MG FF ~The Love Birds~Ch-2 pg-13 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ash1991

Superb update...
Loved it...


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Originally posted by: -dia-

Nice start .. loved it

thnx for PM


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Originally posted by: KasiKasi

Awesome update
loved it


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Originally posted by: monikaseth

Awesome start love to read more


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: renjini263

Heyya lovely update yaara... Hmm so Geet is slow in making frnds...

She heard Maan's voice nd found it sexy 😉😆 ... Love Pari too...
Precap is interesting.. please cont soon..


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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
i just came across this story and it seems intersting...
nice prologue...
loved the first part...
geet and maan both are opposite poles...she is interovert and he is friendly with everyone...it is interesting to see how will they both come together
waiting for the next part
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Originally posted by: _lehar_

i just came across this story and it seems intersting...

nice prologue...
loved the first part...
geet and maan both are opposite poles...she is interovert and he is friendly with everyone...it is interesting to see how will they both come together
waiting for the next part


thanks dear
lets see sometimes opposite poles attract
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Thank you so much for your encouraging response...😊

Chapter-2

A week had been passed since Geet sent the friend request,she was following her daily routine of going through pics of Maan on his profile when a message popped up that was from Maan.Geet's heart almost came in her mouth when she saw the message as if Maan had caught him viewing his profile.She composed herself and saw that it was a hi from maan.She was almost in a shocked state and she managed to reply with a pounding heart when again he messaged,"Do I know you?"

Geet replied trying to make it interesting,"Maybe as I am your junior"

Maan-Yes, I know that its just that my friend's name is also Geet in college.I must have seen you but I don't know you by name and your profile pic is also of some actress toh its hard to recognize. That's why.

Geet-No problem,So where are you from?

Maan-From Delhi and you?

Geet-Hosiyarpur

Maan-really..That's nyccc

Geet-anything special

Maan-nothing as such, my friend Saumya is also from there.

Geet-That's nice.

Maan-I need to go .Catch you later

Geet-Sure .It was nice talking to you sir

Maan-Same here 😊

Geet-😊

As soon as the conversation got over Geet was shouting.,jumping,dancing.Pari came out from bathroom and stood there as if seeing some unexceptional scene.By the time she had come to know that Geet is a person who is reserved in nature but when she gets comfortable with someone, she is a chatter box but this was a new scene for her.

Pari asked while clapping to draw her attention, "What happened senior proposed you or what?"

Geet gave a bone crushing hug to Pari and replied,"I talked to him on FB"

Pari smiled and said,"OMG! so madam you finally messaged to him."

Geet nodded her head in negative while blushing

Pari blinked in disbelief and almost shouted,"He messaged...really?"

Geet ,"You know we have a senior ,her name is also Geet but the thing is he messaged.I want to talk to him everyday.I want..."

Pari interrupted her talk and said,"My love sick puppy ,Wait ,for now we have an assignment to submit.lets get back to work and no pic viewing."

Geet nodded happily and they got back to work

In Maan's room

Yash poked him and inquired,"So may i know with whom you were chatting with?"

Maan smiled and replied"With a junior .I had got a friend request. her name is Geet and she is from Hosiyarpur and there was no pic of hers so i thought if someone has made fake id of Geet but she is our junior."

Yash asked with curiosity, "And???"

Maan gave a whack to him and replied"And she is our junior who has just passed out from school and they are kids"

Yash returned the whack to Maan "Oye dumbo,we are just a year senior and they are not called kids but buds 😉."

Maan gave a whatever look and got busy in his project.

One Month later

The whole college was busy in preparation of freshers party.The gang of girls were planning to shop the best as it was the day to enjoy and look more beautiful.

Pari asked while choosing a dress for herself,"Geet ,speak up girl.I am seeing your this rotten egg face since two weeks.He is a nice person .I talked to him but he is our senior so he wont message you everytime."

Geet sat on a chair and said keeping the grumpy face,"I messaged him several times and he talks in a friendly way but he always addresses me as if i am a student of pre-nursery "

Pari laughed so loudly that it drew the attention of others in the boutique,she
ignored them and continued with her talk saying,"Geet,my poor baby.Go tell him that you want to make kids with him and not want to become his kid."

Geet gave an angry glance and said"Rubbish.Go and choose your dress."

Pari enquired,"And what our princess is buying,a sexy wedding gown"

Geet replied giving a whack to Pari,"I am wearing a white top with black capree."

Pari kept her hands on her waist and said,"What ..are you crazy wear something sexy."

Geet gave a look as if she is thinking something deeply and said in that tone,"I had thought of wearing suit but Pinky and Anjalika stopped me and made me buy that stuff"

Pari looked at her in disbelief and mocked,"Apke charan kahan hai I want to take blessings"

Geet indicated towards her legs earning a whatever look from Pari.And they went towards the college bus which was waiting for the students to return to their respective hostels.Geet who was rarely going to market had never missed bus on any saturday which was taking the students to the market since she had come to the college.For everyone it was the day of relaxation, for making lots of fun ,marketing,drinking but for Geet it was an additional chance to see him.She was getting highly disappointed when he was not coming to the market.She was always choosing the first seat known to the fact the he will come late and stand at the footboard with his friends.With every passing day she was more into her senior's love.And on other side Maan was unknown to the feelings of Geet .The thing he was aware about her was that she is his junior highly kiddish in nature,talking anything senseless to continue the conversation going and always praising him for the things which he always thought to be trivial.He thought her more of flattering in nature as she was not leaving a chance to praise him.When Yash came to know about this he started teasing him saying,"Junior is totally mad for you dude."

For which he always earned a whack from maan .Though Maan also felt there was something which she wanted to say, something that she never sais.And her friend Pari was really a matter of interest to him as she was just opposite of Geet,Clear minded,speaking to the point without beating around the bush and the most important thing without making him paramount of perfection.

Precap-Maan knowing about Geet's emotions.





Edited by sur001 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
nice one.. she was so happy only for a mesg..what wuld she do when he accepts her..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sach janne k baad maan kya karega...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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