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despicable_me

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Posted: 12 years ago

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despicable_me

@despicable_me

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Hey! 😆
So yeah, there you go.. I end this two shot-turned into a SS here 🤪It's really long.. so I hope you didn't get too bored and not reading this post 😆
yeah..yeah.. I know, no Iloveyou and all.. but sometimes, some words are better left unsaid.It's the feel that counts.. the bond that mattersnot what we say.😊Bas isiliye.. a happy ending with a cheesy line! 😛😆
As many of you know I was in the hospital and all, so thank you for praying. I'm perfectly fine and dandy..hoping for some arse kicking soon! 😉

I wrote most of it while I was in the hospital 😆 on my ipod, getting bored! 😛(Point : There was no Arjun sitting in my room though 😔)
So, appreciate my hardwork and leave your love! SYS? 😆
And a bad news, something "bad" happened to my laptop and I lost all my works with it.. so I may or may not continue my other stories. Sorry about that! *gets hit by a shoe**ouch*
Khair till then, enjoy this..
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HeydO_oTI6Q[/YOUTUBE]D.L: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HeydO_oTI6Q
And love me! 😎
Laters baby,Tahi with a T

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Sakshi

@SAKSHI..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Wow... wow...wow...wow...👏.
Amazing ...truely amazing...!!!!!
This is one of THE BEST stories i have ever read...👍🏼..
seriously...you write soo welll...!!!!
Well this the second time i am coming first...!!!! yay yay yay...
ek party to banti hai...hahhahaah🥳
kyuki coming 1st is no big deal but coming first twice on this amazing stoey ...!!!! thumbs up to me...!!!!!
hope you remember my essay...???!!!!! if you dont please go and read that...sach mein bohot mehnat se likha tha...Well ending my bak bak...and coming back to this beautiful story...
Kya likhti ho aap...seriously...!!! I mean please write a book...m seriously saying this please...write a book or a script ...and do let me know ill be in line to buy one...ab line me to lagna padega na...out of stock jo ho jaengi...!!! 😲
Coming back to your update...well kya kahe...kuch choda hai kehne ke liye ?????
Just itna k i love your sakshi...as i said in my last comment...she is the BEST...in the show and you made her perfect...!!!😊
I soo wish gorky sir reads ur story and copy pastes it in his show...haan haan copyright de dena aap ...humare khatir khi sahi...😳
tha way you described the wholle situation was jus awesome...
Sakshi ke dialogues to wah !!!! kya baat hai...maza a gai...
I thoroughly enjoyed the whole update chodo STORY...
That monitor wala was awesome...!!! hahaha ...
then that giving him time to launch his missile...hahaha good one...
now as you have ended up this story m feeling very bad...and you also said you lost ur stories cz ogf ur laptop...Hope it didnt comprise of my favourite Arakshi ?????
M glad you finished this ...nahi to ye kahaani adhori reh jati...
so hm kya keh rae the ...haan as u hv finished ds 1 ...PLEASE PLEASE come up with a new ARAKSHI...story...!!!! pls pls...😳
oh you were in the hospital ? i didnt knw...hope you well now...!!!!!!
SORRY for this lambu comment...and SORRY for annoying u in d very 1st comment ...but not my fault ...WHY did YOU write sooo well haan ?? why ???😉
ok now going to sleep...jab log uthte hain to hm sote hain ...u
and jo log update mein kehte hain hm comment mein kehte hain...
PLEASE IGNORe THE SPELLING MISTAKES...
😊

P..S. I am not mad...!! ( i know ye comment dekh k log yai sochenge...)😆

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Unknown

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Firstly, I don't know what happened to you, but since you are in hospital, it sounds serious to me😲... I hope that you are recovering very very quickly & I want to come & decorate the room, same as you have described sakshi's room to be & even better😃😃

You are right, some things are better left unsaid & this was one of the best examples👏👏... Loved sakshi's childishness... it shows how these two opposites can make each-other whole... The whole SS is the just Beautiful and Perrrfect!! Thanks heaps for an amazing SS❤️❤️...

Love the VM.. It's amazing!! But for me, nothing can beat your VM on 'yeh tune kya kiya'... I'm being serious when I say this, i watch it at least once a day.. It's no joke.. I love that VM tooo much.. My personal favorite😃😃

Nothing else to say... Expect for get bettter sooon❤️❤️❤️... Lots of Well Wishes & hugs & kisses & balloons & flowers!!! Virtually imagine kar lena 😉

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Anu

@anu91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Res/unres

awesomely written dr...

each and every word was awesome...so cool...

sakshi pov was so good...

there conv was amazing...

final word from arjun "i am family and ur husband" was so nice...

VM was just amazing...

well written and superb ending...

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Snehajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏

Nice ending...😊😊😊

Get well soon...😊😊😊

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nicky13

@nicky13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Res
Will unres in Monday after my exam:)

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Awesome finish PC...

did i ever say that i love u meri jaan...nahi toh ab kehthi hoom...

this was so cute and romantic...i am in love with this Arjun and Sakshi...and yes the saint who said those lines...the saint with a tadka! 😉

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Afia Aisf Mahmood

@-Afia-

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Beautiful simple ending. I loved it!

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#150

Tahi di
well tadka marke n ur saint lines oye hoye 😉
simply beautiful n lov it 🤗
missed u
super se upar vm
ps. gud to know u r fine n at home
pps. missing u