NIGHTMARE-3# PART 33, 17TH JUNE 2014

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 NIGHTMARE
 

 
 
SUMMARY
This story revolves around four people..Asad -Zoya and Ayaan- Humera..The story starts from the day when zoya dodges rose to attend an office party kept on her honor..Zoya reaches the hall but a strange feeling keeps on creeping on her about danger..swaying it off further she tries to enjoy her present happiness..its been a while when she felt a hand creeping her from behind and next thing she knows she was dancing with than man..she tries to see him but he avoids when she finally comeacross about the man identity..earth slips beyond her feet..she realised now she has been stuck in with her worst nightmare Asad ahmed khan..
the story moves forward with a slight suspense as to who is this man and what he wants? Asad takes her to a scary lonely house which was burned somewhere in past..he kidnaps her and torture her to no extent...zoya repeatedly keeps reasoning with him but he is just not ready to listen to her..
than we come to next part of story where we sees Gaffur siddique zoya's father is very worried and trying to search for her daughter..gaffur trusty man Ayaan is his last hope..but later we found that he too is cheating gaffur as he is with asad..the story moves to its next phase where we sees rose sister of nuzzat talks to armaan (zoya's frend ) to rescue zoya..but alas the very momnet itself he dies by the commando in disguise.
here we all come across to the very new face that "MALIK"..Malik is very influential man in town but is in disguise.he owns everyone and control them like a puppet..we also come across to a new face who is in dark ,..a cigar man..!! who knows are theyu same or not..
story moves at its pace when rose reads the diary and comes across the code..the code related to asad and humera..what is it? she tries to answer but finds none..
rose comes to know that zoya was been raped by her brother armaan..and she comes across with many tiny turns that took place in zoya;s life...which includes the deal and the file too..
humera on other hand goes in search for her aapi..zoya.. with ayaan..she is pregnant..she is happy with her present life unaware of the fact that the person she is finding is in mess..
zoya here is been tortured by asad too death..she cant handle more and she goes black out coz of stabbing..asad heals her and makes her alive..but zoya plays smat and the very next morning she runs away... asad as usual doesnt make it easy for her as he tries to stop her..however here another revelation comes where we got to know that the scars on asad's body is coz of zoya..and zoya's father has tortured him like animal..pulling nails and all..asad spills out the complete story but still zoya who worship her dad as lord denies evry fact kept forth..
asad gets disheartened as zoya leaves him caged in the house throwing the key at a distance so when he picks it up she is already left..
in the mean while humera with ayaan too reaches the place with zoya..
yes zoya is back but coz of deal..ayaan made her come with him threatning about leaving hummy in her pregnancy..
in the house zoya tries her level best  to hide about the torture by asad and her vulnerable condition...
For humera asad is like her brither ..she knew that ayaan and asad are brother which was beknownst to zoya till then..
asad who now knew the fact that his girl dint betray him ever..tries to fix things up but however miserably fail in..
This story gives a glimpse about the 2 years back story where hummy was young and she had played a game of codes...
rose finds the code and in disbelief make attempts to save zoya..she calls gaffur and fix a meeting..
the story have a turn when dilshad and rashid comes to visit asad and ayaan in their hideout place..they ask for a file which ayaan had carried it with him..they give the file to rashid and before walking down rashid spills the venom on their sons face about their girls..
zoya whos was very weak tries to get the things correct and to her surprise she finds that the man she was dating so far was an enemy son and the person she trusted second was his brother.. ...the blue file suspense again pop out..
everything turns to left and right when zoya finds the file that has been a mystery is been given to rashid..
zoya fails to take it and she passed out..here the rashid and dilshad have sended  commandoes to kill the girls ..the khan bros try thier best to save them but unfortunately humera lost her child...
the time passes and we gets to know that co of this torture by asad zoya has completely lost herself..she is too scraaed of asad presence..asad tries to bind up things but at its slow pace the things are changing for better..
we come to know that gaffur is malik's pet ...may be in debt with malik a lot...he is loyal to him and definately is no good father...
gaffur was in prison on defence assault thing in saudi...and the reason behind it was the file..
one more revelation took place when we finds that zoya is not gaffurs daughter and nikhat is his niece...
nikhat is been ordered by gaffur to kill zoya but however by asad's effort and her own reasons she save zoya and herself too with smartness..
imraan is Nikhats's boyfreind..and nikhat is the widow of anwar who passed away 2 years back in attempt to get the file..

