MG FF-Winter Sonata-Thread 9 - Page 2

I need ur update badly di...

wowww such a surprise . new thread👏 many congratulations di

and i know this is late ,but still, welcome back 🤗 and i was also away from IF for quite some time. first due to my thesis and when that got done, i had internet problems which kept me away. so im back as well 😆 i could not comment on the previous few updates because i was busy but i caught up with all of them and loved them. will definitely try to put my detailed comments about each of them 😊

waiting for next update happily

Request all of you to support Drashti in JDJ...this is the last week...so please vote to make out Maan ki Mishty win this title. Use this link to vote - http://colors.in.com/in/jhalak-dikhhla-jaa/#nav

Thank you so much all of you for your birthday wishes and such beautiful comments. Whenever I am tired and feel depressed, all I need to do is read some of you comments. It makes me feel refreshing and motivated. So thanks to all of you.

Personally speaking I don't think I have done justice to today's update. It feels something lacking but I am not able to think any more so hope you will forgive me if you feel something missing here.

Avi - our song choices and along with it those moments which mean a lot match quite often...thanks darling...

Rakhi - Yaar mein kya karoon...kabhi kabhi lagne lagta hai that I am boring u guys...thank you for the motivation...

Ash - Tu boyfriend bana then you will automatically know ki phone pe kya baatein hoti hain J

Sree - Thanks dear. Even I am thinking of making a playlist of all these songs...

Mahimaan - Thank you dear for coming back and spending time to read and comment on individual parts...

Lakshmi, Jasraj123 - You are absolutely right. In the serial also I loved the changes which they try to show when Maan does bhangra even though he wasn't good or no one expected him to...but he changed to live his age and also to fulfil Geet's expectation. Even the outhouse sequence was a lot like that and that is the same essence which I wanted to capture before me move onto more serious updates...

Anu - Thanks dear. Yes I will soon move to Geet, Meera and Maan's family. This is going to be a full family drama going forward but main characters will be still Maaneet...

Heytal - Thanks dear for the wonderful wishes. Your comment really touched me.

Haaye!!!! aisi bechaini phir bhi ek chain sa mahsoos hota hain

Itni dooriyaan phir bhi dil ke kareeb woh lagti hain

haq jatlake bhi kaise sharma jaati hain

yeh ankahe ehsaas jo bol nahi paate hain!

Loved it absolutely...

Shruthe - Sorry for making you wait so much. You and Lakshmi always keep on asking me for updates and I feel so bad that I am always late. Ash must have updated you the reasons but as promised here is the update of this week. Love you for always being there...

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Chapter 57 - Tum Tak

Next Day (Finally!!!)

Dressed up in a simple purple suit, she just dashed inside office. No, she was not late but was feeling little guilty about taking adhoc leave yesterday, she just wanted to start early. As lift started, she smiled to herself getting lost in her sweet morning. First thing she got to do was to read a "Good Morning Jaan" text from Maan. She had replied with "Good Morning Sir" and he had immediately called her up. They had spent better half of the morning talking to each other about everything and anything as Geet got ready. She bit her lip nervously now realising how much they had spoken and giggled thinking about all the romantic words and his teasing.

"Mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha ki Maan sir itni baatein kar sakte hain nahin to office mein to bas hmmm aur ummm hi bolte hain. Tayiaar bhi nahi hone de rahe they..."

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_vFaCY9XaIQ&feature=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

Link -http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_vFaCY9XaIQ

Meri Har Man Maani Bas Tum Tak

Baatein Bachkaani Bas Tum Tak

Meri Nazar Deewani Bas Tum Tak

Mere Sukh Dukh Aate Jaate Saare
Tum Tak Tum Tak Tum Tak Soneya
Tum Tak Tum Tak Tum Tak Soneya

With a slight blush and still lost in her own world, she rudely came back to the present when she collided with Sasha.

She immediately apologised and started collecting all the now scattered blue prints. She was still trying to understand why everyone was early and running around when Sasha snatched the papers from her and almost barked at her angrily

"Ms. Hoshiyarpur, have you gone blind while on leave and what the hell...tumhara jab man karta hai tum muh uthake chutti le leti ho"

"Sorry Sasha madam, woh urgency thi...I informed Adi sir about it"

"Yeh acha hai...jab man kare kaam karo..jab man kare urgency thi...tum jaise logon ka kuch ho hi nahi sakta"

Though Geet felt humiliated at Sasha's raised voice but nothing could dampen her mood after events of yesterday and also very soon Adi sir came to her rescue

"Sasha you are still here. We have to leave asap. Geet, please get project and budget files for top ten projects as per your timeline dashboard. I need it immediately."

"Yes sir..."

She immediately collected the files and came to Adi who seemed to be waiting for her.

"Good...these are all the files?"

"Yes sir"

"Come...let's go"

"Ji?"

"Oh come on we are getting late Ms. Hoshiyarpur...come now"

Sasha literally was sprinting with Adi and Geet behind her while Geet trying to understand where they were going.

"Maybe we are going to a site but with so many files and blueprints?"

