MG FF: Forever Together pt 3 pg 31 18th jan

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TRUST and LOVE are the main things in any relationship, If we handle the relations with love and care then the life will be a total bliss. It takes time to understand some people, but understanding life partner is very important. And the time between engagement and marriage is very precious. It is the time where we can understand each other. This story is all about the journey of 2 individuals, how their life changed after the entry of the life partner in their life. This story is all about the LOVE AND TRUST.


PROLOGUE


A 23 years old geet is running in the whole house while her mom is chasing her with a glass of juice in her hand. Her mom stopped running as she is panting heavily. "Main choti bacchi thodi nah u tumare peeche peeche bhaagne ki. Mujhse nai hoga baba mujhse nai hoga. Main tumari bauji ko bulati hu (I am not a kid to run behind you. I can't run anymore, I will call your dad)" told her mom and sat on the couch still panting. Geet pouted and looked up complaining to her babaji as usual. "What is this babaji? I don't want to drink that pathetic juice, my fever is also gone now. But no one will listen to me"

"Enough geet, stop complaining to babaji. Tuje aisa dekhkar kya sochenge wo log. Kam se kam cooking tho seeklo shaadi se pehle. Par tum kuch karti bhi nahi tumare peeche hum idhar udhar bhaagna hai. Tum choti bachi nahi ho, ab ghar ka kaam bhi karna seekho (What will they think seeing you like this. At least learn how to cook before marriage. You don't do anything and we have to run behind you for everything. Now you are not a kid, learn how to do household things)" told her mom frustatingly.

Geet's eyes welled up with tears; she didn't speak anything and went to her room closing the door harshly. "Mujhe nai karni koi shaadi. Aap sun rahe ho na babaji (I don't want to marry anyone, are you listening na god)" and she is crying lying on the bed. Geet's mom opened the door and saw her crying. She felt her eyes too welled up seeing her princess crying. "Geetu" called her mom. Geet got up and sat on the bed making grumpy face wiping her tears. Rano (Geet's mom) sat beside her and wiped her tears.

"Meri bachi ro kyun rahi hai (Why my princess is crying?)" asked rano. Geet is looking at her from corner of her eyes. Rano saw that and smiled. "Actually I thought to prepare chocolate cake as my son-in-law is coming today. When my geet is angry on me I can't do anything" told rano seriously. Instantly geet jumped from her bed and told "No mumma, he likes chocolate cake very much, please prepare na" asked geet making baby face but soon realized what she told and blushed hard. "Acha???" teased rano. Geet rushed to the washroom blushing hard and to avoid teasing from her mumma.


Here is the small prologue friends, some of you might have read this in BLOG. But daily i am getting blog requests, so whatever i decided to update my new stories in IF itself.


Love

Chinni


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congrats for the new story dear
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Part 1


Note: Past in ITALIC

Geet opened her wardrobe to get ready for her college. She got ready and came down for breakfast but what surprised her most is no one is there on the dining table and everyone is busy in doing some or the other work. When rano saw geet she came towards her, cupped her face and kissed her forehead. "Maa, what is happening? Any relatives are coming to our house?" asked geet. Rano smiled and told "No geet, aaj tumko dekhne ke liye ladke wale aarahe hai. Aaj tu college nahi jayegi, tu apne kamre mein aaram karo"

Geet is utterly shocked to listen this piece of information. "Maa, what are you saying? You just showed me his (geet st: kamina) photo yesterday and today they are coming" asked geet. "Geet don't panic dear they are just coming to see you. Hum thodi na abi shaadi kar lete hain" told rano making her understand. Geet silently left to her room and stood near the window looking outside. She is in a fix what to do? She didn't complete her studies still and marriage, responsibility she is not ready for all this. She can't dis-respect her bauji too. He doesn't do anything against her wish. If geet doesn't like the boy then he will straight away refuse for this alliance.

It's not that geet doubts her father's selection but she has some dreams to be fulfilled and she will not compromise in that matter. She want to complete her medicine (she is studying 4th year now) and complete her MD. She won't compromise her studies no matter what. At the same time she is nervous too. With lot of confusion she lied down on the bed thinking of what will happen and what turn will her life takes. Don't know when she slept, because of deep thinking she fell asleep.

Geet want to slap herself for thinking about her man so stupidly before meeting him. she is feeling something in her stomach with the thought of meeting him today. After their engagement they didn't get a chance to meet each other as he went to Singapore for some project and had to stay back there for more than 2 weeks. Though geet was sad with the news as she thought it would be better as they about each other before marriage. But all her thoughts were crashed with his business trip and as usual she cursed his trip for the upteempth time but what is the use, nothing.

She got ready in a pair of jeans and top, she kept herself simple and a pair of ear rings, applied lip gloss and finally kohl. He is coming to take her with him for a date. He didn't even call him after coming, it was just a message he left for her about this date. And she told the same to her mom. More than geet, her mom was so excited that for the first time her son-in-law is coming to their house. So she decided to make his favorite chocolate cake, as they came to know about his favorite cake when his mom arranged both their favorite cakes on their engagement.