rose finds out through nuzzat the more deadly fact of her evil bro who was sycho lover ...and obsessed with zoya...
the table turns when the fact comes across to humera and she calls gaffur for help..here the bro takes their girl and runs on the road in different direction..
asad halts in front of a village which we found out that the khala there is already familiar to him from those days when asad was running and hiding from gaffur..
humera unwillingly is captured by her love and soon the things gets right between them untill she gets  call by nuzzat about rose missing!
humera visits nuzat and there she comes to know about more truth on her love ..ayaan cheated her! that what is running in her mind...while ayaan is trying his level best to make her believe his love...more fact and truth are encountered here
asad on other hand fights with his own guilt and tries to heal zoya adn then destiny plays its game and he gets a news about zoya's pregnancy with his child and as destiny plays its role asad gets marry to zoya..but zoya is still unaware of everything and is in pure childlike state..
here the major storms hit the life as Akram the curropt officer in decade enters their life once again...the earlier he entered was handled by nikhat alone..and this time too she is his first victim...
will nikhat survive this is still be known...
the story still has many revelation stay tune ...

MILLI πŸ˜ƒ
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So here am presenting you the third thread of Nightmare. It couldnt have been possible without my lovely readers πŸ€—
I really thank you from the bottom of my heart to each one of you for your words of encouragement. Love each one of you <3

 SILENT READER ONLY FOR YOUR SUPPORTπŸ‘
 
 

 MY NAN SENSE MONKEY GROUP...just to know u all..i love you!😳

 

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Character sketch..

 
 
Asad Ahmed Khan...

 

A tall handsome guy wid an impressive
 well built physique , 25 in age .. handsome
 enough to make head turns. eldest son of
 dilshad & Rashid ahmed khan .works at dilshad
 constructions. madly in love wid zoya.a scratch
 on zoya is more than enough to turn him into
a lion. ws in a delusion tht zoya betrayed him
 bt later on MU gt cleared n now regrets his actions
..

 
 
 
 
 
Ayaan Ahmed Khan
A clean cut and well bred young constituting admirable looks. youngest son of dilshad & Rashid ahmed khan. Loves humera n his elder brother Asad . ayaan was to trap humera bt fell in love wid her unconditionally.
 
 
Zoya Farooqui
 

 

 Zoya Farooqui d name Zoya which means life can itself tell u about her..a very beautiful or u can say a fairy has stepped down to earth...works with her dad Gaffur Siddiqui..luv her dad, sister n Asad... because of some misunderstanding was treated very harshly & very inhumanly by her love Asad & almost lost herself but now everything is clear & is healing both physically & emotionally.
 
 
 
Humera Gaffur Siddique
 

 

Humeira. Gaffur's youngest daughrter & sis of zoya...had many relations in past but now loves ayaan a lot... can do anything 4 her sister. her bubbly nature & preety face made ayaan also fall for her inspite of d mission given to him.
 
 
 
RASHID  and DILSHAD KHAN
Rashid & Dilshad Ahmed Khan parents of Asad & Ayaan... for them most important is their mission & doesnt care about their sons...
Gaffur siddique
 
Gaffur Siddiqui  parent of Zoya & Humeira...for them also their mission is most important... Gaffur loves his daughters very much but is very coward & doesnt think abt his kids when his life is concerned..
 
 
Armaan khan
Armaan is most loyal and old man of gaffur..he works for them ..he loves zoya a lot..and his love is turned to obsessiveness...a few destrustion he caused and ended zoya's life..but time gave him one opportunity to help her and he did..but dint himslef last too long..he is no more...

