PuNIR/AshAkti PaRaDiSe#25 Silver Jublian AT - Page 73

Originally posted by: punirashakti

Shikha darling...plz update ur special part of PuNiR 😳 very soon...we dieing to read yarrr 😆

i am also dieing to read your and puja story too...so,please hurry up...😃😃😃

Originally posted by: punirashakti

Welcome sameena di 🤗

Good to see u here 😃

btw yes we all good here...n we not depend on pr anymore for punir...we happy with our PuNiR khayali pulao...😆

Afterall we love our PuNir unconditionally as like our Onir love his mishty unconditionally...😳

dis AT we always stay active any-condition n situation...

Bcs...WE LOVE PUNIR UNCONDITIONAL...😳

i agree with swati...we love punir unconditional...so,we not stop thinking about that and it doesnot matter for us what is happening with PR...we are happy with our kyali pulav...i hope you like our khyali pulav...what say?do you like it or not?

Originally posted by: Shikhasaini199

i agree with swati...we love punir unconditional...so,we not stop thinking about that and it doesnot matter for us what is happening with PR...we are happy with our kyali pulav...i hope you like our khyali pulav...what say?do you like it or not?

its FABULOUS dear...👏👏👏👏👏👏

swati,puja,pujametallic i am waiting for your story guys please update soon...😃😃😃😃😃😃

Purvi garhparvash in dutt mension...(purvi and onir enter in the home with holding hands) everyone is exicted for few rasam's
Anahita-chalo, aab anguthi(ring)dundho...jo yeh ring dundhaga uska dusara par puri zindagi raaj chalaga..chalo team batao ...mein to meri purvi ka saath hu
pakhi-i am with my bhai and rohan and ridhima also with onir pakhi-dad,aap kiska saath ho...mr.dutt look confuse and said i don't know.i am with purvi and onir both game start purvi almost find the ring but in the bowl she handover the ring to onir and both share a deep eyelock holding eachother hand
Finally onir won the game.everyone is happy
anahita-pakhu,ja purvi ko onir ka room ma la ja
pakhi-no mom,
anahita-why?
Pakhi-mom,i think bhai ko khud bhabhi ko goad mein udha ka lakar jaya to (onir and purvi both shy..)
anahita-great (onir ja purvi ko la ja) onir hold her in her strong arm...and reach his room purvi and onir both look at each others eyes.
(IN ONIR's ROOM)
Purvi-onir,i love you
onir-i love you too...(he kiss her forhead) onir kiss her eyebrows purvi gets shy and trun and stand infront of window..onir step towards her he remove her hair from her back and untied her blouse and start kissing her back...that time purvi enjoy every moment and feel onir...then onir hold her soft fingures with his hand..and start kissing her hand ..he kiss her hand and shoulder then,he unpined her pallu..and remove it then onir hold her from back and turn her then purvi kiss his forhead,right cheek and then left and goes to his lips...their lips join finally both enjoy the heavely moment and the kiss too.kiss continue purvi move her hand to remove onir shirt and finally she remove his shirt and break the kiss.and start kissing his cheast ..she kiss him and onir one hand in her shoulder and other hand in her hot belly..then onir kiss her lips and neck and slowly he reach to her stomach and kiss her and give her love bit.purvi feel onir and feel happy...Onir,want to hold purvi but she step backward and fall on the bed and onir too fall over purvi and kiss her neck ,shoulder and goes to her lips but purvi stop him by kissing his check..and push onir in back then he hold her from back...purvi get shy slowly he remove her blouse and cover her body with himself.and kissing her both enjoy that heavenly moment and sleep in eachother arms...the puresoul are one now for forever...

purvi and onir meet in the hospital after arvi weeding )

onir-hello

purvi purvi-hi,

onir tum kaisa ho aur yaha?

Onir-mein thik hu,hospital na mujha 2 case diya hain handle karna ka liya

purvi-ya to accha hain,mein bahut kush hu tumhara liya onir ki tum tumhara profession mein vapas aa gaya ,ek baat kaho?

Onir-ha kaho na purvi-onir,ek aachi si ladki dekh kar apani life main settle ho jo

onir-you mean dusari shadi,noways

purvi-kyon?

