my first ss...pyar dosti hai?part 2 updated.page 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey...back with the part 2...sorry for being late on update...wel not that gud in writing but stil tried to ake it good...this part i tried to make it a bit funny.and yes i am lazy on writing the situations so my ss contains mostly dialogues...bear with it...
part 2
raghu and antara sit on Raghu's jeep.antara is the only girl who is allowed to sit in the front seat of Raghu's jeep.
raghu-ab meri baat kaan kholke sun!!!haath nahi hilane ka aur muh nahi kholne ka...samjhi!!!!
antara like an obedient student nods her head.they are on their way.many kids,auntys,oldies were waving at antara and were saying tata,tata...antara was about to respond the but suddenly remembers raghus orders and keeps quiet.but as the time went on antara couldnt handle it anymore and waving at everyone who wer travelling through vehiles,those who wer walking on the footpaths.
antara-tata..tata...raju..bablu..tata...kailash uncle tata...arre savita aunty tata...hey friend tata...
raghu irritated says to himself-lo..shuru ho gayi iski tata bata ki rat!!!!!!!!!!! aye misscall...!!???sunna...!!!!!!!
antara turns to him-what?
raghu-tere ko bola tha na maine...bilkul chup baithne ka..tere bheje mei koi bhi baat ghusthi kaiko nahi re???? teri muh ki peti ko thodi der tak taala nahi maar sakti kya????
antara-uff!!!! tum bhi na raghu...thodi der ke liye acchi baatein nahi bol sakte???smile karna buri baat hai kya!!?? main tho bolti hu tumhe bhi try karna chahiye(giggles)
raghu-joke tha?hasun?
antara-tumko har baat pe itna shaq kyun aata hai??? zara chaaron taraf dekho raghu...yahaan pe sab acche hi log hain...
tata...a voice came...both turn towards the voice.two yo-yo types guys were riding in a bike n the ne who sat behind was waving at antara.antara feels awkward as they were strangers.
raghu-kya be????teri aankhen nikaalkar goti khelun kya?!!! chal bhaag yahaan se!!!!!
both recognise raghu and within seconds they were gone.
antara laughs n taps raghus shoulder really hard.
antara-shabash raghu!!! i am proud of u!!!!!!!!!!!!!
raghu(yells)-CHUP!!!!!bilkul CHUP!!!! khabardaar aage kuCh bola tho!!!!!!
antara keeps quiet and finally they reah the iCe Cream parlour.
they get into the parlour and they find Machmach sitting there alone waiting for them.both go and sit on the empty seat near.
Machmach-arre kidhar the yaar tum log???kab se wait kar raha hu...
raghu-(pointing at antara)-ye tu isse pooh...sunday ko bhi iska woh mera patiwala serial chaalu tha aur ye t.v ke saamne se hat hi nahi rahi thi!!!
Machmach(luks at antara)-kya sach mein?tu woh serial dekh rahi thi??
anatara-haan yaar machhu...ab kya kare ab woh hai hi itni interesting tho main...
Machmach-arre mere ko bataya kyu nahi?maine friday ka episode miss kar diya tha...main bhi dekh leta...chal chod tu friday ka story bata...

ok guys i m stopping here.sorry if i bored u.i dont ha tym so stopping here..if u lykd this part plz press th like button!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update!!
Plx pm me when u update next!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow i really liked it bplz update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome ss.. Funny dialogues.. Omg MM watches serial as well 🤣 .. Lo, raghu gaya kaam se.. Now sit and listen to MM and Antara 😆 .. Continue soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Funny...MM and Miss call...nice updet

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