Rose

Rose is in early twenties..she is armaaan's sister..she is quite practical towards life and things and now she is in to the most difficult phase as to find the truth..she is missing ...
 
Nuzzat
 
She is sister of armaan & nuzzhat & also a very good friend of humeira... saw d cruelty of his brother with her own eyes & was affected emotionally...
AKRAM
he is a corrupt officer n to complete his mission can go to any extent...
Currently target is malik...and victim nikhat...

NIKHAT
Nikhat Khan ,niece of gaffur..her life revolves around two people..one her uncle gaffur..and two her motive to punish anwar's killer..
she is a widow who is now dating imraan..
 
Imraan
 
Boyfrend of nikhat khan..he loves her to the extent where no one can...but than his trust is now at stake..
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"humera meri baat ka yakeen karo tum..please." ayaan came on his knees and begged her to stop..

humera was in no mood to stop for anyone..coz she knew it..she had been betrayed by her loved ones..not only ayaan but asad too..her anger grew more on the fact that asad bhaijaan had tortured zoya for no reason coz if she did wrong he was no right too..

"humera please...please!!" ayaan begged again baracading her way to door..

humera gave him a death glare and pushed his hand away to walk through the door..followdd by nuzzat pleading...

ayaan turned as he realized that there was one more person who needed hummy and so he played a trick to stop her..

"humera dont be selfish baby...look at her .(pointing towards nuzzat..)n she need you too..u cant walk away like this..

for a moment humera stoped right there and then,..she turned to look at nuzzat and a scream escaped her lips  as she saw nuzzy body in red...omg she tried to kill herself..but why???
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"baby...niks!" akram breathed against her soft hair..

"akram..chahe kuch karlo ..i wont call him.."  niks said in daze as her eyes were getting blured minute by minute and the floor was slowly turning red...

akram leaned a bit on her and kissed her with such a vigor that for a minute she lost the track of breathing..

he laughed on her misery and pulled the last chain hooked on her nipples...and with that anothe splash of blood oozed out from her breast..

"you know i dont like to see u like this...so help me and yourself ..CALL!!!"

niks tried a lot to escape but all failed ...akram tried to get her straight but went in vain..now what?

akram pulled his phone ,captured the view in vedio..and saved it...with a beep sound the text box poped out..
"sent" he smiled wide as he knew he got the other way to weakened her..

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*beep*
the phone rang and Gaffur rose from his seat to pick up the phone."MMS?"
he furrowed his eyebrow and clicked to watch the clip..what he saw definately dint make him happy..his anger was back..coz now akram was back...

he immediately hit the back button and dialled a number,,.
"hello malik sahab..."

"password!"

he hunged the phone and got a bright smile..he pressed the clip button watch it and then hit the send option..three member in the list and the phone read"sent"

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hello ..control room hello control room...gaffur had made a call...its in the town..read its in town...tracking the number ...
over  and out...

akram had ag grin onm hearing the walkie talkie message..
he brushed his index finger on his lips and teased her by licking his lower lips..

"salaam bologi ..apne bhaijaan ko.."

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asad opened his eyes just to see zoya sleeping next to him...he turned properly to face her..its then he realised that zoya and he was sharing the same white blanket ..

he smiled at the thought and pushed the cover aside..a cold breeze hit his bare body...bare body??? when did he remove his clothes??

asad covered himself again when he found a tug towards zoya,...she was veil in that cover...her body twirled in them..he tried to detangle it but than his memories hit him back..

she was naked too...what the..?? how this happen and when?

he tried to get up...without disturbing zoya..a slight moment of him made her stir...he again went to that position in which he was before holding zoya in his arms tightly...

he tried to collect thing as how this happen... as he laid on bed..

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"zoya..." asad whisper lightly in her ears..

"hmm..." she murmured in sleep..

"baby..take this (showing cover) its chilli today.." he said as he pulled covers on her..

with a force zoya threw that poor piece of cloth off bed..