Onir-meina mera profession sa shadi kar li hain na bs thik ha mera liya ( purvi and onir both smile )

onir-ok see u

purvi-see u ( other side arjun reach hospital to findout purvi is in hospital and saw punir together and gets angry )

A-PURvi,kaha thi tum?

Purvi-mein to hospital mein thi tumha to pata hain na mein baba sa milng gai thi

A-baba sa ya onir sa

purvi-get shocked arjun tum ya kya kaah raha ho,tum aisa kaisa soch sakta ho...tum bhul gaya ho ya wahi onir ka bara main tum ya saab bol raha ho jinki vajah sa hum ek hua hain please A aisa maat bolo

A-kyon purvi bura laga? meina onir ka bara mein ya saab kaha

purvi-aap abhi gussa mein ho apako nahi pata aap kya kaha raha ho hum baad mein baat karanga

purvi left that place and in late night purvi is doing someoffice work arjun came with pari and arjun say sorry to purvi and everything gets well

but in next morning janamashtmi celebration takes place in d house everyone is their and purvi decorate home she is standing in a chair and suddenly purvi loss her balance and fall but onir catch her and then both share a deep eyelock arjun look at everything and gets angry during krishna janam coinsidently punir as a couple krishna ko jhoola jhulata hain and pandit ji said to punir aap dono ki jodi radha-krishna jasi hain hamasha bani raha apaki jodi aur bahut jaldi apaka ghar ek balgopal aaya..everyone shock but no one say anything to panditji but onir said she is not my wife...again a fight between arvi.and then purvi thought about onir and arjun and the difference between them

Purvi constently think about onir and a big smile in her face.purvi is shocked and thought in her mind why i am thinking about onir so much ...purvi see herself in a mirror and her smile and then arjun enter the room and told her for divorce arjun-purvi,mein aab tumhara saath is rishta mein aur nahi rah sakta purvi-kyon arjun? Arjun-mujha lagta hain ki maina tumsa shadi karna ka faisla galat liya tha tum hamasha onir ki thi par tumha ehsaas nahi tha par mujha lagta hain aap ho jayaga purvi-she sign the paper and want to meet onir but not able to meet him because he is out of city for some work
onir reach mumbai he findout arjun purvi leave alone and then he thought how purvi be able to leave without arjun and want to see her once...
onir reach sunset point he saw purvi is already their and she recollect all the moment she spent with onir and said onir kaha ho aap apaki mishti ko apaki zarorat hain mujha apaka saath apani puri zindgi bitani hain...please onir jaldi vapas aa jao...onir put his hand to purvi shoulder...purvi turn and she is very happy to see onir and tears rolling in her eyes...and then she hug onir tight...bg song(saathiya ya tuna kya kiya)

Then onir realize and he step back from purvi

Purvi-what happen onir?

Onir-nothing,

Purvi-agar kuch nahi to aap yaha kya kar raha ho?

Onir-tumha ek bar dekhana aya tha

Purvi: kyon?

Onir: mujha arjun aur tumhara bara mein pata chala...kya hua purvi saab thik hain na?

Purvi : haan onir,aab saab thik ho gaya hain

Onir : matlab

Purvi:aaj mujha ehsaas ho gaya hain onir ki mujha meri zindagi mein kya chaiya,mein kissa payar karti hu

Onir :kissa?

Purvi : aapsa onir ,mein kitni bevakof thi meri duniya mere pass thi aur mujha iska ehsaas bhi nahi tha...lakin aaj mujha ehsaas ho gaya hain...

Tears rolling from onir eyes and now both of them want to be with eachother...sudden onir cell ring...and now,he had to go panchgani for a case,

Purvi : kya hua onir?

Onir : purvi mujha abhi panchgani ka liya nikal na hoga?

Purvi:kyon?

Onir :ek case hain and vaha pa mittal ka case mein mujha gavahi bhi dani hain

Purvi : onir mein bhi chalo aapka saath...

Onir : lakin purvi...mein vaha kam ka liya ja raha ho...onir turn to leave

Purvi :she stop onir,mujha apaka saath jana hain onir,issi bahna mein apaka saath thoda time spend kar paongi or mujha akalapan bhi nahi lagaga...please

Onir:ok,both leave for punchgani(landslide in the punchangani and both stay in a hotel that nigh

Purvi and onir both reach the hotel roon and sudden snowfall start ...onir love snowfall...he is out of the room and purvi also follow him...

