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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 13

She sat there as he explained the plan to her, but her mind wander to her lonely mother, and as for akash his mind was struck on her confuse face, the plan lost its importance in the mist of their dreamland. As finally he finished as he said

AKASH: so Jai is it clear to you?

JAI: indeed we can work on it as soon as they come back OK so can I leave now

AKASH: yea sure but the weather outside is not good I am afraid that a storm is coming so I suggest you can stay here till the rain stops

JAI: no it is fine I can manage I have to go somewhere urgently

Saying this she collected all her things from the table as he looked outside the thunder was roaring angrily, he did not want her to go out in such a weather, he was afraid that it might hurt her so he caught her wrist and said

AKASH: see Jai it is really raining hard it will not harm you much if you stay back here

JAI: how many times shall I remind you that I am not a child and I can take care of myself

She said in a cold and curt tone, as she got rid of his grip and forwarded towards the door, but anger had already boiled inside him, he did not want her to leave he wanted her there, he did not know what was driving him so crazy for her maybe the drink they shared a while ago whatever it was as she turned the knob to open the door, he blocked her way with both his hands, she looked at him questioning and before she know it, he's got both of her hands in his vise like grip above her head, and he was pinning her to the wall using his lips His other hand grabs her hair and yanks down, bringing her face up, and his lips are on her . Her tongue tentatively strokes his and joins his in a slow, erotic dance. They were lost in the passionate kiss, but they had to stop as they ran out of breath, she looked at his eyes filled with lust the same that she herself could not hide from her eyes. Within seconds she was carried to his bedroom as they went exploring each other in the dark night

The flight was shaking a bit sue to the storm outside as she questioned her laughing husband for the fifth time

MANYATA: what happened uday why are you going on laughing like a lunatic?

UDAY: you have no idea that guava incident of your created so much of havoc in that day's class

MANYATA: Why what happened tell me?

FLASHBACK

They were having their surprise test, they hated it, tomorrow was diwali yet Mr Chawla refused to give them a holiday. Uday was a new student there and the most serious one too, he was intelligent and ready for the test as he was solving the paper easily while all the other boys prayed the test to stop so that they could escape from the benders finally god heard their prayer when Mrs Chawla came rushing to the class and said

MRS CHAWLA: it is manu gang again

MR CHAWLA: wait I am coming

He rushed out of the class along with his wife as the entire class burst into laughter as mumbling a name, when the name hit uday ears he asked them totally lost

UDAY: who is manyata?

ATUL: well she is our life savior, she is my neighbor and also like my sister and each time I am in trouble in this class she comes along with her gang to escape me from this mess

UDAY: but how?

ATUL: I text her and she along with her gang attack the guava orchard which is our teacher favorite and to prevent her gang from doing so sir runs out of the class but she is never caught though chased and we get a free class so you see she saves us all

But uday disliked the idea as he had been a sincere student and this behavior was very reckless as he scornfully replied

UDAY: doesn't sir complain to her parents

ATUL: no she does not have any parents but just a grandmother and actually she is class topper all the teacher favorite along with the teacher so Mr Chawla cannot take any action against her and the truth is he is also fond of her and he likes to chase her group they are like friends only you can say

UDAY: but still she is so rude and this kind of behavior should not be done to the teacher

Just then a muscular guy stood up and said in a heavy voice

RAJDEEP: hey don't you dare say anything about manyata

Just then a group of guy hooted and teased rajdeep by her name it was clear that he liked her. As uday did not pay much attention to it. After sometime a tired sweaty Mr Chawla entered the class and announced that it was dismissed as all the boys began to leave. That was the last class as after that uday had his exams and passing from there he shifted to Mumbai

FLASHBACK END

Manyata looked at him as he completed and said in an irritated tone

UDAY: I will have given rajdeep a good piece of mind if I was to meet him now

She looked at him and could see the jealously in his eyes, a naughty plan played in her mind as she said to him

MANYATA: oh I never knew he has a soft corner for me ok fine you can take your revenge now as I spoke to mom last night and she informed me that it is atul marriage this week

UDAY: mom whose mom?

