Damsel in distress Last part MG SS pg51

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pt1:pg1 Pt2:pg 7 pt3:pg14 pt4:21 pt5:pg30 pt6-pg38 pt7:pg44 pt8:pg51

Damsel in distress Part 1

(Due to public demand Maan calling Geet 'sister' in the 1st part is changed.Instead of 'sister' I have used the word 'nurse')


This SS is based on the malayalam film '22 Female Kottayam'.This is a bold theme.A bit too emotional.I don't know how people will accept it.



Maan was laid on the bed in a hospital.Today is his last day in the hospital.But he was not happy,but sad that he has to leave the hospital.Because he cannot meet the nurse Geet Handa.His eyes waited for Geet.Finally Geet came.In the nurse's attire she appeared to be a Angel with white wings.Pure beauty.Maan forgot his pain for a moment when he saw her in front of him.
G:Hi Sir..
M:Hi Nurse.
Geet took his BP.
G:Normal.Today is your last day.Right?The doctor will come after some time.Then you can leave.Happy?
M:To be frank I don't feel like leaving this hospital.
G:Why?It's strange.Usually everyone wants to leave the hospital as soon as possible.
M:But I am different.Because I liked this hospital atmosphere very much.I wish I could get admitted here again due to viral fever.
Geet smiled.


G:Ok..then bye.
Geet tried to walk out.
M:Nurse..
Geet turned back.
M:I will miss not only this hospital,but also the people over here.Especially...
The head nurse came:Geet...you are still here?Go to other patients also.
G:Ok.
Geet ran out.
Maan got irritated:Oh,I could'nt complete my sentence.
Maan left the hospital without biding good-bye' to Geet.So he was disappointed.


Geet looked dull in her room.She shared her hostel room with Poonam;another nurse.
P:Geet,why do you look upset?
G:Nothing like that.
P:You always talk to me about the patient Maan.But today you did'nt say anything about him.
G:That chapter is closed.Maan got discharged.
P:Oh!
Geet thought:Lots of patients come and go.I am friendly with everyone.Then why I am sad when Maan left?

After a few days...

Maan went to a restaurant.He was surprised to see Geet there with Poonam and guy.
Maan rushed to her:Sister..
Geet was surprised:Sir!
M:What a pleasant surprise!
G:Really.
P:Hi Maan Sir..
M:Hi...
P:Meet my boy friend Agam.
Agam:Hi..
Maan and Agam shook hands.
G:How are you sir?Are you taking care of your health?
M:Sister,don't call me sir here.Please call me by my name.Maan.
G:Ok.But you also stop calling me sister.Call me Geet.
They both giggled.
G:Maan,you also sit with us.
M:My pleasure.
Agam:Poonam...Can I have a drink?
P:Agam,in front of Maan don't try to be innocent.
Agam was embarassed.
M:Agam,you can drink.I have no problem.Because I also drink.
Ag:Really?Then no tension.
Drinks were served.
Maan,Poonam and Agam sipped drink.
Maan looked at geet:Geet,you...
G:Don't be confused.I also drink.
M:Wow!Cool...Then I will serve you.
Maan poured liqour in a glass for Geet.
Maan-Geet:Cheers!
They drank.
Maan and Geet felt like laughing seeing Agam and Poonam being cozy in the drunken state.
G:Hey Poonam and Agam...this is a public place.
P:We don't care.
Agam pulled poonam closer to him:You are so hot Poonam.
G:Shameless.
M:Geet...I think we should keep in touch.
G:Why not?
M:Then I will give you my number.
Maan and Geet exchanged their numbers.
M:Usually people exchange numbers,but they forget to call each other in the busy schedule.I hope ours won't be like that.
G:Sure.
M:I think I should leave now.I had fun time with you.
G:Same to you Maan.Will you be able to drive alone?
M:Yes.Even when I am drunk I can drive.No problem.Even if due to carelessness I meet with an accident,I will be happy.Because If I get admitted in the hospital you will be there to look after me.
Geet smiled.

G:But purposefully don't try to meet with an accident.
They both laughed.
G:Anyways I have to drop Agam.In this state he can't drive.This happens always.We go to restaurant.Have dinner.Then have a drink.Poonam and Agam have no control when it comes to drinking and then it's my responsibility to drop him home.
They giggled.

After reaching home Maan rang up Geet.
G:Hi Maan.
M:Hi..I just called you to remind you to call me frequently.
Geet smiled.
They kept calling each other.Then they started meeting up frequently.They became very good friends.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats for the new story .!!
And awesome concept 😃

Geet is a nurse wow!
And now both have become friends 😳

Nice start, cont soon !!
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congrats on the new story
geet nurse!!!!!!
loved the starting
continue soon!!!!!
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Congrats for new story👏
Amazing update👏nice concept⭐️
Thanks for pm
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congrats for new story
awesome update
luvd it
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congratzz on new story
nice concept
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nice start..
waiting to read mre of it..
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interesting start for sure
hmmm cant wait how this goes
so she is a nurse
and he was her patient
and more than that perhaps
okay shall read the last chapter of GHSP later so can comment well
but this one sounds interesting for sure
cheers for pm
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Congrats on new story
Nice part
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hi thanks 4 da pm..congrats on the new SS! fab start! well written! update soon

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