Purvi:onir,aap bimar ho jaoga...andar chalo

Onir:nahi purvi<I love snowfall

Purvi:aacha thik hain par thodi daar baad andar chalana...

Onir:ok,onir make an ice gola and through at purvi

Purvi get shock she also done the same thing

But aftersome time purvi is not able to handle the coolness of the place and she start shrinking onir notice that

Onir kya hua purvi tum thik ho na...

Purvi:haan mein thik hu ,

Onir:lag to nahi raha

ONIR AND PURVI BOTH REACH TO THR ROOM

Purvi hug onir and feel the warmness of his body onir also reciprocate... Slowly Onir moved his hand and cupped Purvi's face and kissed her on her forehead. Later he moved forward to kiss her right cheek and then her left cheek. Slowly he leaned forward too kiss her on her lips. Purvi get shy and sit on the bedonir sit behind her and he remove her hair from back and kiss her shoulder...purvi enjoy it and then he untied her blouse and start kissing her purvi feel onir breath and turn slowly purvi moved her hand to opening onir shirt...she open it and start kissing onir onir also feel it and both enjoy that moment and then onir unpinned her saree...onir push purvi in bed in a gentle way and his hand slightly touching her soft skin giving her an intimate sensation running down her spine. Her heartbeat quicken. She took a deep breath and closed her eyes. Again onir try to come closer to her lips and this time both of them enjoying the kiss... Onir brought his one hand underneath her saree and felt her soft stomach. He brought his hand across herbelly.purvi hold onir tightly and both of them enjoy that heavely moment and sleep holding eachother tightly...

next morning mittlecall onir and ask him to meet in the cliff...
onr said ok...
onir:he kiss purvi forehead and said purvi main ja raha hu
purvi:kaha onir,
onir:mittle sa milna
purvi:onir mein bhi apaka saath calongi
onir: nahi purvi,vaha khatra hain
purvi: mujha apaka saath jana hain,aap mein apasa aur dur nahi raah sakti,bas meina kah diya na,mein apaka saath chalongi matlab chalungi samjha
onir:ok
in the cliff both are waiting for him and sudden onir saw a smile in purvi face
onir:kya hua?
purvi:kuch nahi bas kal raat ka bara mein soch rahi thi
now onir also smile and both hug eachother sudden purvi saw mittl and his gunpointing towards onir purvi turn to save onir then onir in shock he also turn to save purvi but attime both are injured from bullet...and died in each other arm...
two year later,two best friend anahita dutt and vira ahluvaliya gave birth to childern
vira ahluvaliya gave birth to purvi ahaluvaliya and dr.anahita dutt gave birth to onir dutt
after 2 year two dr.friends dr.anahita dutt mother- onir dutt and dr.vira ahluvaliya mother -purvi ahluvaliya gave birth to their child purvi have an little brother-vivan ahluvia and onir have a sister-pakhi dutt...all for are best friends and in same school...onir love sweets a lot mainly rasgula so,purvi everytime tease him by calling motu and onir gave her an anger look both of them fight and then resolve all their issues after schooling dr.anhita send onir to newyork for studying...and purvi in india...that time purvi understand she loves onir a lot and purvi get all the flashes of her past life and onir all miss purvi a lot ...after 10 years onir get back to india both of them meet once now,onir is so dashing and smart purvi fall for him more and more day by day and onir also fall for purvi simplicity and kindness and loveable nature...during durga puja purvi have all the flashes about that time she spend with onir in calcutta... during sindor khala,dr.anahita dutt invites dr.vira with her family when purvi and onir meet in durgapandla purvi about to fall because someone push her...and onir catch her and both share a deep eyelock...and same day when purvi workship durga ma suddenly her maang fill with sindoor...everyone gets shock at the time purvi have clear flashback...and she get to know that onir is her love of life in past and her husband too...she goes near to onir and said i need to talk to you onir and your mom...please its urgent

Purvi enter onir's house with onir and her families...

Dr. anahita-baby what happened?

Purvi_badi ma,mujha saab samajh mein aa gaya ...(tears rolling )

Dr. vira-kya samajha mein aa gaya bacha?...saaf saaf bol na

Purvi-mom,mujha vo flashes meri past life ka tha...you know what...mein aur onir husband-wife tha mom,hum ek dusara sa bahut payar karta tha...mujha vo saara pal ka flashes aata tha jo hamna saath bitya tha...purvi aapna aur onir ka past sapko detail mein batati hain...

