Ashlok FF:DESIRE CALLS...Chapt-24,pg-149 UPDATED! - Page 6

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CrazyBilli

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Posted: 11 years ago

AaShlok together under the downpour..couldn't be better!!!

continue soon!! ;)

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice update..👍🏼.
I like the bubbly and clumsy aastha that u portray in your update..😃.
Shlok's dislike for his mother was clearly shown by you and his respect and love for his father as well such contrasting emotions for his parent figures..
Boy shlok is already irritated because of the climate and the rains and uspe aake gir gayi aastha now let's see what unfolds ahead..😆.
Keep writing eager to read the next update..😊.

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LuvStrk-001

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Posted: 11 years ago

Lovely FF dear!!!!!!!!!

Enjoyed every bit of it!!

Thanks for PM and sharing it!!!!

Plzz do continue!!!!

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@MereMahiyaa.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome updateee yaaar thanks fooor the pm

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meera.rajeev

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Posted: 11 years ago

that was a nice one...

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eshita misra

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Posted: 11 years ago

nyc update dear 😊

continue soon

thnx for the pm

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Ziva01

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome update ...the fall is really 🤣 ..I enjoyed it ...beautifully penned down...Lady luck to Lady bad luck😆

Do continue soon

Thxs for the pm

Stay blessed rab rakha

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awida

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Posted: 11 years ago

Loveved it. I love to read about Shlok's feelings. In the serial he looks mysterios.

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Live-life

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Posted: 11 years ago

Amazing start!!!

I loved it!! 😃

Astha!! The tufaan!! Gosh! that girl can't stay in one place

even for 1 sec!! 😆

Poor shlok first he was late and then he got splashed by mud and then

hit over by the "Lady luck" or "lady bad luck"

😆

I loved it!!!! 👏

and

thanks for the pm!!!!!! 😳

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Hanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Great story can't wait to read more!

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