MANYATA: your mom dumb I always call her mom

UDAY: OK then I guess we need to go as I want to see the face of that rajdeep when he knows that you are married to me by the way was he not there in our marriage

MANYATA: no as even he left Devgarh and shifted to another city for his further studies so he does not know anything about us but I am really looking forward to meet him again

She could feel uday blood already boiling with anger as he warned her

UDAY;I do not even want you near him wifey

Manyata smiled at him, as she kept her head on his chest and smiled assuring him

MANYATA: do not worry uday I will never leave you I can love only one person and that is you

UDAY:I know wifey and even I love only two girl in my life

MANYATA: two girl OK Mr uday veer Singh mind telling me there relation with you

UDAY: sure one is my wife and the next will be my daughter

A cute blush played on her face as the pilot announced the landing of the flight, they collected their luggage and went outside as a bright sun smiled at them finally they had reached DEVGARH

The storm had stopped but for jai it had just began when she woke up with akash by her side, not without a second waste she got herself dressed and raced her car back to her home but when akash opened his eyes he was disappointed by the fact that jai was not by his side, because after last night the one thing he was sure about was that he loved her and it was her whom he wanted to hold hands and spend his entire life.

done with the update

i am sorry if i offended any body

please hit the like button and no res box

hugss anni


Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hiii baby sister


hw r u ?


love the updatee


manyata is very naughty


i m also looking forword to see rajdeep face after seeing manyata married


finaly akash realize his love for jai i m happy


love u babyy muuuaaahhh

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update... The manu gang flashback was awesome...
The promo of the prev update was nt here in this update.
Pls update nxt chappy soon n wid lots of manveer romance in it 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hai Annesha, its a lovely update.finally akash realised jai is the girl for him. Guava incident is a marvelous part. I loved it so much. Manyata is a little naughty in her teenage days and Uday is a serious khadoos one. Opposites always attract each other and Manyata and Uday are the same. Uday is jealous of Rajdeep and told Manyata to stay away from him. Is he ordering or threating her? But I like that nature of Uday.
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was awesome anni..👏👏👏.
Lol just loved each n every scene.
.I just hope love to J changes Akash and his evil revenge...
Manveer aww they r so adorable i tell you..
but want to see more of a possessive Uday😳 then never towards Akash🤢
Continue soon anni...😊
Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww, i never knew anything could happen between akash and jai but i think it is a good thing... now akash will leave manyata alone and jai will leave uday...
Manyata is becoming mischievous each day (i think its uday's effect) but anyway let see what happens next...

Thanks for the PM and continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saakhi01

Nice update... The manu gang flashback was awesome...
The promo of the prev update was nt here in this update.
Pls update nxt chappy soon n wid lots of manveer romance in it 😆


thank you so much
no the promo is included in jai and akash part
yea for now there will be some manveer chappy only

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: capriya

Hai Annesha, its a lovely update.finally akash realised jai is the girl for him. Guava incident is a marvelous part. I loved it so much. Manyata is a little naughty in her teenage days and Uday is a serious khadoos one. Opposites always attract each other and Manyata and Uday are the same. Uday is jealous of Rajdeep and told Manyata to stay away from him. Is he ordering or threating her? But I like that nature of Uday.


thank you so much dear
yes but will jai fill the same
thanks a bit bookish knowledge
indeed but now it will be opposite
he is warning or threating or ordering her which so ever way she take it
yes more such incident will be seen

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snowdream

It was awesome anni..👏👏👏.

Lol just loved each n every scene.
.I just hope love to J changes Akash and his evil revenge...
Manveer aww they r so adorable i tell you..
but want to see more of a possessive Uday😳 then never towards Akash🤢
Continue soon anni...😊


thank twino
i am really glad you did
but jai will be the one running from her feeling
indeed they are adorable and cute also
more such possesiveness will be shown but towards rajdeep
yes i am going to continue super soon

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