PuNIR/AshAkti PaRaDiSe#25 Silver Jublian AT - Page 69

Originally posted by: punirashakti

Very nice shikha...continue...😃

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Puja wer is ur story yarrr...😭

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@Pujametalic...plz write ur story too...m waiting...

thank you swati...i am also waiting for your story puja...
and pujametalic ...

my dear friend plz do not cry i am busy now for my paper work...my guide scold me for error in paper...so i did not concentrate on story...wait and have patient i will give u a full story of punir with good romantic track...

Originally posted by: onirfans

my dear friend plz do not cry i am busy now for my paper work...my guide scold me for error in paper...so i did not concentrate on story...wait and have patient i will give u a full story of punir with good romantic track...

ok...tab tak m dreaming abt onir n his future happy life 😳😉😆

Originally posted by: punirashakti

ok...tab tak m dreaming abt onir n his future happy life 😆

i agree with swati...but we are waiting...so,do it fast yar...

Purvi and onir both reach dutt mension and there is something new feeling between onir and purvi both look eachother very lovingly...everyone in tension in dutt mension specially onir mom ...sudden paki came and said mom bhai aa gaya ...onir enter the house holding purvi's hand...purvi and onir's mom notice that and both gave a smile to each other...

Dr.anhita-kaha gaya that um dono,pata hain hamari saas atak gai thi, tum dono thik to ho na?

Pakhi(she teases onir)-mom inha dekh ka lagta hain kya ki kuch gadbad hain...mujha to lagta hain aab saab thik hain,lagta hain kissi ko payar ho gaya hain...

Onir-pakhi,just shutup...ok

Pakhi-ok,(with a big smile)

Onir-mom,purvi na jo kaha vo saab saach hain,I also remember everything about my past...and mom and vira ma,I want to say something to purvi infront of you all

Vira and anahita together-what you want to say?...

Onir-he is on his knees and purpose purvi ...will be you marry me?

Everyone happy and a big smile in purvi's face too...she look at onir's mom and said yes...and then she run away because she feel shy and onir follow her...

Originally posted by: Tarza

Ho kya raha hai yaha par???

we all play story on punir...serial mein to its all over...but our imagination made us happy...

( purvi and onir meet in the hospital after arvi weeding )

onir-hello

purvi purvi-hi,

onir tum kaisa ho aur yaha?

Onir-mein thik hu,hospital na mujha 2 case diya hain handle karna ka liya

purvi-ya to accha hain,mein bahut kush hu tumhara liya onir ki tum tumhara profession mein vapas aa gaya ,ek baat kaho?

Onir-ha kaho na purvi-onir,ek aachi si ladki dekh kar apani life main settle ho jo

onir-you mean dusari shadi,noways

purvi-kyon?

Onir-meina mera profession sa shadi kar li hain na bs thik ha mera liya ( purvi and onir both smile )

onir-ok see u

purvi-see u ( other side arjun reach hospital to findout purvi is in hospital and saw punir together and gets angry )

A-PURvi,kaha thi tum?

Purvi-mein to hospital mein thi tumha to pata hain na mein baba sa milng gai thi

A-baba sa ya onir sa

purvi-get shocked arjun tum ya kya kaah raha ho,tum aisa kaisa soch sakta ho...tum bhul gaya ho ya wahi onir ka bara main tum ya saab bol raha ho jinki vajah sa hum ek hua hain please A aisa maat bolo

A-kyon purvi bura laga? meina onir ka bara mein ya saab kaha

purvi-aap abhi gussa mein ho apako nahi pata aap kya kaha raha ho hum baad mein baat karanga

purvi left that place and in late night purvi is doing someoffice work arjun came with pari and arjun say sorry to purvi and everything gets well

but in next morning janamashtmi celebration takes place in d house everyone is their and purvi decorate home she is standing in a chair and suddenly purvi loss her balance and fall but onir catch her and then both share a deep eyelock arjun look at everything and gets angry during krishna janam coinsidently punir as a couple krishna ko jhoola jhulata hain and pandit ji said to punir aap dono ki jodi radha-krishna jasi hain hamasha bani raha apaki jodi aur bahut jaldi apaka ghar ek balgopal aaya..everyone shock but no one say anything to panditji but onir said she is not my wife...again a fight between arvi.and then purvi thought about onir and arjun and the difference between them

Purvi constently think about onir and a big smile in her face.purvi is shocked and thought in her mind why i am thinking about onir so much ...purvi see herself in a mirror and her smile and then arjun enter the room and told her for divorce arjun-purvi,mein aab tumhara saath is rishta mein aur nahi rah sakta purvi-kyon arjun? Arjun-mujha lagta hain ki maina tumsa shadi karna ka faisla galat liya tha tum hamasha onir ki thi par tumha ehsaas nahi tha par mujha lagta hain aap ho jayaga purvi-she sign the paper and want to meet onir but not able to meet him because he is out of city for some work
onir reach mumbai he findout arjun purvi leave alone and then he thought how purvi be able to leave without arjun and want to see her once...
onir reach sunset point he saw purvi is already their and she recollect all the moment she spent with onir and said onir kaha ho aap apaki mishti ko apaki zarorat hain mujha apaka saath apani puri zindgi bitani hain...please onir jaldi vapas aa jao...onir put his hand to purvi shoulder...purvi turn and she is very happy to see onir and tears rolling in her eyes...and then she hug onir tight...bg song(saathiya ya tuna kya kiya)

Then onir realize and he step back from purvi

Purvi-what happen onir?

Onir-nothing,

Purvi-agar kuch nahi to aap yaha kya kar raha ho?

Onir-tumha ek bar dekhana aya tha

Purvi: kyon?

