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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 8

His eyes misty as his fingers traced his best friend's face. Prem could not control his tears as they started to wet his cheeks rolling down wetting his shirt. He wanted to scream and fight with his fate that kept him away from her. He wanted to cry as he failed to keep up to his promise of giving her love back and he wanted to kill him... Her love for doing this to her. He felt a sudden pull and saw his love Heer pulling him away from Geet. He fought to jerk her away but she just yelled at him seeing him behaving like a child pagal ho kya.. Let the doctor treat her Prem.. She needs a doctor more than anyone else right now. His eyes looked up to see her fighting her own self and then he saw her pointing towards the doctor who was examining Geet. Will she be fine.. meri Geet theek hogi na.. will my Misty doll be fine. He cried like a child hugging Heer tight in his arms. Heer wanted to cry and shout at him but she now realized that it was his pure love for the friendship he had for his Geet. She had envied Geet throughout her life for giving a smile to Prem that she was never capable and when he wanted to marry Geet she was shattered and hated Geet but never let anyone to know that she envied her but today she felt that she was the most luckiest person in this world to have Prem for whom his Geet, his best friend his Misty Doll was more than his own love. She cried silently with him remembering each and every word that Prem had told her back in Delhi.


She will Prem.. she will she have to as you have to say sorry and she have to forgive you.. pata hain na she can't stay angry on you.. after all you are her Prem. Heer tried to console him as others saw them with tears. Everyone was in Darjeeling with Prem but he was the only who followed Geet and Maan and others waited in their cottage. Prem wiped his tears as his teary eyes saw the shadow of the man whom he despised now like anything. He pushed Heer a bit and raised his hand to stop him from nearing stay where you are Maan Singh Khuranna.. tumare liye yaha koi jagah nahi hain. His voice firm as his tone depicted the anger and hatred he had for Maan. Maan looked at his family, his Geet's family and then at the Malhotra's. He tried to gauze their expressions but he could tell the way they looked at him that they were still unaware about his sins as if they were aware they would have hated him like anything. He tried to move closer but felt a push by Prem whose eyes shot fire and were ready to kill.


Kaha na dur ho jao yaha se.. don't you dare try to see her Khuranna Prem screamed pushing Maan out of the room. Maan controlled himself as his eyes caught the sight of Geet flinching in pain as the doctor finished injecting her. Let her rest but I still advise you all that she needs some relief from stress. As you all have said I would want you to make her cry for the loss or else it will be difficult for her to be normal the doctor said and looked at others with weird expression. Though he witnessed the tiff between them he just left after he finished his work. Maan tried to enter the room again when Prem finally pushed him down on the floor with anger don't Khuranna.. don't you dare go near her.


And who the hell are you to stop me from seeing my wife. Maan asked as he dusted himself standing back on his foot. Prem smirked saying kehne ke liye bahut kuch hoon but right now I would say that more than you I have the right on her Mr. Maan Singh Khuranna. Maan was equally smirking hearing him say those words but you are not her husband Mr. Prem Malhotra. Prem got angry and he slapped Maan right at the moment when his lips uttered those words. His eyes furious with fire as he grabbed Maan by his collar dragging him towards the bed where Geet lay unconscious. Husband.. kuansi khushi di tumne Maan ishe.. sirf dard aur dard.. kaha tha yeh pati hone ka pyar haan.. Where was this when she lost her baby... dekho ishe Maan Prem pointed towards Geet and said is she the Geet whom we knew. Bola Maan.. where is the smile Maan.. Prem pushed him away as his anger was taking the worst side. He knew that he would speak something in anger that would ruin everything to such an extent that they could not even make things better. He turned his face saying Tell him Heer.. tell him to go away from here.. keh do ushe ki she does not need him.


I won't go Prem... I need to be with her. Maan was firm with his words and he did not care for anyone at the moment as he just wanted to be with Geet and no one else. He looked straight at Prem and walked towards Geet and sat on her bed caressing her hair with soft touches. Pyar karta hoon Prem... and seeing her with someone else killed me Prem Malhotra... jaan hi nahi paaya when I turned into this heartless moster.. nahi jaan paaya tat m killing the one whom I loved more than anyone else. Prem laughed as he heard his words. Pyar par Aitbaar nahi tha Maan... and ushi Aitbaar ne Geet ko maar diya.. do you get.. she failed with her undying Aitbaar for your love.. pagal thi.. She was mad to play with her love and see her... yeh inaam mila ushe... but not anymore Maan.. she won't be staying with you anymore.. m back and I promise you Maan Singh Khuranna that you will see hell for wat you did.