"baby!" asad tried to calm himself as anger rage in him..

he closed his eyes for a minute ..he opened them and walked slowly on bed side to pick up the cover..he took it in hand and went back to zoya to cover her..

"baby..? please ..please listen to me...put this cover on.." asad dint even finished his sentence and the cover was back on floor...

"urggh" asad rolled his eyes and again went to pick up the blanket..

he waited for a minute as he knew his stubborn princess will never do what he says for now...so he decided to trick her..

he took the cover and pulled on his body as he stretched his torso on bed...besides zoya..

zoya looked at him in one eye..she was having fun doing this..it was a play or some game for her...but than asad's disinterest was not welcomed and she tried to grab the blancket and throw it ..but this time asad quick reflexed dint allow her..
he pulled the blanket tight on him and with a spare hand grabbed zoya by her arm and pulled inside the blanket..he grinned as he was succesful..

zoya was obviously not happy on defeat and she tried to get out of the blanket ...trying to hold her in..asad smacked his lips on her..and pulled her in a long kiss...
the kiss was normal in begining ..until and unless he felt zoya moving close to him for deepining it...her breathe .he closeness..took concious away from asad...he felt her hand on his back and realised his hands were rubbing her side on its own...

as the kiss got deeper and deeper..zoya's hold on him got tight..and asad...asad was in no position to think anymore...

he broke from the kiss so as to comfort zoya and carried his kisses down from lips to jawline to chest...he himself dont know whether zoya was reacting or not..coz the moment for him was out of sense..he had craved for her so long and all he wanted was her ..

he looked up once and found zoya smiling and moaning ...he leaned a bit more to capture her lips agaian..he literally ate her lips in passion...

louder moans were echoed in the room...

and before the sense could warn,..asad and zoya were making out...

her body was vailed on his ..no place for even air to pass... he wass kiising her hungrily as if he was thirsty fo years...
he made her sit on bed  as he laid on bed pulling her on him..he made out with her..he was far from thinking logical ,..all he wanted was her...he craved for her..she is his..only his..

after an hour or so .he himslef dont know when the sleep took over them..but before that he was sure he had seen a satified  smile on her face...

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asad smiled as he remember the event..he leaned a bit and kissed her on her lips..."I love u.." he whispered slowly in her ears..

zoya's last trace of sleep was gone and her eyes went wide open...

she looked here and there..and then saw asad next to her... a sudden urge of disgusting feel creeped her body..

she threw the cover and leaned to pick up dress..

one minute..where is she? she asked herself as she found herself in some unknown place..

she looked back to asad in confused!

she picked up what ever was there on floor as it looks like in her size..
she gave a confuse look as her head started to spin...

asad looked at zoya who was behaving quite strange as a puupy lost in rain...

he tried to talk to her but she just dismissed his words..

he watched as she leaned a bit and first time in month she worn that on her own...asad saw that disgust look on her face ..before he could say..he heard a voice..

"where m i?" he looked up to see zoya who was staring to asad as if he had grown horns overnight..

asad got up from bed and walked to her..she snaked his arms around her petite waist as he stroked her hair..
"home..u r at home jaan"

answer dint satisfy her and  she pushed him away with force when she saw the flowers scattered on floor and the bed scrumbled...

"asad?" zoya whispered in confusion..

asad nodded his head in yes absent mindedly as he himself dint got whats wrong ith her..

"whats wrong jaan?" he asked sincerely..

"where are we..?? and how did i get here...?? we were at your frenz place ..tha..this" she whispered the last word ever so softly...

Its then asad realised that ..she was awake from a long sleep...a sudden breeze of happined took over him as he walked to hug her tight..he pulled her close and swayed his arm around her and he closed the distance in passionate hug...

"you r back..than god ..you ar back..jaan!" he screamed in happiness cupping her face in both hands he kissed her cheeks , shoulder and neck..leaving the traces of his tears on her..

he was more than happy...its the wish the sight he was praying to god..his prayers were answered...but soon the moment got sunk as zoya struggled to push him away...

"jaan.." he whispered in a hurt voice...

