|| SS : Make Me Whole || Last Part Page 21 , 9/20/13 - Page 16

tahi di...u r jst fab...
arjun...evn i cant stop followin d words of d saint...hehe..
wah..sakshi..kya sys class lia...
n thn her hillarious imagination...
ahem??!! husband...?? naaahhhiii...
*fainted*...
awsm story..

Di.. It was so beautiful. Please do write more. You are such an awesome writer.
The heart monitor - i can see a bit of you in that instrument. Naughtily interfering arakshi convo. Bringing out the hidden emotions through those beeps. Heart monitor should be named after you - tahi. It was truly tadka maarke. I fell in love with the heart monitor.
Loved the way arakshi fought. Showed the care and concern they have for each other. Arjun - sakshi's husband. And sakshi's heart doing a jhumping jhapak hearing that. Poor her. She didin't realise that the heart monitor will also do 'the jhumping jhapak' showing her true feelings. And arjun is enjoying that... Aww.. Loved it.. Do write more..
My fav characterin your story was 'the tadka maarke heart monitor'.. Claps and whistles for the heart monitor with a t... Enough of my bakvaas. ( me commenting from my phone. Isiliye no smileys. Otherwise i've no idea about what all smileys i would have used. Dedicating every happy vala smiley and emoticon to you)
Swathi

Ps. Forgot ask you- are you alright now? Take care di. I know aap to ho hi ek dangerous pataka... Nothing in the world has the guts to even touch u. But do take care. Get well soon. :-)

awesome ending👏

That was one of the most beautiful VMs i have ever seen...

aww...this is the reason i call u angel...u always bring a smile on my face through ur stories!...nd some times...even tears...making me realise dat hw much i get involved in ur stories...


loved ur description and fantasy about arjun...holy crap...i sooo badly started my fantasies abt arjun...hayy...when he *sorry...censored content ahead*...lolz...

finally sakshi is back...in full fledged form...

sometimes its ok...its ok without 'I Love You's...nd Kisses...

keep writing

love
Aisha

Awesomr ending!

One amazing update dear...
Just a perfect ending...

Arjun and Sakshi are awesome as always...
But I felt one thing more interesting..
The great heart monitor..
It played an important role in this update...
Actually it expressed her unspoken thoughts and emotions...
That too rhythemically...great...

Thanks for such a cute emotional romantic work...
and for the pm...

im glad that you are well better now

It was awesome update..
Loved it:)