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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
chal mai hi kar deti hun PM..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: grintson

chal mai hi kar deti hun PM..


hey Aman rini did it already. i told her how to do it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
ya! but hinz told that it can't be done since its against forum rules
& OS will come to the first page only when someone comments in the thread.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ya even i got to know that from hinz... koi baat ni... hum comment kar ke ise first page par rakhenge... u jus focus on Papa ki pari Part II
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
dusra part jaldi hi laana..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Amazing writing 👏
Very Beautiful ❤️
Keep it up 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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All I can say is..Awesome, fatafati..out of the world & very emotional!!👏👏Kudos Rini!👍🏼 Waiting for the next part!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aphrodite143

Finally guys i'm writing an OS

because after tuesdays episode this thought spontaneously came to me,almost like a dream,
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this OS is not funny ,neither creative
sirf innocence se pakane ki koshis ki hai,tasty lage toh 😃


<font size="5">PAPA KI PARI (I)</font>
<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">amita & amit at doctor saroj's chamber.</font>
<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">amit is as usual confused & amita for obvious reasons is sad rather depressed.</font>
<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Our sensitive doctor notices amit's 'not concerned " atitude & the pain amita is going through, something strikes her</font>
<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">after amita's checkup,she says something very logical but...</font>
<font size="2"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">something which is...well u see what's it</font>😲😲😲</font>

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="3">DR.Saroj:dekhiye mr.& mrs shah i think (with a very trifle hesitation),well i think u guys are quite young & (looking at amit) not really too ready for taking responsibility of a baby & theres nothing to be ashamed of it,dekhiye maine pehle bhi kahi hai ki pregnancy ke 9 mahine dono parents ke liye ek beautiful journey hoti hai</font>
<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="3">aur agar ye journey hi beautiful nehi ho toh aap log legal abortion ke liye kabhie bhi opt kar sakte hai! there's nothing wrong about it. haan ek doctor hone ke naate mujhe ye sab kehna nehi chahiye but think ! baby is a serious responsibility!!!</font>


<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">amita is shattered.Amits recent behaviour clearly states he's not happy with the baby.</font>
<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">so... will ...he..ammu could'nt think anymore...but what about her ...she had already started to feel the new life within her...the heart that'll beat with hers...will be nourished by her veins...the life which will breathe wihin her...sleep within her...feed within her...her life was incomplete without it...but what if amit...how will she stop him??what will she explain?? how can she??...she loves amit a lot...lot...& her thoughts becomes hazy & so does her vision.</font>


<font size="2"> That Night</font>
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<font size="3">amita is asleep in her bed room but amit is not by her side...where is he????? 😲😲😲 </font><font size="2"></font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"></font><font size="3"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">mudisland</font> </font><font size="2">is looking beautiful in the dark ,wind is blowing hard as if its perturbed by something,something which is not allowing it to be in peace & calm down,</font>
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<font size="2">just like amit's heart,something is not letting it be in peace ,he was sittimg on a rock by the shore..</font>
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<font size="2">why did she talk of abortion??? why?? & why the hell is it hurting me ,i did't want a baby,she sensed it,spoke out...no..i did'nt like it</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3">but when amita told me "amit aap papa banne wale ho! (which is supposed to be a good news for me) i was'nt happy either ...i didn't lift her up in my arms or shouted how happy i was...i wasn't HAPPY AFTERALL...when it's the best moment of every fathers life...i'm not concerned about MY OWN BABY ..JUST dreaming of the worst..thinking about my comfort ...i must be the most insensitive person of this world.everyone thinks so...& most importantly </font><font size="5">amita does.</font><font size="3">...selfish too...thimking just abut myself...a BEAST...who can aparently think of</font><font size="5"> mudering</font><font size="3"> his own blood...HE FELT BAD...LONELY...his thoughts were becoming worst when suddenly he was interupted</font></font>
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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">it was a shadow, was it an animal ??but he had nver heard about animals sprowling over mudisland in dark nights</font>
<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">was is an human -being, was it a better human being that him...god what was was he thinking...he said to himself...</font>
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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">it was a girl, she was a girl,a small girl ,she might not be of more that 3 years,but she had intense dark eyes,amit could not look away from the magical pair...the girl's expression was blank as she walked towards him but when she came nearer he saw pain in her eyes,</font>
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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">simultaneously he saw her pale cheeks, her rosy pink lips shaped perfectly like rose petals,her pitch black curly hair...she mesmerised him...</font>
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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">by then the girl had come very close to him...beta aap ki mummy-papa kahan hai?? he felt like asking but was stopped by something like a lump in his throat</font>
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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">the girl came closer ,gently she climbed on his lap...as if they knew each other for ages...& she had been doing the same all this while...both of them ...yes both of them</font>
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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">heaven...she felt like a feather...her touch was magic...she must be an ANGEL ,</font>
<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">slowly her hands reached his cheeks,she rubbed her hands across them,</font>
<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">to amits astonishment ,just he he realised ,they were moist...was he crying ...but ...i mean why???</font>
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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">he looked into her eyes,he loved them,he looked at her lips,her hair,her pale cheeks,he loved them all...he wanted her to touch him more...more ...& more & more</font>
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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">he was clueless but ...somehow he felt ,this girl understood him...more than anyone else in the world did,for this girl he was not the MURDERER.</font>
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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">this girl was hurt by his pain,she had rubbed his tears with her little magical hands</font>
<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">at once he knew that even when the entire world would stant up against him this girl would be by his side...to understand him...to rub his cheeks with her agical hands...</font>
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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">suddenly she did something & amit followed</font>
<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">she sat down beside him ,legs folded & amit ,laid down his head on her lap(just like a troubled & tired child does to his mother),</font>
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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">he felt good,as if a load had been lifted up from upon his shoulders...</font>
<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> the wind was blowing softly,it no longer seemed perturbed,</font>
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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">and it was just then that the angel spoke ...in her magical voice ...she said into his ears</font>
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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> the magical word "PAPPA"!!!! ( almost in a whisper)</font>
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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">AMIT SMILED PEACEFULLY ,HIS WEARY HEAD PLACED UPON HER LAP ,HIS EYES CLOSED AS A DROP OF TEAR ROLLD DOWN FROM THE CORNER OF HIS EYES...!!!!</font>
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">P.S-He knew what he wanted ...he knew what he could do for his angel...& that was it</font>



IF U GUYS LIKE IT THEN ONLY I'LL GO FOR PART 2,SO YOUR COMMENTS ARE IMPORTANT which i promise will be more creative than this!!



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awesome awesome... n realy tasty as u said in above ur os...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
dusra part toh aaj ke episode mein hi ho gaya!!!!
i was about to show amit's crazy happiness on realising the true essence of fatherhood & his eyes spoke everything today.
but promise ,will surely come up with something new...
luv u all.
u guys make even ordinary things look special.

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