"asad stay away from me..mujhe sari sachhai pata chal gai hai...i hate u..i hate u asad..leave me...dont u dare touch me again..." she said as she turned to go out  from door...

asad ran quickly and stood between door and zoya..
he slipped his hand in her hair and holded her in tight grip..

"no..no..u cant leave me...please stay ..please...i can explain jaan..i can explain.."

zoya shrugged a bit in violent as to release herself from this closeness..but the grip got tighter...

"zoya is no slave of you Mr Khan...give me a reason asad..to stay.." she asked with a smirk...

"coz i love you.."

zoya rolled her eyes and pushed him hard on chest..for a second the grip got loose..
taking the opportunity she tried to run aways when she heard those words which she never dreamed to be heard ever by him..

"FINE!! zoya  can go...but u my wife cant...especially when she is with my child.."

zoya  forzed on her feet as she turned to understand his meaning...
she looked straight in to him..as her heart had stopped beating..
"w..what?" she stammered in fear..

asad closed the distance in two big steps and holding her waist with both hand he pecked her lightly on lips..

"you heard it right jaan..we r married!" he said as he kissed her forehead..

asad's hand lingered on her back while one hand moved to her baby bum ...he looked straight in her eyes..and kissed on her lips..

"its mine..LOVE!"
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Thats for it..dears...
sare loyal readers..athe aao..jhappi pau..khushiya manao..coz we are on THIRD THREAD...!!!!!

 

THANKS EVERYONE FOR YOU SUPPORT...


MILLIπŸ˜†


 

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unres...πŸ˜† 
 
my frst few reactions vn I heard of ur 3rd THREAD!!!πŸ˜† 
 
I was millluuu... tera 3rd thread OMG!!!!!
 
 
WOOWWW YAAR!!! ths is sooo cool !!!
 
 
 
 
 
party time millu...
 
 
 
may uv thousands of thread 4 ths...
 
 
 
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RES 4 updt 
 
coming sooon!!πŸ˜†
EDITED!!
 
what was that????
 
millu tera third thread kya ban gaya tu to geniu ho gai...πŸ˜³πŸ˜†
 
I mean ye UPDATE THI ... kyaa fadu update thi man!!!!
 
OMG!! OMG!! SR!!!
 
wooohhh!! kya jhtaka diya end mein!!!!πŸ˜²πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜†
 
yaaar tht nikhat part ws ...
 
n who d hell xcept akram FORWARDED d MMS!!???
 
n wt CALLL CALL tht idiot is doing?
want d answers as soon as possible!!😳 i.e UPDATE...πŸ˜†
 
d blankets scene was...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
 
UPDATE SOON!!
 
n manna padega ASAD IS NOT BAD HAAN!! SMART GUY!!πŸ˜ˆπŸ˜†
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res
unres
ok sabse pehle bada wala congo
tune toh 3rd thread bhi start kar diya..
par yaar koi bakwas order mat paas kariyo samjhi
chal join me for a dance
🀣
keep going sweethrt

n now coming to d update me senti ho gai yaar
zoya is back from trauma but she forgot most imp things... haww... ab kya hoga? n dis akram.. eww.i hate him... but thora sa confused here
usne gaffur ko mms bheja den he resend to 3 ppl...ya mallik ne bheja.. ye clear kar...
n nuzzhat ne kya kiya??? [img]http://www.laymarks.com/l/rev/5.gif" />
will she be ok????

n at last as usual d part was superb sweethrt Edited by ar-n-only-ar - 10 years ago
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unres

so finally updatdπŸ˜›

OMG aftr sooo long!!😊

Hmmm abt update its was outstanding suprb romantic..!!πŸ˜‰

i lov d ASya romance😳

update ASAP

want 2 no d reaction of ZoyaπŸ˜›

πŸ€— nd this 4 ya
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Keep it up Baby!!!!! 
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Res 
Unres πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

 
That summary and character sketch helped me a lot to get the better view of the story!!!!!!


And thankewww so much fo that dea!!! 

Love ya!!!
 
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