Onir: mujha arjun aur tumhara bara mein pata chala...kya hua purvi saab thik hain na?

Purvi : haan onir,aab saab thik ho gaya hain

Onir : matlab

Purvi:aaj mujha ehsaas ho gaya hain onir ki mujha meri zindagi mein kya chaiya,mein kissa payar karti hu

Onir :kissa?

Purvi : aapsa onir ,mein kitni bevakof thi meri duniya mere pass thi aur mujha iska ehsaas bhi nahi tha...lakin aaj mujha ehsaas ho gaya hain...

Tears rolling from onir eyes and now both of them want to be with eachother...sudden onir cell ring...and now,he had to go panchgani for a case,

Purvi : kya hua onir?

Onir : purvi mujha abhi panchgani ka liya nikal na hoga?

Purvi:kyon?

Onir :ek case hain and vaha pa mittal ka case mein mujha gavahi bhi dani hain

Purvi : onir mein bhi chalo aapka saath...

Onir : lakin purvi...mein vaha kam ka liya ja raha ho...onir turn to leave

Purvi :she stop onir,mujha apaka saath jana hain onir,issi bahna mein apaka saath thoda time spend kar paongi or mujha akalapan bhi nahi lagaga...please

Onir:ok,both leave for punchgani(landslide in the punchangani and both stay in a hotel that nigh

Purvi and onir both reach the hotel roon and sudden snowfall start ...onir love snowfall...he is out of the room and purvi also follow him...

Purvi:onir,aap bimar ho jaoga...andar chalo

Onir:nahi purvi<I love snowfall

Purvi:aacha thik hain par thodi daar baad andar chalana...

Onir:ok,onir make an ice gola and through at purvi

Purvi get shock she also done the same thing

But aftersome time purvi is not able to handle the coolness of the place and she start shrinking onir notice that

Onir kya hua purvi tum thik ho na...

Purvi:haan mein thik hu ,

Onir:lag to nahi raha

ONIR AND PURVI BOTH REACH TO THR ROOM

Purvi hug onir and feel the warmness of his body onir also reciprocate... Slowly Onir moved his hand and cupped Purvi's face and kissed her on her forehead. Later he moved forward to kiss her right cheek and then her left cheek. Slowly he leaned forward too kiss her on her lips. Purvi get shy and sit on the bedonir sit behind her and he remove her hair from back and kiss her shoulder...purvi enjoy it and then he untied her blouse and start kissing her purvi feel onir breath and turn slowly purvi moved her hand to opening onir shirt...she open it and start kissing onir onir also feel it and both enjoy that moment and then onir unpinned her saree...onir push purvi in bed in a gentle way and his hand slightly touching her soft skin giving her an intimate sensation running down her spine. Her heartbeat quicken. She took a deep breath and closed her eyes. Again onir try to come closer to her lips and this time both of them enjoying the kiss... Onir brought his one hand underneath her saree and felt her soft stomach. He brought his hand across herbelly.purvi hold onir tightly and both of them enjoy that heavely moment and sleep holding eachother tightly...

next morning mittlecall onir and ask him to meet in the cliff...
onr said ok...
onir:he kiss purvi forehead and said purvi main ja raha hu
purvi:kaha onir,
onir:mittle sa milna
purvi:onir mein bhi apaka saath calongi
onir: nahi purvi,vaha khatra hain
purvi: mujha apaka saath jana hain,aap mein apasa aur dur nahi raah sakti,bas meina kah diya na,mein apaka saath chalongi matlab chalungi samjha
onir:ok
in the cliff both are waiting for him and sudden onir saw a smile in purvi face
onir:kya hua?
purvi:kuch nahi bas kal raat ka bara mein soch rahi thi
now onir also smile and both hug eachother sudden purvi saw mittl and his gunpointing towards onir purvi turn to save onir then onir in shock he also turn to save purvi but attime both are injured from bullet...and died in each other arm...
two year later,two best friend anahita dutt and vira ahluvaliya gave birth to childern
vira ahluvaliya gave birth to purvi ahaluvaliya and dr.anahita dutt gave birth to onir dutt
after 2 year two dr.friends dr.anahita dutt mother- onir dutt and dr.vira ahluvaliya mother -purvi ahluvaliya gave birth to their child purvi have an little brother-vivan ahluvia and onir have a sister-pakhi dutt...all for are best friends and in same school...onir love sweets a lot mainly rasgula so,purvi everytime tease him by calling motu and onir gave her an anger look both of them fight and then resolve all their issues after schooling dr.anhita send onir to newyork for studying...and purvi in india...that time purvi understand she loves onir a lot and purvi get all the flashes of her past life and onir all miss purvi a lot ...after 10 years onir get back to india both of them meet once now,onir is so dashing and smart purvi fall for him more and more day by day and onir also fall for purvi simplicity and kindness and loveable nature...during durga puja purvi have all the flashes about that time she spend with onir in calcutta... during sindor khala,dr.anahita dutt invites dr.vira with her family when purvi and onir meet in durgapandla purvi about to fall because someone push her...and onir catch her and both share a deep eyelock...and same day when purvi workship durga ma suddenly her maang fill with sindoor...everyone gets shock at the time purvi have clear flashback...and she get to know that onir is her love of life in past and her husband too...she goes near to onir and said i need to talk to you onir and your mom...please its urgent

Good going shikha...👏

superb writing...😳...dear...m jst

Originally posted by: punirashakti

Good going shikha...👏

superb writing...😳...dear...m jst

Originally posted by: onirfans

swati yesterday i thought a story line for onir which is actually suit for him...story actually about how onir fight for arvi marriage and how he will be success and how all family realized how they wrong about arovi marriage

den write dear...n pm me 😃