shy n zoya r lyk awww
Sam n vicky holds asad arm to move it up n also moves dere arms up n shout...CHEMISTRYYY ...
Zoya: ahemm...inko dekhar Ik sher yaad a gya
Arz Kia hai
' kriya shivam jaise villians bhaag gye saare
Itni problems k baad bhi Aj saath mein hai taarey'
Shukriya shukriya..

Taani: Thnku once again guyz fr bringing back happiness in my lyf
Rey: yes u guyz rock
Vicky: vo to hum karte hi hai Kyun team.???
Asad zoya Sam n shy: of course
Shy: I think v shd leave nw.. Someone's dere private tym..
She says so while pointing towards taarey who wr still lost ineab others eyes
Wid dis dey all left

Taarey home
I n bedroom
Rey: taani..tumne mujhe Maaf to kar dia na
Taani: likh kr du kya rey..
Rey: Nahin...pr for aise mujhe dur dur Kyun khadi ho
Taani : nahi ..Aisa to Kuch ni hai...main vo bus
Rey started to walk towards her
Taani gets anxious seeing him move towards her n turns her back towards him
Rey smiles to c his wife still being so shy frm her husband
He goes n hugs her frm behind holding her frm her waist
Rey chuckled, a low, throaty sound that
vibrated through her neck as he kissed the
spot just under her ear.
loosened his grip, turned her
to face him and carefully placed her arms
around his neck. He leaned in, his gaze so
full of heated passion that taani nearly
melted right then and there.
When his lips met hers, she couldn't
stop the trembling that shimmered through
her body.
Taani let her eyes close again, giving
herself over completely to the feel of his
lips moving down her neck, his body locked
tightly to hers. She felt whole, as some part
of her she hadn't even known was missing
had been restored. Moving with him, she
matched his movements as she gave herself
over to passion...
Thus taarey again became one...nw promising each other not to b apart n trust each other fully once n fr alwaysss...


CBLI discussion rum
Sam: another big achievement
Asad: good job guyz...
zoya: taani n rey looked so perfect wid each other
Shy : Jst lyk u n asad
Zoya blushed a little... Bt yes evn she agrees..she feels so perfect when her mr khan z wid her...wid did she looked towards Asad who ws already looking towards her wid his expressive eyes...mitwaaa...
Bt dere eyelock ws interrupted by none other thn vicky
Vicky: hey...u guyz noticed k is baar humne police ka kaam bhi Kia...I mean crime shrime hua tha...m so proud of us
Isi baat pe
GV ME D BEAT GUYZ
' love ki problems hum solve krte hi the
Unki mushkilon ki hum sehte bhi the
Hua Kuch Aisa k hum kaam krne lage jaise police
Relax v r cheap lete hain hum Kum fees
Ho koi investigator to humare jaisa ho
Bann gye hum CID so daya drawaza tod do'

Everyone laughs...
Asad: yeh daya kaun hai...???
Sam shy zoya n vicky: chief new case...


So guys here finishes d first case ie taarey
I hope u lykd it
Plz like n comment...
Thn only v l write another part to dis CBLI
If u hv any suggestions abt d nxt case or couple dat u wanna red abt plz let us knw
Waitng fr ur lovely suggestions n comments
New readers plz buddy me if u want pms...

Regards
Jasmine n nikki
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Read it all in one go.
Itne ache FF ke baare me mein kuch bol toh nehi sakti, par aap dono ko shashtang dandavrath pranam zarur karungi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
this was awesome...do write more...cont. This...

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