Onir-purvi tu pagal ho gai hain,punar janam kuch nahi hota

Purvi-onir,aapko yakin nahi hain to chalo mere saath...

Purvi onir ka haath pakadti hain aur ussa dr.onir dutt ka culcutta vala ghar mein lakar jaati hain

Purvi and onir reach their caulcutta house...onir see nameplate and feel something related to him...purvi open the door...and then they enter in the home ...purvi gets all the flashes

1)purvi onir par apana gila balo ka pani dalti hain

2) onir gets tensed to see purvi running and told her sambl ka mishit

3)the baby first kick

4)after first fight onir purvi scene in the roof

5)when she left home and go to Mumbai

Onir kuch yaad aya...onir see his and purvi picture in the wall...

Purvi-aap chalo mere saath,both reach the same school where they meet first...kuch yaad aya abhi...now,onir gets a flashback full scene how they met first...

onir "haan,purvi hum yaha pahli bar mila tha...

(purvi smile,matlab apako saab yaad aa gaya)

Purvi and onir both hug eachother tightly

Onir-purvi aab hama koi alag nahi kar sakta,aab ham hamasha ka liya ek ho gaya hain...mein mom sa hamari shadi ki baat karonga ghar pahuchata hi,

purvi get shy and she turn her face...onir goes behind her ,and turn her and then he kiss her forhead and both the cheeks...and purvi also kiss his horehead and eyes...both are happy now,and leave for home...

Purvi and onir both reach dutt mension and there is something new feeling between onir and purvi both look eachother very lovingly...everyone in tension in dutt mension specially onir mom ...sudden paki came and said mom bhai aa gaya ...onir enter the house holding purvi's hand...purvi and onir's mom notice that and both gave a smile to each other...

Dr.anhita-kaha gaya that um dono,pata hain hamari saas atak gai thi, tum dono thik to ho na?

Pakhi(she teases onir)-mom inha dekh ka lagta hain kya ki kuch gadbad hain...mujha to lagta hain aab saab thik hain,lagta hain kissi ko payar ho gaya hain...

Onir-pakhi,just shutup...ok

Pakhi-ok,(with a big smile)

Onir-mom,purvi na jo kaha vo saab saach hain,I also remember everything about my past...and mom and vira ma,I want to say something to purvi infront of you all

Vira and anahita together-what you want to say?...

Onir-he is on his knees and purpose purvi ...will be you marry me?

Everyone happy and a big smile in purvi's face too...she look at onir's mom and said yes...and then she run away because she feel shy and onir follow her...

( Onir follow purvi ...purvi and onir both are in garden..purvi plants ko pani dalti hain and onir grab her from behind.purvi get shy
)

purvi-onir,kya kar raha ho chodo onir-kyon?tumha aacha nahi laga

purvi-node her head and say ha par...

Onir-par kya? Purvi-koi dekha laga

onir-to kya? tum meri honawali biwi ho itna to haak banta hain mera

( purvi turn and suddenly water pipe move towards onir he is wet now)

onir-tumna mujha gila kiya,aab tumhari bari

purvi-nahi onir,meina jaan bhujh ka nahi kiya galti sa ho gaya

onir-to kya tumna mujha gila to kiya na

( purvi and onir both play with water suddenly purvi slip and fall and onir also loss his control and fall over purvi )

their a deep eyelock and a romentic moment come purvi hair is in her lips she feel uneasy try to move her hair onir see this he move his hand purvi gets shy and she start blushing ...onir remove her hair from her lips and goes near her lips to kiss her purvi close her eyes and a big smile in her face 😳 but suddenly pakhi and vivan enter in garden and onir purvi notice them and standup quickly, 😆

onir- ( slowly onir said ) kabab mein haddi

purvi-she hit onir and smile

Pakhi-kya ho raha tha yahan?

Onir-kuch nahi

vivan-di,hamna saab dakha

purvi-hold vivan hand and in anger she said kya dekha?

Vivan-aap aur

purvi-aur kya?

Pakhi-aap aur bhai

onir-bahut bolna lagi hain na tu...tujha to main batata hu (onir run behind her suddenly onir dad and purvi dad enter in home and onir dad save pakhi from onir)

onir dad (mr.vikram aditya dutt)-kya ho raha hain yaha?

