Ashlok FF:DESIRE CALLS...Chapt-24,pg-149 UPDATED! - Page 5

Originally posted by: -babyblue-

It's really a great start !!!!! excited to read more ..😳

Pls do continue n dun forget to PM me ...😊

Great work ..👍🏼

Thank u so much!😛Will surely PM!😉

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

update soon

Update coming up!😉

Prologue,page-1:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/92381767

CHAPTER-1.

"Mmm..." Astha relished her breakfast.

A crisp bright morning,and her favourite hot cup of tea,made by her mother,was her perfect mood brightener.

"Ayi!I can never live without your cooking!"She declared with a cherubic smile,at her mother,who was busy in the kitchen.

"Oh my God Astha!You still did not finish your breakfast?!!When are you going to leave for your interview?!It's already-.."

"Ayi!I'm leaving!Right now!"

"Dahi shakkar.."

Astha's mother did not have to finish the sentence,as Astha herself came running.She had the yoghurt and sugar,hugged her mother tight,and ran away through the front door,all in a matter of seconds.

As if on cue,the vase the side table close to the door fell on the ground,as soon as the front door was slammed shut by her.

The wooden vase rolled on the floor,as Astha's mother shook her head in exasperation.

"Uff this girl!I hope she doesn't overturn the interviewers too!"

Light!Too much light..And the damn birds!Someone stop their irritating chirping..

Shlok frowned deeply,as he slowly awakened.. A few more minutes,and reality finally dawned,and he finally managed to drag his eyes open.He realized he had fallen asleep on the sofa.Something made him check his watch.

"OH NO!How the hell could I do this?!I just have five minutes in my hand!"He cursed himself loudly.

Three minutes had him hurrying down the stairs,and towards the front door..

"SHLOK!"A firm female voice called him back,from the dining table.

Out of habit grown from years,he clenched his hand into fists,on hearing the voice,but his feet did not stop,nor did he turn back.

"Shlok beta!"A softer male voice,made him stop on his tracks.

Slowly he turned round,to face his father,Niranjan Agnihotri.

"Is something wrong beta?Won't you be joining us for breakfast?"Shlok,slowly shook his head.

"Sorry baba.I'm already late.And that interview,if I-"

"Ok beta.You should not be late.Whatever happens,you should be on time."Niranjan bestowed him with another soft smile.

Shlok nodded,and instantly turned to leave for his appointment.

Unnoticed,by both Niranjan and Shlok,the other person present there,Anjali Agnihotri's face showed a slight reaction.A subtle shadow passed her features.But they were gone within a blink..

Shlok had attended the first interview,just in the nick of time.His head was still ringing after taking so many interviews,and now he had another urgent meeting.

Shlok honked with irritation again,but it was not of any use.Now,he was stuck in a traffic jam,and with a heavy downpour outside.

"DAMN!THE TRAFFIC!What is everyone doing outside in such a rainy weather?!Shouldn't they be having tea and pakoras at home?!"He muttered in anger.

"It seems they all wanted to get their car washed for free in the rain!"He muttered angrily,honking in vain again.

The traffic barely moved a few inch,after honking for at least twenty times.

"It's no use!"He cursed loudly again.

Shlok again checked the watch,and saw he had twenty more minutes to reach the meeting.He looked at the park,by the road.His destination was across the park.

If I cross the park on foot..He thought to himself..

Finally Shlok managed to maneuver his SUV,and parked it at the parking space by the park.He quickly took out his umbrella,and started for his meeting across the park,on foot.

His feet sploshed on the rain soaked mud,and he tried to walk carefully avoiding the puddles.The rain only seemed to increase in its vigour,increasing his irritation by hundred folds.The umbrella should have been bigger,he thought angrily,as rain blown by wind,sprayed raindrops on him.

He was halfway across the park,when he saw a bunch of kids playing in the muddy puddles,getting wet in the rain,and spraying each other with muddy rain water.

"Crazy kids.."He muttered,shaking his head,his lips thinning with annoyance.

He tried to walk as far away from the kids,as was possible.He did not want to be splattered by-..

SPLASH!

"WHAT THE HELL?!!"Shlok cursed out in anger,as a large amount of mud water got splashed on his pristine,crease free black suit."HOW DARE-.."Shlok turned to face the cause of his trouble.

He was too late in realizing,the trouble was not done with him.As soon as he turned,the trouble itself,slipped and came tumbling on top of him,and he fell flat on his back..

His umbrella flew away,and within a split second,the trouble,in the form of LADY LUCK,or more precisely,LADY BAD LUCK,was lying on top of him,under the open stormy sky..On a park..In the pouring rain..

"Oh no!I slipped!"Exclaimed out a soft musical female voice...

Chapter-2,page-14:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/92676760

lovely FF

Ohh That was really an awesome update to have a start with!!

Amazing Update😊
Plz Continue sOon...n don't forget to pm😳

Interesting...clumsy Astha and her Akdu masquerade man...😊meet yet again...

I just wish it was longer :P would loove longer chapters with moree to read!

Am just a slight bit confused. Does the prologue happen before chapter one? Or after?

Uff typical astha and typically fuming shlok...haha jud romance is so in...