OS: Papa Ki Pari

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AMAN

@grintson

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

chal mai hi kar deti hun PM..

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ind4u

@ind4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: grintson
chal mai hi kar deti hun PM..

hey Aman rini did it already. i told her how to do it

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RINI

@aphrodite143

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

ya! but hinz told that it can't be done since its against forum rules

& OS will come to the first page only when someone comments in the thread.

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AMAN

@grintson

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

ya even i got to know that from hinz... koi baat ni... hum comment kar ke ise first page par rakhenge... u jus focus on Papa ki pari Part II

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AMAN

@grintson

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

dusra part jaldi hi laana..

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Aurin Rahman

@AurinMishu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Amazing writing 👏
Very Beautiful ❤️
Keep it up 👍🏼

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lily.lotus.rosy

@lily.lotus.rosy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

All I can say is..Awesome, fatafati..out of the world & very emotional!!👏👏Kudos Rini!👍🏼 Waiting for the next part!!

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urmi

@khushi987

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: aphrodite143
Finally guys i'm writing an OS
because after tuesdays episode this thought spontaneously came to me,almost like a dream,
WARNING
this OS is not funny ,neither creative
sirf innocence se pakane ki koshis ki hai,tasty lage toh 😃

PAPA KI PARI (I)
amita & amit at doctor saroj's chamber.
amit is as usual confused & amita for obvious reasons is sad rather depressed.
Our sensitive doctor notices amit's 'not concerned " atitude & the pain amita is going through, something strikes her
after amita's checkup,she says something very logical but...
something which is...well u see what's it😲😲😲

DR.Saroj:dekhiye mr.& mrs shah i think (with a very trifle hesitation),well i think u guys are quite young & (looking at amit) not really too ready for taking responsibility of a baby & theres nothing to be ashamed of it,dekhiye maine pehle bhi kahi hai ki pregnancy ke 9 mahine dono parents ke liye ek beautiful journey hoti hai
aur agar ye journey hi beautiful nehi ho toh aap log legal abortion ke liye kabhie bhi opt kar sakte hai! there's nothing wrong about it. haan ek doctor hone ke naate mujhe ye sab kehna nehi chahiye but think ! baby is a serious responsibility!!!

amita is shattered.Amits recent behaviour clearly states he's not happy with the baby.
so... will ...he..ammu could'nt think anymore...but what about her ...she had already started to feel the new life within her...the heart that'll beat with hers...will be nourished by her veins...the life which will breathe wihin her...sleep within her...feed within her...her life was incomplete without it...but what if amit...how will she stop him??what will she explain?? how can she??...she loves amit a lot...lot...& her thoughts becomes hazy & so does her vision.

 That Night


amita is asleep in her bed room but amit is not by her side...where is he????? 😲😲😲 

mudisland is looking beautiful in the dark ,wind is blowing hard as if its perturbed by something,something which is not allowing it to be in peace & calm down,


just like amit's heart,something is not letting it be in peace ,he was sittimg on a rock by the shore..


why did she talk of abortion??? why?? & why the hell is it hurting me ,i did't want a baby,she sensed it,spoke out...no..i did'nt like it

but when amita told me "amit aap papa banne wale ho! (which is supposed to be a good news for me) i was'nt happy either ...i didn't lift her up in my arms or shouted how happy i was...i wasn't HAPPY AFTERALL...when it's the best moment of every fathers life...i'm not concerned about MY OWN BABY ..JUST dreaming of the worst..thinking about my comfort ...i must be the most insensitive person of this world.everyone thinks so...& most importantly amita does....selfish too...thimking just abut myself...a BEAST...who can aparently think of mudering his own blood...HE FELT BAD...LONELY...his thoughts were becoming worst when suddenly he was interupted


it was a shadow, was it an animal ??but he had nver heard about animals sprowling over mudisland in dark nights
was is an human -being, was it a better human being that him...god what was was he thinking...he said to himself...


it was a girl, she was a girl,a small girl ,she might not be of more that 3 years,but she had intense dark eyes,amit could not look away from the magical pair...the girl's expression was blank as she walked towards him but when she came nearer he saw pain in her eyes,


simultaneously he saw her pale cheeks, her rosy pink lips shaped perfectly like rose petals,her pitch black curly hair...she mesmerised him...


by then the girl had come very close to him...beta aap ki mummy-papa kahan hai?? he felt like asking but was stopped by something like a lump in his throat


the girl came closer ,gently she climbed on his lap...as if they knew each other for ages...& she had been doing the same all this while...both of them ...yes both of them


heaven...she felt like a feather...her touch was magic...she must be an ANGEL ,
slowly her hands reached his cheeks,she rubbed her hands across them,
to amits astonishment ,just he he realised ,they were moist...was he crying ...but ...i mean why???


he looked into her eyes,he loved them,he looked at her lips,her hair,her pale cheeks,he loved them all...he wanted her to touch him more...more ...& more & more


he was clueless but ...somehow he felt ,this girl understood him...more than anyone else in the world did,for this girl he was not the MURDERER.


this girl was hurt by his pain,she had rubbed his tears with her little magical hands
at once he knew that even when the entire world would stant up against him this girl would be by his side...to understand him...to rub his cheeks with her agical hands...


suddenly she did something & amit followed
she sat down beside him ,legs folded & amit ,laid down his head on her lap(just like a troubled & tired child does to his mother),


he felt good,as if a load had been lifted up from upon his shoulders...
 the wind was blowing softly,it no longer seemed perturbed,


and it was just then that the angel spoke ...in her magical voice ...she said into his ears


 the magical word "PAPPA"!!!! ( almost in a whisper)


AMIT SMILED PEACEFULLY ,HIS WEARY HEAD PLACED UPON HER LAP ,HIS EYES CLOSED AS A DROP OF TEAR ROLLD DOWN FROM THE CORNER OF HIS EYES...!!!!


P.S-He knew what he wanted ...he knew what he could do for his angel...& that was it

IF U GUYS LIKE IT THEN ONLY I'LL GO FOR PART 2,SO YOUR COMMENTS ARE IMPORTANT which i promise will be more creative than this!!