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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG! These were just amazing! I seriously loved these!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Amrita2010

Wow!

</div>This is simply amazing!
How do you get such ideas Azu?šŸ˜†
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Enjoyed reading it...though I don't want anyone to beat poor Saras


Thank you so much!
Ideas? I suck with new ideas šŸ˜†
Glad you liked it and your comment means a lot to me 😳
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Originally posted by: mymy_taarey

OMG! These were just amazing! I seriously loved these!


Thank you do much!
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Posted: 12 years ago
updated in page 69..


sorry dear...i am so late...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lakhy

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Lovely Zu...as usual...šŸ¤—

Sorry dear...very sorry for the delay...I just res'd it and I was under the impression I hav replied...😭



Why did this happen to us...the damage is now done..

But it was so nice and dreamy...Samud together

Escape...run... hug...kiss...ahem ahem 😳

Yeh Dil Maange More...😃



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It's ok pardner
I know you'll comment, and you were never this latešŸ˜†

I know the damage is done, but anything is possible in our wishful thinkingšŸ˜‰

Will write more after Ramadan😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just read all the parts of ur story azuu nd it's so freakin amazing!
Ur a fantastic writer! Keep them coming! Update soon nd add me in ur pm list now!
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Originally posted by: littles12

I just read all the parts of ur story azuu nd it's so freakin amazing!

Ur a fantastic writer! Keep them coming! Update soon nd add me in ur pm list now!


Thanks a lot
Will pm you once I update!
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Posted: 11 years ago

It's been ages since I have last written...I felt I lost the touch too Please leave your comments just like before


Facing the demons...

Kumud held on to that hand, not letting go of it until she felt the first rays of sun shine despite her closed eyes. She opened her eyes lazily to see the one face that meant the most in the most in the world for her, to see Saras. To her surprise she saw a hazy silhouette of person standing; the hand she had been holding in her dreams was not there right now. She reached out her hand, to Saras, only to let it fall when her recognition dawned.

Kumud tried to recall of what she had muttered in her drunken state. She had only remembered a hand caressing her, giving her the strength to fight; fight the light that seemed to draw her in its brightness and to let go of the world that had given her pain. But it was that hand that held her back as well, giving her the hope of a new beginning, hope of love. She had fought and won before, but only the battle of darkness that lay in the bright light. She was filled with renewed hope, renewed energy to live, for he had saved her from the worst night mare she could ever had, a life that would have been a long journey with no respite of struggle and obstacles that were insurmountable.


It was Pramad. Pramad, what was he doing here? She curled up in revulsion and blinked hard before turning her face the other way not to see his face. She closed her eyes to vanish, to disappear without a trace and prayed let it be a nightmare.

Kumud? Are you alright?'

Kumud slowly opened her eyes again, to find Saras in front of her, she smiled wanly at him. As he moved forward beyond her, she turned again and looked where he was going to come face to face with Pramad.

Pramad' Kumud whispered frighteningly, putting a hand to stop them from facing each other. She closed her eyes as tight as she could and put her hands on her eyes not wanting to hear anything. Had she been well enough to get out of the bed she would have gone and send Saras away from facing Pramad.

A minute or two passed without Kumud hearing any noise. She pried her eyes open and saw Saras standing right in front of her.

Where is Pramad?' Kumud asked in a shaky voice.

Shh! You need to rest, Kumud' Saras sat on the edge of the bed and said. He outstretched his arm to move the trails of hair moving across Kumud's forehead, but in the very next minute he pulled in his arms and crossed over his chest.

Where is Pramad?' As Kumud repeated her question, Saras knew that he has to answer her.

I told him to stay away...He's still drunk' Saras said slowly, trying to calm down kumud.

But he's my husband' Kumud answered by cutting his words.

I can't let him here yet, he has crossed all the limits now' Saras rose to his feet and told firmly. He knew that at some point he was responsible for what was happening with her, and he would not let her face it alone.

I know..He behaves rude at times...but he's kind at heart..' Kumud tried to defend Pramad.

Oh Come on, Kumud! How long? How long will you defend him? Rude? Do you call it rude? It's violence! I'm not letting him behave likewise with you again!' Saras tried to remain calm, though he felt him burning from inside.

You are not doing anything! This is my personal matter and you have to stay away from all these...I can take care of myself' Kumud said in one go and turned her face to the other side.

Saras did not hear anything except for the pieces of his heart breaking and his world shattering around him. He thought he knew despair but this was beyond it. He thought he knew a gnawing gulf opening beneath him but this was the deepest ocean opening up to entomb him. He had lost hope in space of few seconds. He wanted to smash something and he almost banged his fist on the wall just before leaving the room. He wanted to go far away now, for he wanted to think once he overcame the agony so that he can use his brains instead of his brawn. Right now he was too wrought to think, he needed the space to wallow and to spew all the acid that had developed in him. Be the Saraswatichandra he was!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welcome back Zu. Happy to see ur write up. I always enjoy ur work n this one too. Short but definitely in line with the on going track. Keep writing. ā­ļø
Edited by omshreejaanu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res...My browser wont let me post a like😔

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