Pakhi-dad apaka beta ki shadi ki planning

onir dad-planning,onir ki shadi ki lakin kissa

pakhi-dad ,bhai is in love with purvi ...onir dad is happy

purvi dad (mr.rishab ahluvaliya)-vira,hamari purvi aur onir ki shadi

dr.vira explain everything to them and everybody is happy now mr.dutt hug onir and said i am proud of you my son and also purvi......dr.anahita gave kangan to purvi and said ye hamare ghar ki bahu ka liye, tu meri beti to thi hi ab se meri bahu bhi hain aur purvi ka haath onir ka haath mein de deti hai

Onir purvi both look each other without blinking their eyes...

purvi mom notice that and said in dono ki shadi kara dani chaiya hama jaldi sa jaldi...everyone agree

dr.anahita(in a funny way)-onir itna mat ghuro meri purvi ko..ussa teri nazar la jayagi

onir-(smile)mom

dr.vira (gets emotional)-visa bhi kuch din baad to ye hamasha ka liya yahan par hi aa jayagi

dr.anahita-tu tension maat la mere liya pakhi aur purvi ek jasi hain.vo yaha kush rahagi

vira-janti hu tu isa mujhsa jayda payar karagi

(pakhi try to light the situation)

pakhi-ara,koi bacharo ki shadi ka muhrat to nikalvao...dekho to inka chara..Everyone laugh.they decided after 2 days punir engagement happen
The day before engagement,purvi and onir goes for shopping purvi select a red lanhga for herself but not buy it but onir buy this for her and he think he give her a surprise and onir brought a skyblue sharvani with kreem churidar ..both leave from that place..outside purvi see pani-purvi stall both of them reach their purvi-dada,bilkul tikhi panipuri purvi share pani puri in sameplate with onir purvi handover all the bags to onir aur vo onir ko apana hatho sa panipuri khilati hain

(in car)
purvi-onir tum to tikha nahi khate to aaj kyun khayaa?

Onir-he put his hand in purvi shoulder and said tumna itna payar sa kilaya to usma tumhara payar na usa mitha bana diya...

(both of them laugh to see eachother...onir drive the car purvi sit next to him she hold onir arm and put her head into his shoulder and close her eye...onir put his hand to purvi shoulder and pull her very close to him...dey share deep eyelock bt sudden someone horn n break der eyelock)

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( Both of them reach home,everyone are busy with prepration.purvi put all the bags in table and go to her room onir follow her in her room and he close the door)

purvi-kya hua?

Onir-purvi ko lehangha dikhta hain

purvi-she is happy to see lahanga, and said tumna ya kab kharida?

Onir-jab tum trial room main gai thi ...

Purvi-iski kya jarorat thi

onir-jarorat thi,main meri purvi ko khaas din pa kuch dana chata tha to issa acha mujha kuch nahi laga

purvi-accha baba,aab gift da diya na to jao. (she push onir )

onir-assa kisa jao,pahla tum mujha ya pahan ka dikho

purvi-she said ok,and (she is going for change the dress onir hold her hand)

Onir (hold purvi hand)-kaha ja rahi ho?

Purvi-change karna

onir-yahi pa karlo

purvi(blusing)-tum bahot bashram ho

onir-bashram kyon?shadi ka baad to.,purvi (she stop onir and her hand in onir's lips)

purvi-abhi tum ja raha ho ya mein mom ko bulao

onir-pahla change karka aao,mujha tumha is dress mein dakhna hain purvi change karka aati hain