In the car finally Adi sir gave her a shock "He he he...Geet we are not going to site but to KM outhouse. Maan sir wants to review all these projects and he has asked three of us to join him there."

That's it...Adi's words fuelled her mind with anger...anger which was still just love. Even she didn't know just how one day had changed her relationship with him...She loved him from some time now...even realised her feelings but now she had a right on him...

"Maan sir bhi na...he didn't tell me anything in the morning...I know why he didn't mention. He knew I will be angry. Doctor has asked him to rest and this is his idea of rest. Apni koi parwah hi nahi hai aur mujhse...jaan bujh kar chupaya unhone. Haan haan...who the hell am I? Why will he tell his secretary? But secretary ko na sahi fianc ko toh bata sakte the. Pata tha unehin ki mein kabhi karne nahi dungi unko isiliye...

I will also not talk to him...nahi nahi I will not even look at him...dusht daanav kahin ke...woh kyon nahi samjhte ki unki laparwahi se mujhpe kya asar padta hai"

By the time they reached KM, Geet was a little teary, angry and lot more worried. Kya kare pyaar ka rang ankhon mein aansoon ban ke, chere pe lalli ban kar aur dil mein parwah ban kar chalak raha tha.

She just wanted to run to him and shout at him...ask him to rest...to comfort him and to take care of him...

Somehow she controlled and entered behind Adi and Sasha looking at the floor.

Meanwhile Maan knew that Geet will probably be cribbing about hiding this from her but he wanted to give her a sweet surprise. How could she expect him to wait till evening to see her? In the morning itself when he had heard her voice he had become restless to see her...touch her...hold her. It was getting impossible for him to wait for her even a second more when she entered through the door. His face was stern but his eyes devoured the angel standing at the back looking like a lavender orchid.

Tum Tak Tum Tak Arzi Meri
Phir Aage Jo Marzi

Tum Tak Tum Tak Arzi Meri
Phir Teri Jo Marzi

Meri Har Dushwaari Bas Tum Tak
Meri Har Hoshiyari Bas Tum Tak
Meri Har Taiyaari Bas Tum Tak
Tum Tak Tum Tak Tum Tak Tum Tak
Meri Ishq Khumaari Bas Tum Tak

Adi and Sasha's greetings broke his trance and as he asked them to sit, his ears waited for her soft melodious voice.

When she not only kept quiet but didn't even raise her eyes to look at him, only then he got really worried.

"Lagta hai bahut gussa hai"

His eyes searched for a single glance...for a small flutter...for just one eye lock.

Not getting anything, he finally faked a cough to catch her attention and as expected her eyes flew towards him in concern. His heart pained seeing those complaining eyes on the verge of getting teary. And why should she not...after all she had right to complain...to be stubborn...shikwa shikayat khayal pyar tadap...na jaane kya kya keh rahi thi uski aankhen us se...

"Haye babaji, doctor ne toh inhe khayal rakhne ko kaha hai...yeh khansi...movement se shoulder mein dard ho raha hoga na"

Forced by her concern, she forgot her anger and got up breaking her own self thought

"Woh...have some water sir and I will go get coffee for you sir...waise adrak wali chai zayda achi rahegi...i can make green tea for you if you like...tea has less caffeine and more antioxidants...I can add little honey and lemon as well to soothe your throat..."

Sasha looked bewildered at what looked like a fast train as Geet started giving options about tea and coffee while Maan was simply amused at her care...

"Geet...MK chai nahi peete...get him a coffee"

Geet suddenly stopped realising that she was blabbering in worry but on the other hand Maan did not like Sasha's interference or tone at all. Her restlessness was now making him restless...

"I think I can decide for myself Sasha. Why don't you concentrate on your own work. I want to look at blue prints of abc project...go to that table and make it ready. Geet...green tea with ginger and lemon will be good. This is not office so you don't need to do this but thanks for asking. Come let me show where everything is kept."

Sasha made a grumpy face while Maan simply followed Geet to the kitchen. As soon as she entered, she was engulfed in his strong arms from behind. As a spontaneous response, she started wriggling which stopped as abruptly as it had started when she felt his hot lips on her temple.

"Good Morning Mishty...naraaz ho mujhse...aisa laga jaise rone wali ho...dekha bhi nahi meri taraf...naaraz ho...pareshaan ho...hmmm"

She stood for few seconds just calming her thudding heart. Many emotions - anger, care and now passion at finding herself in his arms enveloped her.

Finally softly and gently words tumbled out of her mouth slowly...

"Haan mein aapse naaraz thi...woh doctor ne aapko rest karne ko kaha hai na lekin aap hain ki...why can't you take rest"

Maan turned her around and lifted her chin

"Itni bhi kya naraazgi...I am ok"

His callousness just infuriated her further...

"Yes, that I can see. Why don't you take care Maan sir. Aap nahi samjhoge mujhe kitni fikar hoti hai. Just imagine if you had to see me like this...just imagine if it was me in the hospital..."

"Geet!!!!"

