A swaron SS : Tragedy Pain and Love updated pg 14 - Page 12

WOW...i loved the beautiful conclusion u gave to this unique SS...his love...his care...his affection ...so pure...he left no stone unturned to make her happy and comfortable in their relationship..i loved it when he called her bachcha...awww... so sweet...her fear..it was obvious...after going through such dark incident in life ... she was scared...and i just loved swayam ..the way he made her comfortable on their wedding night...and he made her ...his...it was beautiful...thanx for this beautiful SWARON SS dear...plzz keep writing ...

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

Aruba🤗 a beautiful ending for a beautiful story. It hasnt got any abrupt ending at all, it came in the flow of the story😳 Only swayam can do something magical like this, the love he feels for sharon is pure and unadultrated andthey he will always cherish the sweetest moments of their lives forever.❤️ The story was superbbb a rare concept, noone will dare to venture upon, but you have done it and kudos to you👏 Each update was special coz you slowly unveiled how sharon started a love for swayam, and his feelings towards her. Whatever the past may be he loves her unconditionally.👏 Being a rape victim, even a single touch can make her hyper, but swayam did everything to make her feel cherished and lovable and gave love a different meaning altogether⭐️👍🏼.Hats off to you yaar for a brilliant and unique concept. I wish it did not end here😭 Well thanks for this and loved the whole SS with the bottom of my heart. 😳❤️😳

This story had a beautiful ending... Before reading the SS, i was skeptical to read , as I dont want to read tragical stories😆 and sharon being a rape victom was too much for me😭

Originally posted by: Joshua_TANHA

This story had a beautiful ending... Before reading the SS, i was skeptical to read , as I dont want to read tragical stories😆 and sharon being a rape victom was too much for me😭

Then I thought of reading it and I loved it. The thing I like about ending is sharon's confusion about the wedding night . It was still connected to somewhere to the story s begining ... It was a beautiful ending not abrupt at all 👏

perfect ending dear.. loved it..!!

ok so it was a proper conclusion...the way it shuld hav...but since u feel a doubt whether u abruptly ended it...mebbe the last section might hav given that impression but at the most u may hav stretched it with some dialogues between them...however u conveyed the thoughts fairly enuf as it is...so I think that shuld answer ur doubts...all's well that ends well

hey arouba sooo sorry jaldi real karne ka bol ke bhi itna late reply de rai hu soo sorry dil se


so sweet updates yaar so sweetly swaron became togather & swayam so sweet yaar

Swayam; u shud sleep…I know you are tired

Sharon had a confused look on her face

Swayam: why this confused expression on your face…I know its our wedding night…don't worry I wont leave you


loved dis lines so sweet
agn nice one
Thanx for PM..:D

finally finish reading all in one go... perfect and awesome ending... loved it