Aitbaar (SS): Thread 2 :Completed

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Aitbaar

Prologue

Don't Maan.. don't leave my hand.. I will die.. Don't cheat your love Maan.. don't cheat the divine feelings tat you have.


He smirked but soon his childhood flashed in front of his eyes as he realized wat he was doing. He looked down but it was too late and the whole place echoed with his voice Premmm.

Gunaah kiya hain maine, par na woh gunaah hain

Pyar kiya hain maine, par na woh pyar hain

Zindagi paa li maine, par na ush zindagi ko apna keh paya main.

Uske har ek eshaas ko jeet gaya main, par apne eshaas kho juka main.

Na keh paaya ushe ki, gunaah kiya hain maine

Par na woh gunnah hain.. Na Gunaah Hain!!!



Aitbaar means trust and faith!!1



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Edited by sdlife19 - 11 years ago
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congrats dear for the new thread
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congrats on the new thread!!!!!!!!!
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congrats 4 da new thread...👏
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congrats for the new thread dear
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congrats for the new thread
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HI, congrats on new thread... and i just came across ur FF and read all the parts... its really too good... would like to read more... hope prem is alive!! since his body is not found... and wanna see how maan can bring geet back to her being with all his love.:😉 👏
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eagerly waiting for prem entry. amazing teaser. sry for late rply. update soon
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congratulations on the new thread 😊

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