His eyes understood her eyes...now they shared the same emotion which was in hers...was it love...was it pain...who knows. She caressed his cheek softly soothing his heart...describing her own heart to him

"Aap sun nahi pa rahe...par maine saha hai...I only know what went through me when I saw you... saw you that night...jaise kuch andar tut gaya ho...agar kuch ho jata aapko toh meri jaan hi nikal jaati"

Ek Tak Ek Tak Na Tak
Gum Sum Naazuk
Naazuk Dil Se Hum Tum
Tum Tum Tum Tum Tum Tum Tum
Chaabook Naina Maro
Maro Tum Tum Tum Tum Tum Tum Tum
Maro Na Naina Tum
Maro Na Naina Tum

Maan placed his palm stopping her from speaking any further. Her eyes were filled with tears of love which he gently wiped hugging her close to his heart.

"Shhh Mishty...I am sorry. Please ro mat. I promise I will take care and will do anything you ask. But you don't cry. Aaj tak apni kabhi fikar nahi ki but now I will take care...always...tumhare liye."

Tum Tak Chala Hoon Tum Tak
Chalunga Tum Tak
Mila Hoon Tum Tak
Miloonga Tum Tak

Haan Ukdha Ukdha
Mukhda Mukhda
Mudkhe Pe Naina Kale

Ladte Ladte Lade
Badhte Badhte Badhe
Haan Aab Na Sajna Kabhi
Sab Na Sajna Kabhi
Mukhde Pe Naina Dale

"Ab ro mat...i just wanted to surprise you. Actually Doctor Rastogi had come for a check up today morning and he said I was doing better. To keep myself busy, I can work from home but no travelling especially in car."

Naino Ki Ghat Leja
Naino Ki Naiyan
Patwaar Tu Hai Meri
Tu Khewaiya
Jana Hai Paar Tere
Tu Hi Bhawar Hai
Pahuche Ki Paar Kaise
Nazuk Si Naiya
Tum Tak Tum Tak Tum Tak Soneya
Tum Tak Tum Tak Tum Tak Soneya

Tum Tak Tum Tak Arzi Meri
Phir Aage Jo Marzi
Tum Tak Tum Tak Arzi Meri
Phir Teri Jo Marzi

"Sach mein...doctor said you are recovering."

Maan's heart warmed up seeing twinkle back in her eyes and that happiness. It was like she didn't care for anything else other than him. Mere words that he was doing better had done their magic. He couldn't help but press a soft kiss on her forehead in reply to adulation in her eyes.

And then he gave her that right...that special place which was just hers - "Hmmm...and yes next time se tum mere har appointment mein mere saath rehna. Khud hi puch lena aur samjh lena doctor se...ok"

Meri Har Dushwaari Bas Tum Tak
Meri Har Hoshiyari Bas Tum Tak
Meri Har Taiyaari Bas Tum Tak
Tum Tak Tum Tak Tum Tak Tum Tak
Meri Ishq Khumaari Bas Tum Tak

Geet blushed lowering her eyes as she felt his soft but firm lips caress her forehead. She wanted to just get lost in her arms but Sasha's voice and Adi's laugh reminded her that they were not alone.

She parted asking him to leave. He sighed knowing he had to go but now at least she was near him and not angry anymore.

Meri Akal Deewani Tum Tak
Meri Sakal Jawani Tum Tak
Meri Khatam Kahani Tum Tak
Meri Khatam Kahani Bas Tum Tak

Tum Tak Tum Tak Tum Tak Tum Tak
Tum Tak Tum Tak Tum Tak Tum Tak
Tum Tak Tum
Tum Tak Tum
Tum Tak Tum

Sometime later Geet joined outside with tea and a tray of sandwiches. After working for some time, she reminded him of his medicine and then suggested to get it for him from KM. Maan agreed trying to indulge her seeing how she was still influenced by what happened in morning and wanted to look after and pamper him.

Precap - Kuch to log kahenge

So maan babu was desperate to see his mishty!! and geet kept busy with the early morning phone call with maan...hmmm. Maan so loved having someone just for him care for him...

ohhh I was thinking this that how maan is going to stay away from geet till evening😆😆😆nd u did made him to meet geet by work😆😆😆

omggg love the way he made excuse to bring her to km and then the way he manofy her😳😳😳😳 was tooo good
ufff why sasha has to come😕😕
I know I know he has to make it not to suspect anyone but still yeh kabab mein haddi lag rahi hain😆😆😆

thanks for ur explanation ritzy even i liked character change of maan in geet according to time and as story progressed

now waiting for next update

wonder ab kya ho gaya that u chose this song
is this sasha😡

This update took me back to GHSP days and the elevator scene when she is mad at him.

awesome update
sasha is so so so annoying
lovely reply to sasha by maan
geet's concern was right at her place

congrat for nw thread

i was also wondering tht maan will not be able 2 stay away from geet till evening and here it goes
awe they r soo much in luv tht they have lost them selves in each other geet maan or maan geet bangaya hey their souls r in eachother
awsome

uff.. he made her come to him.. Maan and his high-handednes... loved it..