my first ss...pyar dosti hai?part 2 updated.page 3

hey guys i m new with this writing thing but thought of giving a try.hope u all lyk it.

PYAR DOSTI HAI?? chap 1

ok this is the story of childhood friends antara and raghu.both are very different from each other.antara s a sweet,chatterbox and the girl who believes in fairy tale romance.and raghu's feature s exactly the same as in the show...rough and tough guy but with a golden heart and he uses tapori language.his one weakness is woh antara ko kabhi na nahi bol sakta.they r very very good friends.they both r neighbours too.mr.kaul s friend with mr.naik,so is mrs.kaul with mrs.naik.machinder is raghu,s cousin.his house is little far from their basti.these 3 often hangout together on sundays.

so today is sunday the hanging out day.raghu barges into antara's house without even knocking.antara who s busy watching tv doesnt even bothers to look because she alredy knows that raghu is the only persson who comes in without knocking.so purposely she hadnt locked the door.

raghu-aye miss.call...aye aye miss call...sunna...!!!

antara(not taking her gaze from tv)-antara...

raghu(irritated)-kyun...tera naam kaul nahi hai kya???miss call!!!

antara doesnt answer and s seriously watching tv.raghu fumes.

raghu-ye kya sunday ke din bhi tera serial chaalu hai...??(makes weird faces)

antara(happily)-haan raghu...tum bhi baith jaao aur serial dekho!!! poore week ka episodes aaj ek saath dikha rahe hain...can u belive that????????i m sooo happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

raghu says to himselof.ek ek episode 5-5 baar dekh chuki hai repeat ke saath aur ab???????? phirse aisa dekh rahi hai jaise pehli baar dekh rahi ho...aur upar se mere ko bol rahi main bhi dekhun????yedi kahinki...!!!!

raghu-arre mere ko nahi dekhna tera woh main...main...????!!!!

antara(looka at him and laughs)-tumse se nahi bola jayega...main hi bol deti hoon...'main,mere gehne,mere jhumke aur mera sindoor'(.(acts xactly like d heroine of dat serial.

rahju-haan wahi wahi...aisa bhi serial ka naaam hotha hai??? abhi ye hai kal kya hoga...main mera pati mere bacche meri behen mere behen ke pati aur unke bachhe????

saying this raghu bursts into laughter.antara gets angry.

antara-kya farak padtha hai!!! waise bhi patha hai ye kitnaa romantic hai..10 saal pehle manjunath aur sunitha pehli baar mile aur phir 5 saal baad unki shaadi ho gayi...

raghu-tab tak chakkar chal raha tha unka??

antara-arre nahi nahi...pehli mulaqat ke baad woh shaadi ke din hi mile.aur shadi ke 5 saal baad unko ek dusre se pyar hua...aur phir bacche hue...aur phir...phir aaya TWIST!!

raghu(curious)-kya kya???

antara-phir pata chalta hai unka punar janam tha aur phir...

raghu-baasss!!!!bas bas bohot hua ab chal ye serial ki story hai sard ko dard denewali goli????

he grabs remote from her hand.switchs off the tv.takes her along with him.

raghu-ab chal ice cream khaane chalthe hai...mach mach wahin pe milega.

and like that both leave the basti.

so guys this is it.should i continue it or not.it all depends on ur likes.so if u like it den hit the like button and leave a comment if u think i should cotinue this...


ps-i dont lyk tomatoes so plz dont throw it on me!!!!!😊


part 2-page 3

lol.. no Tomatoes... tum hare liye yeh he...

nice start... do continue... nd Pls. PM me... 😳

really nice start...cont soon..👏

Wow Cutie! such a lovely story! i loved it! please continue asap! will be waiting!

Originally posted by: divzz29

nice ss keep it up

thanks dear 😊

very nice dear pls.continue😛😛

Originally posted by: ayaazukideewani

nice ss dear

thank u... 😊

Tomatoes ofcourse not dear
Nice start continue soon

awesome dear... continue soon.. pls do pm me

thank u guys..fr u likes 😊 😊 ...ur each comment s very precious to.me...i dont knw wen m goin to update nxt part ..may b nxt week... 😊 ...thank u evryone... 😊 😊