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saf24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Read all theparts in one go. Very interesting story so far with the characters having different layers to them, Geet sure is facing a lot of problems and i'm really curious to see how she handles everything that comes her way. Fab job

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Geethanda87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

NICE UPDATE... POOR MAAN KITNA MAJBOOR HAI LEKIN HE LOVES HIM
I THINK MAAN KO GEET KO SB KUCH BATA DENA CHAHIYE TAKI GEET USKO GALAT NA SMJHE

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Infinity.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Awesome update...loved it
hope maan ll tell his past to geet soon
waiting for nxt..cont soon

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

part 5
nice part...
poor Geet...
how could Maan do this to her instead of telling her the truth?
damn him...
that man should be tortured...
and Maan didnt expect this from him...
cont soon...

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YaSha0512

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Nice update
So both confessed n were staying together
G I can't believe this Maan faked it all to trap khushi for that sicko how could he
N now he claims to love her but again he betrayed her by planting drugs on her
If he really loves her he should reveal the truth
Although I don't know how Geet can ever forgive him
Can't wait to see what Geet has planned for that shameless b*****d
Looking forward to seeing him brought down n to see what happens in future for Geet n Maan
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin N continue soon

Edited by YaSha0512 - 12 years ago

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Jasmine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Plz don't misunderstand my statement.I never meant that my readers have no brain to understand things.I expected my readers to get shocked.But I did'nt expect everypne to think that Maan can stoop so low as Maan is the hero,not a villian & it's a maaneet story,

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Unfortunately all others misunderstood Maan and thought that he actually stooped so low for money.Maan is not perfect here.He made mistakes.But he is not cheap like you all thought.

see Jasmine we readers react what we read...u have written clearly in ur updates that Prakash saying that Maan is agreed to work as his Pimp...and he get highest payment for his job...

---now do u think that Prakash is such a fool that he will pay highest payment to Maan just for nothing...

---it was Maan who invited Prakash for dinner and told Geet to cook and then he introduced them to each other...I know this from my home that normally if my husband thinks that somebody is of bad character then he will not invite that person to his house...why Maan invited Prakash in first place knowing his character...

don't say that unfortunately all misunderstood Maan...it is not us who misunderstand him...it is u who created his character like that...I am really very shocked by reading this note from u...it means u believe that ur readers don't have enough brains to understand correctly...

You all will be shocked to read this part.You all may get angry with me.But have faith in Maaneet and their love.

----this is ur note before part 4...it shows that u also knew very well that what will be reader's reaction after reading update...isn't it obvious already so why u are complaining if we did reacted like that...

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Jasmine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Maan did'nt rape her as it was with geet's consent that he did that.Yes,I agree that Maan was really wrong.But he would'nt have forced Geet if she was'nt willing.He did'nt seek Agam's help b4 as he did'nt want Agam to know that he was connected with Prakash.He did'nt want Agam to know that Maan was blackmailed by Prakash.Now he can seek Agam's help as they all think that Prakash only trapped Geet in the drug case.

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

M:Yes.Even when I spent my nights with her I had no love towards her.

--so Maan raped Geet by fooling her in the name of love without declaration that he is raping her but Prakash raped her with declaration...

kya kahun...jaise jaise update read kar rahi hoon...hate for Maan is increasing...

if he can now take Geet out from prison then what was the need to again cheat her by placing drugs in her bag and sending her to prison...now not only Prakash is after her but Police also will be searching her...drugs dealing is a non-bailable crime...she have become now criminal along side victim of rape...if now she can escape Prakash by living in Agam's farm-house then why he didn't do it before...before all this drug fiasco maan could have taken help from Agam first...

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Jasmine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Damsel in distress Part 6

Maan went near Geet.She was clearing her wardrobe.
M:Geet,I want to tell you something.
G:I know what you have to say.'Be strong Geet'.Right?
M:Ya.But I want to tell you some thing else also.
G:Maan...we will talk later.Let me dress up.Now our plan is more important than anything else.Right?
M:Ya..
Maan went out helplessly.
He thought:Geet is not willing to listen to me now.But anyway I want to confess who I am.What I did to her...sometims Geet may understand me.Sometimes she will not forgive me.She will hate me.But I will not hide the truth.I will have to tell her the truth.But since we have to execute our plan I will have to wait.Otherwise her heart will be broken and she may even become too weak to take revenge on Prakash.That should not happen.