You can't Prem.. you know you can't do it. Prem narrowed his eyes as he knew wat Maan meant. He smiled saying you forgot Maan.. if I can sacrifice my love for Geet than I can do anything to punish the one who has given pain to my Geet.. bhool jao Maan that you ever knew any Prem ... Now it's only Prem Malhotra. The elders standing there could not understand anything of wat their sons were talking but Rano knew half the truth. She kept quite knowing that it was difficult to stop Prem and Maan but Mr. Malhotra could not take the rude behavior of Prem as it was against his rules that his own son was stopping a husband from seeing his wife. He pulled Prem aside saying Prem, don't try to interfere in their personal matter. Tum shayad bhool rahe ho that he has more right on her being her husband and you are no one now.. bhool jao tat you ever loved her Prem... she now belongs to Maan, Prem.


Bhool hi nahi paa raha hoon Dad.. how can forget wat Maan did. How can I forget that I was away from the one whom I wanted to be happy.. how can I forget that I was... Prem stopped the moment he realized wat he was about to say. He looked at Maan with disgust in his eyes as he remembered that horror filled night where he lost everything. He turned towards Maan and pulled him by his arms Kaha tha Maan.. that you will regret.. par nahi you don't and now you will not even have the time for it. He dragged Maan along with him but stopped hearing a faint voice. He turned to hear the same soft painful voice as Maan smirked hearing the same. You can't take me away Prem and you will never be...her heart and soul seeks for me every time... kuch bhi karo you won't be able to do anything.


Maan... Prem heard once again before he could push Maan out of the room. He looked at Geet with tears in his eyes as she slowly opened her eyes. He wanted to run and shout at her that Maan was wrong but he could not. He hated the way she murmured Maan's name yet he could not do anything to stop her from doing so. He walked slowly towards her bed when he saw a faint smile on her lips as she stared at him. Maan...kah..a..ha..in. Prem closed his eyes hearing her words as he heard her again you..failed.. Prem...mere Maan.. ko nahi.. laaye na...she sat slowly on the bed jerking Prem's hands that were trying to support her to sit. Don't she threw his hands again getting angry on him tum bhool gaye.. mere Maan wapas nahi aaya... Kyu nahi aaye tum.. why did not you come back with my Maan... Mera Aitbaar jhoota than a Prem. She looked with tears in her eyes towards Prem as his own tears wetted his cheeks. He closed his eyes gulping down the painful lump inside him. He wanted to scream shout and tell her that he did, he tired but her Maan killed him.. her Maan tried killing her Aitbaar along with her Prem. He slowly cupped her face but she moved behind hitting herself to the bed post as Prem pulled her closer hugging her tight in his arms. Nahi Geet.. I did not fail.. I did not.. I tried my best.. I did Geet.. but we lost Maan.. we lost him.


Everyone was shocked to hear the words but nothing was getting registered. Mohinder looked at Rano who had her eyes down not meeting him while the Malhotra's saw the same commutation between them. All were unaware about the truth when Heer came forward and explained everyone wat Prem had told her. They could not believe that their own children would ever play such dangerous game and Mr. Malhotra who was high on anger pulled Prem and slapped him not one but thrice for playing with such beautiful emotions. He could not believe that his own son would do such things as he pulled him by his collar questioning him for his sins how could you.. Wat would have happen if you two were to be married Prem.. Heer ke baaremein mein nahi socha kya.


Socha than a Dad.. Prem said with painful voice but how could I be so selfish when my Misty doll asked for my help.. you know na Dad.. wat Geet is to me.. she was the reason for me to smile after I lost my Pari..Pari tho meri behan se jyada meri best friend thi na.. and no one could make me smile.. not even Heer.. but Geet did it Dad... Geet brought Pari's Prem back in this world and when I saw her breaking and carving for Maan I could not do anything.. I could not think about Heer Dad.. sirf Geet thi.. she was everything for me dad.. and I won't mind to even kill myself for her... She was the ray of hope for my smile Dad... but I even hate myself as I hid the biggest truth about my love for Heer from her.. agar jaanthi tho Geet would have never done this.. ush din.. you all don't know Dad.. the day when you all fixed our date for marriage.. my Geet tried killing herself.. she hated that I would lose Heer coz of her... she wanted to die and if not me than we would have Geet with us today... She tried killing herself thinking that her Aitbaar was wrong.. tried killing thinking that Maan never loved her.. and tried killing herself thinking that she was responsible for everyone's pain.


Everyone looked at Prem with tears in their eyes. They knew wat Geet meant for Prem but they could never think that he would play with his own life for her. Mr. Malhotra pulled and hugged him tight feeling so proud that he would even die for his friend while Heer smiled seeing Prem. She was proud to be his soul mate while the one who was left out Maan. Their hug was disturbed by a sound and they saw Geet trying to get out of the bed. Prem and Maan ran to support her. She looked at Prem and then at Maan and once again at Prem asking the same question she used to ask Maan. Will you get my Maan back Prem.. pata hain woh kahi ghoom gaya..ab mujhse pyar hi nahi karta.. Can you get him to me Prem.