(onir kiss her forhead and eyebrows purvi get shy and turn onir hold her from back and kiss her shoulder and he one side her hair and exposing her back onir start kissing her back slowly purvi turn and open her shirt button and kiss onir's cheast both enjoy the heavenly moment slowly onir kiss purvi's stomatch both enjoy sudden purvi's mom call her and their romentic moment break)Next part,both of them come downstair everybody get shock to see purvi in lehnga... Vira-baby,you buy a green lehnga na,so from where this come? Purvi(look at onir)-mom, ya mujha onir na gift kiya vira-bahut payara hain,meri baby ekdaam princess lag rahi hain.. Onir-(he start blushing) vira ma, aab hum chalta hain...Chal pakhi (in car pakhi and onir convo) pakhi-bhai,aap purvi sa saach main itna payar karto ho maina kabhi nahi socha tha ki apaki life mein aisa pal ayaga onir-pakhu,meina bhi kabhi socha tha meri life mein purvi ayagi..you know what pakhu aab mein purvi sa aur duar nahi rahe sakta ..main nahi chata aab koi hama alag kara.. Pakhi-bhai,koi apako aab purvi(sorry)bhabi sa alag nahi kar payaga ..aur vaisa bhi mera bhai itna smart hain koi bhi ladaki uska itna karib akar duar nahi jana chati aur jab tak mein hu na tab tak koi problem apaka aur bhabhi ka bich mein nahi aana dongi(to hear this onir have a smile in his face) onir-pakhu,tu...tu hamara bich kissi ko nahi aana dagi..tu (both of them smile
Onir and pakhi both look at eachother brust into laughter)(both reach dutt mension pakhi start shouting) pakhi-mom -dad where are you? Anahita and vikramaditya dutt came anahita-kya hua?kyon chila raha hain mera baccha pakhi-mom i am angry with bhai onir(hit pakhi head slowly)-kya hua?abhi tak to sab thik tha achanak kya hua tujhaHe pull pakhi cheeks pakhi-where is my gift? Onir-kaisa gift pakhi-mom you know what? Anahita-what? Pakhi-bhai abhi purvi ko payara sa gift dakar aya hain and she was very happy anahita-really,i am proud of my baby(she kiss onir forhead) onir-bol kya chaiya tujha? Pakhi-apaki smile,mujha kuch nahi chaiya bas aap hamasha kush raho (anahita and vikramaditya dutt both are happy to see their kid happy and then all four hug like a perfect family) late night,purvi call onir purvi-hello, onir-hi purvi-you miss me onir-why?why i miss you?kal to hum milanga na purvi-(angerly)ok bye onir-ruko, ha baba i miss you purvi-mein bhi onir onir-kal hama officialy licence mil jayaga ek saath rahna ka
Purvi-onir mein aaj bahut kush ho onir-mein bhi purvi purvi-onir,kal subha mujha mehndi lagna wali hain aap aaoga na
Onir-ha purvi,(pakhi knock onir door and vivan knock purvi door) purvi-bye onir onir-nahi,pahla vo 3 magical word bolo purvi-onir,please onir-what please?say otherwise mein phone nahi rakhonga..and do it with a kiss purvi-ok,i love you and she kiss onir-i love you too and he kiss her back and then both hang ..

Next morning

Next morning, purvi-(apana hatho mein mahndi lagakar apana room main jati hain) vira-baby tera khana meina yaha rakha hain,mein vivan ko bhajti hu vo tujha khana khila daga .ok baby purvi-no mom,aap kissi ko maat bhajo mein khud khaa longi(she thought onir kahan ho tum bhuk ka mara meri jaan nikal gai hai)

Vira-par beta,tera hatho main mehndi lagi hain...kaisa khaygi purvi-kha longi mom,don't worry.apako bahut kaam hai to jao..

(Onir enter purvi room from back door)

Purvi-kaha tha tum?tumha pata hain kab sa wait kar rahi thi onir-(he pull purvi towards him)tumha pata hain mein kitni muskil sa yaha aaya hu purvi-(she look a bloodmark in onir shirt)yeh kya hua? Onir-kuch nahi,bas thodi si khroch hain purvi-yeh sab meri vajah sa hua hain,agar mein tumha yaha nahi bulati to yeh nahi hota onir-tum nahi bulati to kya mein nahi aata,aaj ka din hum dono ka liya special hain so,give me a smile ,big one like my purvi purvi(smile)-onir kiss her hand

(purvi open his shirt button) onir-what are you doing? Purvi-chup,she put medicine in his wound onir slowly come close to her and kiss near her lips

Purvi-push onir back, purvi-mujha khana khilo,aur bhago yaha sa,issa pahla koi dekha la onir-purvi ko kahna kilana ka liya haat aga badhata hain...purvi bit his fingure.(onir gave her a look like he love her alot after this) after that purvi saw her mom and pakhi standing in the door purvi-mom vo, onir-ma vo actually vira-mujha pata hain,chal onir abhi ja yaha sa,issa pahla koi dekha la (onir jata jata purvi ko ek flying kiss deta hain ..he is behind vira and pakhi at that time and purvi smile)
( Purvi blush and vira smile see her daughter happy she leave the room...pakhi also see her happy and goes behind onir)

Pakhi-bhai,stop

Onir-kya hua?

