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libbyferns

@libbyferns

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Thanks for the pms.

Chapter 187: I just loved Buaji's letter, it was so hilarious and a very lighthearted chapter and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

Chapter 188: Back to square one! Just loved it. Typical Arnav style to hide his feelings and his insecurities and take it out on Khushi.

I really like the way you write; it takes me back to the olden era of good literature and your literary sense in writing this story is just perfect. Keep up the good work.

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dpriyad

@dpriyad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

there is a unique sense to your writting tat just makes u keep on reading and never stopping

it is true that that whenever a happy ending starts the story ends and proof of this is given by ourv beloved ipk

his should tleast not end early

welost one ipk but cant lose its worldalso

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lilakumariacnw

@lilakumariacnw

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Loved the updates...Linny...
When payal n khushi r together...t always brings a smile to. My face...would love to read more abt their childhood. Days...i am sure it wouldamost interesting one with khushi being khushi...
Buaji'sletter...loved it... Esp...the P P Ss...their r trying find their happness in ram ...since they miss their payalia n thithliya...

What was the dream indicating...my poor. Brain is not that sharp... I always think a lot reading dreams...and visions... But my brain never finds a clue... Does that dream means that he will hurt her...or..is it someone else...???..
Oh...i am really sad... Yeah...its really back to square one...oh...linny...it hurts a lot..not only first lord and khushi...reading the chapter...i just could control my tears...
Why. Cant he just tell her nicely...may be she can help...now...both are suffering... Poor girl she was waiting for him...thinking of multiple reason..why he didnt come to her... And she is getting that...from him...its soo sad...when ur love is not returned...
Feelingbad forfirst lord too...he is not allowng anyone to near him...he really cares for her..but cant show her...oh...linny...plz...do somethng...
may be she will get some clue...that he dont hate her... Its all...my little wishes...to make my heart feel less pain...in their pain...
BRILLIANT WRITTING. Dear... Otherwise...i wont feel this much..
Waiting for the next update...