[AS] SS: At First Blush - part 2, pg 9 DC

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despicable_me

@despicable_me

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Hello.. 😆

so yeah.. I ain't gonna say anything.. 😛

wanted to put flashbacks somewhere between the chapters but then thought it'd be better to write the first chapter full of flashbacks so that you know, how they are! 😆

Anyhu... haven't proofread... so mwaafi magte hai 😛 gotta sleep.. mommy maregi nehi toh 😭

PMs tomorrow.. till then, laters baby! 😉

-T

Edited by despicable_me - 12 years ago

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her_story

@her_story

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

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Buahaah I love the banner! OMG his smirk!☺️

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Aww these two are so cute!😳 So Arjun likes her, but loves to irritate the hell out of her!😆

Love this story Tahi!!!😃 Update soon!

BTW, I hope you are doing better now😳

Edited by miss_bennet - 12 years ago

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JeeLeZaraa

@JeeLeZaraa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

awesome starting!

Loved it

Very well written

Im just laughing by just imagining arjun and sakhsi as little kids in preschool and then in highschool .. 😆

Update soon

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despicable_me

@despicable_me

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Damn yA apple and auto-correct -___-

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Sakshi

@SAKSHI..

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Wow...!!!!!!!!!!
Amazing story...really ...!!!!
Iam so so so much enjoying this story...!!!!
Kaash ...i mean it !!! kash is story pe koi ek show likh de...!!
I mean through out the time...while i was reading this...at the back of my mind this was ringign like a bell...please koi ispe ek show bna do...!!!
M really haoppy you did this...i mean included this as a chapter and not as flashback...because isse we are more clear what is the equation exactly between Arjun and Sakshi...!!!!
M really excited for the next updates n i mean it...!!!!
will be waiting for it badly...please jaldi kahtam mt krna please please...!!!!!
M really enjoying your story like anything...!!!!!!!
😊

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Shezi19

@Shezi19

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

It's look really really crazy but nice please update soon

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

hi dhriti di🤗... finaly meri stalking kuch toh kaam aayi😆... omg😲...full of flashbacks😉😉 i loved it... aap aaye aur anand hi anand chaa gaya😆...6 feet ka buffalo🤣... saakshi was no less huh😉 mood swings😆... hmm he is ...he broke her cell😲...n miss anand gave him tit for tat...he hate the word baby😉 kyun ???

n miss anand teacher of arjun😉 impressive way of teaching ...👏👏👏...

tubelight!!!🤣...arjun scares of adhiraj😉...sakshi se pehle uske bhaiya se lado arjun babu😆😆😆...

awesome di !...update soon🤗

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Sakshi

@Sakuu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Great start, abhi start hi itna dhamakedaar hai, toh baki ki story kaisi ho gi?

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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

It was a very interesting one...
Really amazing...sometimes really funny...

Sakshi is so smart...really loved her...
Eventhough both are acting as crackers, I felt deep within his heart
he had a concernment for her .. and she also knew how to deal
with him...how to make him to do one thing...
Thats very cute...

And once again, I really loved this Sakshi...

Cont. soon...