Pakhi-aap bolo..bhabi ka saath time spend karna hain na..

Onir-tu ja,

pakhi-bolo,jo kar sakti hu vo main hi karongi

Onir-haan,kuch kar na please.meri princess hain na tu...please please please

Pakhi-ok

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In engagement ceremony, Punir exchange their rings and after that Pakhi announce ladies and gentleman please welcome new couple in dance floor..both Punir in dance floor Purvi put her hands in Onir shoulder and Onir hold her from waist

(BG Song...😳

Dhiire Dhiire Pyar Ko Badhana Hai
Had Se Guzar Jana Hai
Mujhe Bas Tujhase Dil Lagana Hai
Had Se Guzar Jana Hai

Aisi Zindagi Hogi, Har Taraf Khushi Hogi
Itana Pyar Duu.Nga Tujhe, Ai Mere Sanam
Ab Na Koi Gam Hoga, Na Ye Pyar Kam Hoga
Saathi Mere Mujhako Tere Sar Ki Hai Qasam
Ik Duusare Ko Aazamaana Hai
Had Se ...

Main Akela Kya Karata, Aise Hi Aanhe Bharata
Tere Pyar Ke Liye, Tadapata Umr Bhar
Jaane Kya Main Kar Jaati, Yuun Tadap Ke Mara Jaati
Bin Tere Bhala Kaise, Katata Ye Safar
Tere Liye Mar Ke Bhi Dikhaana Hai
Had Se ...

Tera Chaand Sa Mukhada, Tu Jigar Ka Hai Tukada
Tu Hamare Sapano.N Ki Jhiil Ka Kanval
Jaan Se Tu Hai Pyaara, Aankho Ka Tu Hai Taara
Bin Tere Jiyenge Ab Ham Na Ek Pal
Sab Kuchh Tujhape Hi Lutaana Hai
Had Se Guzar Jana Hai

Dhiire Dhiire Pyar Ko Badhana Hai
Had Se Guzar Jana Hai
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After the dance Onir hold Purvi hand tightly, Purvi get shy

Onir - mom mujha Purvi ka saath longdrive pa jaana hain please mom

Anhita-par

Vira-kya hua?

Anahita-bacho ko ek saath bahar jana hain

Vira-to jaana da na

Anahita-par guest hain yaha, party abhi over nahi hui hai

Vira-hum sambhl langa..jana da..Jao tum dono onir

(he is very happy)-thankyou mom and vira ma purvi and onir leave for the longdrive...😳

Onir-kya hua?

Purvi-onir,mein bahut kush hu aaj hum ek ho gaya,hamara bich aab koi nahi ayaga na..

Onir-nahi,aab mein kissi ko hamara bich nahi aana donga
(he kiss purvi eyelash)

Both reach Onir's farmhouse Purvi and Onir change their cloths Onir wear a white shirt and black paint and Purvi wear a white saadi with backless blouse both reach poll side area sudden rain start

BG Song...😳

Bhigi Bhigi Raaton Men, Mithi Mithi Baaton Men
Aisi Barasaato Men, Kaisaa Lagataa Hai?

Aisaa Lagataa Hai Tum Banake Baadal,
Mere Badan Ko Bhigoke Mujhe, Chhed Rahe Ho O
Chhed Rahe Ho...

Ambar Khele Holi Ui Maan
Bhigi Mori Choli, Hamajoli, Hamajoli...

O, Paani Ke Is Rele Men Saavan Ke Is Mele Men
Chhat Pe Akele Men Kaisaa Lagataa Hai...

Aisaa Lagataa Hai, Tu Banake Ghataa Apane Sajan Ko Bhigoke Khel Khel Rahi Ho O...Khel Rahi Ho...

Aisaa Lagataa Hai...
Tum Banake Baadal Mere Badan Ko Bhigoke Mujhe Chhed Rahe Ho Ho
Chhed Rahe Ho

Barakhaa Se Bachaa Luun Tujhe, Sine Se Lagaa Luun
Aa Chhupaa Luun Aa Chhuupaa Luun...

