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Posted: 12 years ago
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Firstly no comments on the quality, as this is written in between exams- more like a stress buster. 😳.

Enjoy!


SwaRon OS : Cups of Coffee.


The bells jingled as he entered the old fashion cafeteria. He looked around and spotted her near the counter.

"Two cups of coffee please "he said interrupting her in the middle.

She swung her head around, clearly annoyed. Her expression eased up when she him, she didn't say a word rather raised a brow, shook her head and went to a booth.

He followed her carrying the two cups of coffee-strong and black, her choice.

She took the coffee, now kept on the table and sipped it, savoring the flavors, he indeed knew her choice.

"I won't say thanks" she stated looking out of the caf.

"Neither do I expect" he replied, sipping his own coffee.

"You see that girl near the right corner booth, she has been ogling at you since you entered" she said

He turned around and saw a girl in a floral dress, who was staring back at him.

"Cute. Not interested. Also someone seems to be keeping a tap on me" he grinned.

"You wish" she shrugged.

"C'mmon you know you're in lou' with me!. You just can't resist the charms".

"Cocky much Shekhawat?"She turned and looked around the cafeteria. "You see that girl in blue dress; get a date with her or even her number!"

"Challenge accepted lady!" he said as he got up.

She shifted in her place to get a clear view. She saw him adjust his hair and move closer to the girl. He had probably cracked a hilarious (sarcasm intended) joke judging by the girl's action. She saw her lean on the counter and write something. But there was some commotion, he didn't wait for her to finish, he mumbled something across the counter and literally ran to their booth.

"You got spoofed by the girl, huh?" she commented.

"Bouncer like boyfriend" he said catching his breath.

Sharon turned around and spotted a huge, bulky guy who looked furious right now.

Her face broke into a smile and soon she was laughing uncontrollably.

"You didn't stand a chance there, he would have thrown you like a rag doll" she remarked in between her laughter.

"Get over it. You know I was not interested, I have got eyes only for you"

"Cheesy" she replied and he smiled proudly taking it as a compliment.

She called the waiter a few minutes later. And what continued later were long interrupted talks, Sharon sudden bursts of laughter on the aforementioned situation, and cups of coffee- strong and black.

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-Adios

Shreya and Kanishtha


P.s. : Why is middle alignment not working?

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sakshibshah thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres

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Super duper cute OS...
Luved it...but next tym Long one...😳
really xams k beech stress remover ho gya tha..
Do write more..pleshh !

Sry fr shrt cmmnt...xams h !
Luv,
Sakshi.
Edited by sakshibshah - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this was a really sweet OS
simply and cute
really well written
and well conceived
i loved it a lot

a stress buster in the middle of exams 😳
thanks to you guys...
he he 😆😆

PLEASE DO PM IT TO ME 😉
WANT IT IN MY INBOX
Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was sweet and bit fabulous... loved it
SanskritiS thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing os 😊
Loved it
sumimita thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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cute..nice and beautiful...
thnks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
i would have regretted if i wouldn't have reserved a spot for myself...
though it was simple and nothing like actually current take or some kind of romantic i say...
it was written very well..
and it was like it was a part of nicholas sparks or jk rowlings chapters...
what i mean is is was written that well..
i am not telling lies as i dont know you...
it was really well written sweet and simple...

Rohan :)
Edited by rohan_smile - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rohan_smile

res

i would have regretted if i wouldn't have reserved a spot for myself...
though it was simple and nothing like actually current take or some kind of romantic i say...
it was written very well..
and it was like it was a part of nicholas sparks or jk rowlings chapters...
what i mean is is was written that well..
i am not telling lies as i dont know you...
it was really well written sweet and simple...

Rohan :)


@RED : That's a HUGE compliment :O and by far the best we have received. Though our writing could never be compared with them..but woah! Thanks a ton!. :) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Short, crisp and lighthearted. Good job, females!

PS My center align never works. 😆




Kankshita

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: muzzy_sk


@RED : That's a HUGE compliment :O and by far the best we have received. Though our writing could never be compared with them..but woah! Thanks a ton!. :) :)


It really match the level..i know it did...you believe or not.. because its the very first one i have read except an FF long back...because jk and writers never actually are as romantic as many writers here at IF are...but their writing is far more better...and i really felt you somewhat matched it...being an exceptionally simple os..it connected somewhat me to think that...cause i really spend a lot of time..both at swaron works and with jk and nicholas works...so it was from my heart not something because i had too...
and great writing deserves appreciation...it motivates the writer..i feel so...

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