MG FF: Forever Together pt 3 pg 31 18th jan - Page 18

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome ff chinni
me loved it
maan is silent types n geet is bak bak type
but loved the combo
waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful. Love the soft romance. Please do continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
i just read both updates yar and loved both a lot:)
u Enjoy:)
we'll wait fr update:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 3

I dedicate this update to Pihu (PariMishty).. Wish you many more happy returns of the day. I know i know i am late, so sorry for that. And as a token of sorry will update another part on monday.

Happy Birthday dear, God bless you😃🤗




Note: Add "JyothiK" for PMS.

Maan reached KM and parked his car, a small smile on his lips is playing all the while. Vicky, who is waiting for him saw maan coming and was about to call him but backed off seeing his smile. He was actually tensed, he may be silent even on his date but his smile is saying something. "Finally someone came into his life who can bring out the cheerful maan" thought Vicky and left to his room feeling happy and contended. Maan changed and lied down on his bed. "How can someone talk so much, even if I try not more than 2-3 words come out of my mouth? She is such an antique piece" thought maan and smiled. His mind and heart is clouded with her thoughts. Thinking about his fianc he slept off.

On the other hand geet went to her room and changed into her night dress. She collapsed on the bed taking the gift with her. She smiled looking at it, first gift from her would-be. She closed her eyes and clutched the box to her chest. Geet slowly opened the packet and then opened the box. She found a pair of anklets in the box, she took them out and smiled when they made chun chun sound. Geet caressed those anklets and got up. She stretched forward her right leg and wore the anklet; she did the same with other leg. She got up and stood on the bed and is jumping like a small child to hear the sound of anklets again and again. She sat on the bed with a thud and laughed at her own act. She doesn't know why she is smiling and laughing so much today, but the reason is only maan. She is feeling so special after her date with maan. She doesn't know how she is going to manage her studies and marriage life but now she is sure she will be successful with maan beside her. A kind has built up in her today after their meet. Love, respect and admiration in his eyes for her made her confidence boost up. She felt she can trust on him for rest of her life, after her parents she felt safe with him. She was nervous to go with him on a date, but when she came to know that maan asked her parents for taking her on a date, she respected him. When he said her to be like what she is made her love him. As every parent, even geet's parents too were worried about her marriage. Even though they know about their family well they were worried how maan will take care of her and mostly she don't think what she does but by the time she realize it will be late. Today she felt he is one who can control and change her. He carries an aura which makes everyone respect him and admire him. Geet respects him, admires him and also loves him. Love, a new found feeling for her. She doesn't know why she loves him but she loves him deeply. May be because of his nature, his aura, his respect and love for her.

"I don't know what is happening with me today" thought geet and lied down on the bed to catch some sleep. She suddenly got up after few minutes and thought "I didn't even thank him for his beautiful gift" thought geet and slapped her forehead. She took her mobile and is about to call her but stopped. "Its mid-night, he might be sleeping" she thought and kept the mobile aside. "Hmmm I will call him tomorrow morning" she slept after some time.

Next day morning, maan got up and completed his routine. He took his mobile but kept it aside dropping the idea of calling geet. He wants to ask whether she liked the gift or not. But not wanting to disturb her in the morning, he didn't call her. But the second he kept the mobile aside it beeped. Maan immediately took the mobile and checked the message hoping it is from geet, but no it is from his secretary intimating him about the morning meeting. He felt sad and replied back her. After like 5 minutes his mobile again beeped, he thought again it is related to some office work. He checked the message uninterestedly, but when he saw the name his eyes twinkled and his lips curved into a small smile. "Good morning maan, sorry forgot to thank you yesterday for the gift. Thank you very much maan" geet messaged him. Seeing her mobile he is on cloud 9, his face broke into a wide smile like a small boy got his favorite candy.

Without wasting much time he too replied back. "Good morning geet, no need to thank me. Did you like it?" asked maan not able to control his curiosity. Geet smiled widely seeing his reply and that too this soon, "Seems like he is waiting for my reply" thought geet and the feeling of maan waiting for her reply made her so happy. "I loved it very very much :D" replied geet. Maan immediately opened her message and his heart did a mini bhangda with the fact of geet liking his gift. He didn't reply after that. His mobile beeped again, "By the way what are you doing this early in the morning. I thought you will be sleeping" messaged geet. Maan checked time and its 7:30 am, "7:30 is early in the morning" thought maan shocked. "Geet, its 7:30 and I have to leave for important meeting in half an hour" replied maan. "Ya ya I know mom is shouting from half an hour, today is Monday and I am very lazy. How I wish every day is Sunday" replied geet. Maan want to bang his head somewhere, everyday and Sunday. "Now be a good girl and get up, don't trouble aunty much" replied maan. Geet rolled her eyes and replied "You should support me Mr. Khurana but not my mom. See even that kamina Raj is also sleeping but mom is only shouting at me" Maan laughed at her complaints and replied "That's so sad. Ok what are your college timings" Maan didn't get reply, he waited for sometime but didn't get. "May be she is getting ready" thought maan and went down. He had breakfast with his family, meanwhile his cell beeped 2 times but he didn't check as he is with his family and if Vicky come to know it is from geet then he will tease him all day.

After breakfast, maan got into his car and going to office. He then checked his mobile to see 2 replies from geet. "Sorry for late maan, I finished a mug of water on Raj" "10am to 3pm, such a boring timing na I know, I really very eagerly want to become a doctor" replied geet. "Poor raj, I pity him. Enjoy college geet, it's the best time in your life. After that you won't get time to enjoy and soon you will be busy with your life (wink)" replied maan. "You too enjoy maan, mom says whoever marry me their life will be a living hell and they needs patience to control me" replied geet laughing out loud. "Ok geet, will talk to you later" replied maan. "Ok maan, babye. Hey one second, if you are free today evening can we meet near our college" asked geet. Geet waited for the reply but it didn't come "Might be he is in meeting" Geet got ready for college and also waiting for maan's reply.

Precap: Will maan come?


Here is part 3 of FT, Give me your precious likes and comments.

Love

chinni

Edited by _GoldenStarz_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely part😊
maan & geet both happy after their 1st date😉
maaneet sms convo was too good👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
loved it
maan and geet thinking about each other after they came from their first dinner date
geet saw what maan gifted her and she wore those anklets and thought that she forgot to thank maan...
next day moring maan wanted to call geet and ask about the gift is she loved it or not but didn't call as he dont want to disturb her in the morning
geet messaged him saying thanks and there starts their messag message saga...
nice precap
eagerly waiting to see wether maan will trun up to meet geet or not
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Posted: 11 years ago
chinni dear very nice ff.. love tge concept.. love geets funny character.. cont soon hun
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan na zaroor ayega...itna sunehra mauka thodi chidega...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Fabulous part maan is adoring geet antics wow
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
after the date both are comfortable with each other

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