When geet got ready and came down he saw her dad and mom in the hall. Geet smiled at her bauji and wished him. "Hii bauji, aaj aap itne jaldi kaise aye?" asked geet. "Hello beta, pata chala ki mere damaadji aarahe hain. Tho ghar mein hona hi chahiye na" told mohinder. Geet rolled her eyes as from morning they are doing his chanting, damaadji damaadji. Geet in cute anger told "You never came early for me" Mohinder laughed out loud but some ones statement made her happy and proud. "Oh yes, he never came early for you but the matter is he didn't go to office from last one week as you are suffering with high fever" "Ohh, so sad" giggled geet seeing his angry face, but soon his anger turned into a smirk which wiped off geet's smile.

"I think you are hiding something from me" asked geet. He laughed out loud and started running. Geet too chased him, they were climbing sofa, chair, even dining table too. "Oyyy juk jaa warna thik nahi hoga" warned geet. He laughed out loud but geet was fast and caught him arms. "Tell me what you did?" asked geet. He nodded in a no. "Jyada natak mat kar" warned geet but geet thought something and ran outside. She is utterly shocked to see the condition of it. "Raaajjj" shouted geet on top of her lungs. "You kutta, kamina, nalayak how dare you touch it without my permission. I will kill you" geet ran inside and started chasing him again.

"Geet, ruko bechare ne kya kiya" asked rano as raj hid behind her. "Maa, I am warning you just move from here" shouted geet, she is in full rage and her fit for nothing twin used her car in this week. No no not car her jaanu, her most favorite car which mohinder gifted for her birthday and how dare he touch it, no no used it that too without her permission. "You idiot, stupid tere bike pe nai jaa sakte the. Tumne mera jaanu ko use kiya, you better some out or else I will kick you now" warned geet again climbing on the couch trying to catch raj.

"Hii jeeju" wished raj looking at the entrance, geet turned back to look who is it? Her eyes widened in shock and immediately climbed down the sofa embarrassed. Raj tried to muffle his laugh seeing her flushed face, where as her prince charming is in shock seeing her wild avatar and fighting for car is amused him the more. So in future he definitely has to be careful.

Geet is totally a gone case now, she didn't dare to look at him while her prince charming is waiting for her one glimpse. Mohinder is talking with him about his business and his recent trip, whereas geet went inside to bring coffee for everyone. She served everyone, when she went near him her hands are shivering and she didn't dare to look at him as she was too much conscious as he saw her fighting with his brother that too climbing on the sofa and shouting on top of her lungs. When she went near raj to serve coffee she glared at him angrily as he was the sole reason of what all happened. Raj just kept quiet knowing how shy her sister is and he didn't dare to tease further.

After formal talking with everyone he took geet with him and escorted her to his car while he himself settled in the driver seat. She never felt this much shy talking with anyone. Going alone with him is making her nervous as well as happy. Happy that finally getting a chance to talk with him and nervous as she don't know what he might be thinking about her. She decided to keep all her thoughts aside and just relax but her heart is not listening to her and it is beating like a super fast express.

Seeing her silent and the shy smile on her face he thought she won't be starting the conversation, he decided he himself with start the conversation but he is thinking what to talk or at least how to start the conversation. He won't come under talkative people and he was always answering to the question types. This is all very new to him and all thanks to his younger bro as he compelled him to take his would-be sister-in-law for a date. "What is happening to me? Why I am not able to talk anything?" he thought and concentrated on the road. "Why he is not talking anything? Is he expecting me to talk?" thought geet. "Ufff geet stop worrying, he is not some stranger now. You both are engaged and he is your life partner" encouraged geet herself.

It's very new to both of them, if it was a business meeting or something he would have given a presentation by now and if it was her friend or brother or her parents she would have eaten their head with her silly talks and stupid fighting's. Not able to bear the silence anymore both decided to break the silence. And by that time they reached the venue, he stopped the car and smiled at geet. Not to forget geet is totally fida over his smile. He, like a perfect gentle man opened the car door and asked her to come down through his eyes.

Geet got down and both of them went inside the restaurant. She saw no one in the restaurant and got confused, what does she know that he likes privacy and for his fiance can't he book the hotel for a day. They both settled down and guess geet didn't find a waiter too in the restaurant. Seeing her confused face he cleared and for the first time he talked breaking their silence and awkwardness too. "I don't want any disturbance so I have booked the hotel just for us" he told. Though geet is shocked but somewhere she is liking everything, his each and every small gesture and she didn't speak anything still he understood what is in her mind. A small smile formed on her pink cheeks making him smile too.

"Would you like to have any drinks?" he asked. "Noo" told geet finally looking at him. Actually she is nervous and confused what to call him, by his name or something called "JI" and basically calling him "JI" doesn't suit neither of them so she decided to call by his name.

Precap: Date continues but will they talk??


Here is part 1 of FT, Give me your precious likes and comments.

Love

chinni

Edited by chinni10 - 11 years ago
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chinni font size thoda bada karsakogi because its small please dont mind
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Originally posted by: priya111111

chinni font size thoda bada karsakogi because its small please dont mind

Yaar i am trying to increase but ho hi nhi raha hai. I will try once again 😳
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Originally posted by: chinni10

Yaar i am trying to increase but ho hi nhi raha hai. I will try once again 😳



haan now its better👏
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Originally posted by: priya111111



haan now its better👏

Oh thanks finally 😃
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congrats for new stoy...😊
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thank u for updating it in IF...

waise mujhe koi problem nahin hai blog se bhi but IF mein bhi achcha lagta hai...

wonderful start...

waiting for its next part...

thanx for pm...

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