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Sia

@satanslove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Absolute Brillaint !!

You should really congratualte yourself tht you managed to finish this one ...Pat on ur back mere traf se 👏😉

Awesomely written ...bilkul tadke wala and damn the monitor !!! sab bata deta hai

He came to her in pieces.. so she can make him whole.

This Line was beautiful and so true

Loved it sesky

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Shivani P

@Lovelost_shivi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#162

I loved it
it was awsm
thnx 4 such a wonderful story

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Precap mein likha tha, A tadka wala serious fluffy update aur Kya diya itni sweet si ending & you are telling" some words are better left unsaid"😡

Dil k armaan sweet si ending mein beh gaye.😭

P.S:You were hospitalized? Hope that you are hale & healthy my dear.Take Care & yes I want to see the Tadke wali Saint back in action😎

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Techie is back with a bang🥳🥳...first of all welcome back..i know you were never gone😆😆😆...soo happy you're feeling better now...miss ya😳

Coming to the update..its was just awesome...love each bits and pieces about it...you perfectly penned it down 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏👏 👏 👏

And then the conversationbetween Arjun and sakshi...was just mindblowing...i could not stop reading and smiling all the way till the end 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

I actually got a mini-attack when i i finished the first part..i thought it was the end but then while scrolling down..i was all balle balle

Hehe i read that part you wrote after the update also 😆 and you know what its the perfect ending...and awww you lappy..hope you can recover all your data by some means soon😊

You sure there was no Arjun in the hospital😉😆😆

Thank you thank you heaps for this beautiful and amazing SS and all the pm 🤗 🤗 ❤️

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

awesome ending
loved every bet of it
it was sweet cute and romantic
thanks for pm
loved it

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Shezi19

@Shezi19

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Thank god u ok and atleast u finish your beautiful story I like it Keep it up

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#167

hi dhriti di🤗... u know its 5.30 am ...n i'm reading ur arjun drooling😆😆😆😆... feeling too sleepy but now aapne hospital me rehkar itni mehnat ki toh itna toh mein bhi kar hi sakti hu😉... hmm...ahye love arjun drooling 😉😉...moonlight me arjun...can just imagine di😆😆😆... and saashi anand ka heart monitor🤣...saare drums baja diye😆😆😆... and then apne umar ki classes😉😉😉...then loved saakshi's style finaly arjun ko hasa diya 21 toppon ki salaami...dishhh...dishhh...dhisshhh😆😆😆😆...loved it di!!!...love u too🤗

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638783

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#168

A beautiful ending to a superb SS👏

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#169

🤗 Awe...there is my bahuria, well and kicking, and I am so glad.

You make me proud baby, this was brilliantly done, and yep excellent work with the heart monitor, no blooper there.😆

I love happy ending, and this one I was definitely expecting a happy ending for, and I am glad you listen to your sasuma once in a while.🤣

I loved that you stuck to their character as they are from start to end, wish I could see this on screen, but not worries I have you and other BBs to keep me dreaming on Arakshi. (If only the stalkers knew...)

Thank you so much for granting my request, I loved it, most especially the end.😉

And bahuria, the VM was perfect, very well done.👏 I love that song.