Dil Ne Pukaaraa Dekho Rut Kaa Ishaaraa Dekho
Uf Ye Nazaaraa Dekho, Kaisaa Lagataa Hai, Bolo?

Aisaa Lagataa Hai Kuchh Ho Jaayegaa
Mast Pavan Ke Ye Jhoken Sainyaa Dekh Rahe Ho O
Dekh Rahe Ho...

Aisaa Lagataa Hai
Tum Banake Baadal Mere Badan Ko Bhigoke Mujhe Chhed Rahe Ho Ho
Chhed Rahe Ho...
Purvi and onir both are in pool side sudden rain start purvi-(she come closer to onir and hold his hands both cross their fingures with each other) purvi kiss onir's check and when onir try the same she start running onir-purvi ruko,ruko varna aacha nahi hoga.. Purvi stop but she stand at the edge of pool.slowly onir step forward from her,and purvi step back and sudden she fall in the pool and she pretend that she doesn't know how to swim
(Onir is very worried to see purvi in this condition he also dive in the pool for saving purvi.he hold purvi in his arm and then purvi put her head to his shoulder..onir get shock) onir-purvi? Purvi(laugh )-kya? Onir-tumha pata hain mein kitna dar gaya tha purvi-haan,issa sabit ho gaya aap mujhsa kitna payar karta ho onir-purvi ya koi tarika hota hain purvi-she kiss his shoulder and say i am sorry onir-ek shart pa purvi-kya? Kaisi shart? Onir-mujha kiss chaiya purvi-kiss his both cheeks onir-yaha nahi,he put his finger in lips to indicate he want kiss in lips purvi(get shy)-but she slowly come close to his lips.slowly their lips in one another both of them enjoy the passinate kiss about ten minutes (both are in the pool).
After breaking passinate kiss purvi-onir ghar chala onir-nahi,abhi mujha tumhara saath rahna hain purvi-lakin, onir-thik hain jao, purvi-pull his cheeks,are aisa kaisa jao tumha akala chod ka (onir apana head purvi ki goad mein payar sa rakhta hain..and then he pull purvi hand to himself) onir-aaj,kitni kubsurat raat hain na purvi-haan onir,apako pata hain mein hamasha chand ko dekha karti thi,lakin aaj apasa nazar nahi haat rahi hain onir-kyon? Purvi-apako pata hain chand mein apako apaka jeewan saathi ka chara dikhai deta hain ..lakin mera chand to mere pass hain aaj onir-purvi,3 din baad hamari shadi hain...(then ,both leave to go home)

Originally posted by: punirashakti

its FABULOUS dear...👏👏👏👏👏👏

Hi, unfortunately I don't have the time to read the whole story and therefore may miss out on toom much. I'm just glad to see that you guys have constructively chosen to deal with the disappointment that the show has turned into. I'm glad your creative juices are flowing andyou are happily writing. Who knows we may have the next big story writers in our midst. Please keep enjoying what you're doing.

Next morning purvi wakeup she notice onir sleep with open mouth she smiles then slowly she close to onir and close his mouth and kiss his forhead..purvi try to getup from the bed but onir hold her hand tightly purvi try put fail sudden onir wakeup and see purvi ...
Purvi-onir,haath chodo
Onir-nahi,pahla meri morning kiss
purvi-run,but onir caught her and she kiss him...both leave happily in their life after two month later in morning purvi gets ready and after puja she came to her room and see onir still sleeping she sit next to him and look at him continuesly and smile she kiss him onir wake up with morning kiss in breakfast table purvi feel uneasy she stand and run washroom onir follow her
onir-are you ok?
Purvi-haan onir,i am fine
onir-nahi,tum yaha aao...onir check her and find out that purvi is pregent
Onir smile...purvi gives a confused look to onir...
Purvi-kya hua
onir?...aap smile kyon kar raha ho
onir-tum sunogi to tum bhi kushi sa pagal ho jaogi
purvi-onir saaf saaf bato na onir-he hold purvi hand and put to her womb...(both look at each other and smile)
purvi-onir,aaj mein sahi arath main puri ho gai...ek ladki aurat tab banti hain jab uski shaadi hoti hain aur puri uss din jab vo ma banti hain
onir-ha purvi mein bhi bahut kush hu...(he kiss her forhead,and eyes )