M here only Jaan.. dekho its me your Maan. Geet looked at Maan as she heard his voice. She turned her eyes towards Prem and than at Maan saying nahi.. you are not my Maan.. aap tho wahi ho na jo mere saath rehte ho.. But you are not my Maan.. My Maan will come with Prem.. I know Prem Maan ko le aaya hain... he promised me..you know Prem promised me saying that he will get my Maan and he will love me always.. hain na Prem. Prem looked at Maan and he could now guess to wat extent Geet was depressed. She had her Maan with her but she refused to accept it as her Maan. For a moment he wanted to forget everything that Maan did and forgive him for his sins but before he could do or say anything he felt Geet moving out of his hold. He looked up and saw Maan carrying Geet in his arms and laying her on bed and caressing her hair jaan m here.. You said na tat when Prem will come he will get your Maan.. so he did Jaan... dekho m not the one who stayed with you but the Maan whom Prem brought with him... so now sleep Jaan.. You need rest na. Maan said slowly lying down next to her and giving a cold look to Prem. She needs me more than you Prem Maan mocked Prem making Prem to clench his fist. Maan very well knew that Prem would not do anything but he was shocked when he heard Prem saying this was the same ego Maan.. the ego that made you the monster..and wahi aaj bhi hain... I know you still can't get through wat I had said long back...and you will never get it..Tumare paas hoke bhi you could not see the love that she has for you and trust me Maan you will never be.. but don't think that this will be easy.. abhi bahut kuch baaki hain tat needs to be said.. kahi aisa na ho that you will be left alone with no one with you. Prem said eying Geet and he smirked evilly seeing the painful fearful engulfing Maan's face. He smiled turning asking everyone to leave the room so that Geet could rest but seeing their eyes he knew that they could not understand wat his and Maan's words meant. He smiled assuring them it's just that he was angry seeing Geet like this.


Precap: Maan's selfish jealous ego and then Prem's decision... Will their Aitbaar ever meet.

Do like and comment guys.




NEXT : PART 9

Edited by sdlife19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prem ne to bht achi sunayi maan ko
ek adha lagd deta to aur acha hota
poor geet kya haal ho gya hai uska
wo maan ko pehchanti hi nhi
ye uska maan hai hi nhi ye to uske saath rehta hai

prem geet ko dur le jaye maan se
tabhi maan ko kuch akl aayegi

chalo heer ki bhi MU khatam hui prem aur geet ke relation ko lekar

wating for nxt
Edited by shalinimaaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
tilll now iam nt getting any conclusion of this story
will it have a sad ending>????????????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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am totally scared now... will they ever be together...
everyone is wrong first geet prem were wrong and then maan is wrong...
together they are destroying their life beyond repair...
will it have a sad ending cauz i dont think they will be together...am scared literally after each update..waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part
geet didnt recognise maan even though he is with her
prem s truth
if it cums out all will hate maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Maan in total negative shade.Great.So Prem will save Geet and then will Geet go to Prem????

Waiting eagerly to know.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I don't get, why so much melodrama. Being a couple(MG), it should be them who should revolve the problems.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hayee ram ye kya kya ho rha hai
now prem is back n god he is hell angry n hating maanu for his deed n his ego
for me maanueet both were wrong.
shobha yaar me want maanu's pov
like y he never took geet with him to anywhere
i have an idea may b he dont want anyone to see his geet n have a blv that she is only his bt when when she confessed her lv 4 prem he gone mad
ggeet was really wrong playing this game
i really wanna read maanu's pov to know abt his ch more plz add it if u can
i felt more sorry for prem as he was the one who suffered more in maanueet's aitbaar
he has paid hard for his frindship bt really hats off to his frndship
dost ke liye pyaar aur jaan tak kurbaan
bt manueet still in their own land
maanu in his ego n geet in her lv n aitbaar
just waiting 4 more
n my j maanu
cant stop my self to say i lv j maanu
dont know wt he will do😆😆
lvd it
want moreee

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update !!!!!
So prem didnt told anyone tht maan tried to kill him in london ...
i jst dont knw what to say about maan ...he always confuses me with his behaviour ...is ego is much bigger then his love for geet ??? he love geet madly bt his ego is always with him ...
on the other hand is prem who is always ready to do anything for his friend geet's happiness whether its sacrificing his love, khud marjana ya ready to kill anyone for her ...
waiting for nxt update to see one on one of prem n maan ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
even im confused with maan's character now.will he would b good now or remain like this ..n really pls unfold prem n maans past in nxt part.waiting for that

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