A rainy night..

Prakash was insecure hearing about Geet's escape.

He was angry with Maan:It must be Maan who saved her.He fooled me again.I will not leave him.

He heard a knock at the door.He opened the door.It was dark.

It was a stylish woman with sun glasses.She entered inside and closed the door.

P:Who are you?

She:Chill Sir.

She switched on the tube light and removed her glasses.

He was shocked:Geet!

G:Yes Geet.

P:You...you...

G:I escaped from the jail.

P:Maan saved you?I will inform the police now.

She held his hand:Sir please...

She caressed his shoulder in a seductive manner.His anger got melted.He enjoyed her fragrant breath.Slowly a smile appeared on his face.

G:Sir...please don't put me in jail.I will do anything for you.

He smirked:Anything?

Geet in a seductive tone:Anything.

He pulled her close to him.She found disgusting to be close to him.But she suppressed her hatred and smiled seductively.She caressed his forehead,nose and lips with her finger.He smiled.

P:How did you change Geet?That day you opposed.But today you are taking the initiative.How?

G:That time I was deeply in love with Maan.So I was not able to think of anyone else.But when I was in the jail I realized that he had never loved me.All he wanted was my body.He did'nt bother to look me up when I was suffering in the jail.

He was shocked:What?So Maan was not the one who helped you to escape from the jail?

Geet knew that if he comes to know that it was Maan who helped her he will even kill Maan.

G:No.Why should Maan save me?He does'nt care for me.He is scared to be linked up with an accused person like me.

P:Then how did you escape?

G:You know that if a beautiful lady tries,even the most roughest man will melt.And I am beautiful.Right?

P:Yes,you are the most beautiful woman I have ever seen in my life.

She blushed.

Prakash thought:Geet's change!She even sold herself to escape from the jail.

Prakash pulled her even more closer to him.

G:Why are you in a hurry?I am with you always.Let us relax first.

She moved away from him and poured liquor into the glass.

She served him liqour.He started drinking it.

Geet sat wearing her cool sun glasses.

Geet smiled:Sir,were you really married?Are you actually a widower?

Prakash chuckled:How can a man like me marry?Marriage means confining ourselves to one particular woman.It's impossible for me.I want every beautiful woman to be my wife.So I did'nt marry anyone.

Geet tried to control her anger.She bit her teeth.

Slowly he fell into sleep.

In the morning he woke up.He was shocked to see himself tied to the bed.He saw Geet in a beautiful black saree laughing near him.

P:What is this?

G:Simple Sir.I had drugged your drink.You fell unconscious.That time I did a small operation.

He was shocked:Operation?

G:Yes.After all I worked hard to study nursing.So at least for certain purposes I need to use my field.Right?

P:What did you do?

G:Don't worry Sir.Just one month rest.After that you will be able to walk properly.I have not harmed you.You will be a healthy person.

P:Tell me what operation did you do?

Geet smirked:Simple.I just removed your make organ.That means you will never be able to have physical relationship with anyone even if you get tempted.

He was shocked:What?

G:Yes Sir.You will have feelings.But you won't be able to satisfy yourself or anyone.You abuse women when you go mad.Right?Now onwards when you turn mad also you won't be able to physically abuse anyone.That means you won't be able to rape any girl in future.Did you get that bloody devil?

Prakash screamed:Nooo!

Geet laughed loudly.

P:But when you came here,you just had a small bag.Then how come you did my operation?

G:Maan had come to provide me the tools which I needed.

He was shocked.

He bit his teeth:So my doubt was right.It was Maan who helped you.

Geet just smiled.

P:You fool.You are getting fooled.Do you know that he is a pimp who helped me to get you?He trapped you in his fake love purposefully for me.For that he took a big amount of money from me.

Geet was shocked.She became angry:Shut up.Never say anything bad against Maan.I trust him completely.

P:If I give you proof you will believe it.Right?Look at the CD I kept near the DVD player.That is a video which is a proof.

Geet went near the DVD player.Geet's hands shivered.

She thought:Should I watch this CD just because this animal said something against Maan?I trust Maan.