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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Awesome update Anni👏.
thank you barfi jiji
Poor Uday had to bare a lot,
indeed a lot
even though he was innocent ...
not completely
he was proclaimed to be guilty😭.
coz he did have some fault
I'm glad that Manyata believed him😳.
yes she did
Waiting eagerly for the final part,
hehehehehe
do update it soon😊.
on tuesday

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Annesha di
How u? 😊
Extremely sorry for the late reply
The update was amazing, superb, fantastic update 👏
Loved it ⭐️
Aww, poor Uday, he had to get separated from his family for someone else's deeds
Felt bad for the lady that died
Thanks for the pm 😊
Plz update soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hi Annesha di
How u? 😊
Extremely sorry for the late reply
The update was amazing, superb, fantastic update 👏
Loved it ⭐️
Aww, poor Uday, he had to get separated from his family for someone else's deeds
Felt bad for the lady that died
Thanks for the pm 😊
Plz update soon 😃


hey
it is ok dear
thank you so much
indeed that was reallyu sad
awn it was my duty
tomorrow is the date
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Posted: 11 years ago

I want to thank all my loyal readers, thanks a lot guy for encouraging me by your comments and like, for patiently waiting for my updates and to make it possible till BOOK 2. I am really happy as for the very first I wrote such a long ss I mean 28 chapters... it was all possible only for you all. BEAUTIFUL FIRE is the first proper ss I wrote it is more of a tale of love, it had everything romance, love , misunderstanding and so it definitely deserve a happy ending, I did not extend Uday reunion as that would stretch the ss. I started my ss with a marriage and will end it with another
HAPPY READING

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Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
~!!CHAPTER 10!!~

They waited as ds entered the room , an air of authority was already filled in the room as she fired glazes at manyata and finally said in a low yet stern voice

DADISABH: I do not accept anything from YUVRAAJ UDAY VEER SINGH as he is no one of mine but you are my granddaughter I did trust you and had expectation from you but you led me down and how could you leave ujjani there isolated in that house do you know your life is in danger ...

MANYATA: but dadisabh

DADISABH: keep shut I said ...do you know both adhiraaj and Natasha are murdered

Colors from their faces flew away as she took manyata hand's in her and said dragging her away from uday

DADISABH: you are coming with me and that is final ok

MANYATA: but dadisabh please listen to me uday is not at fault it is all because off

DADISABH: I do not want anymore explanation

MANYATA: I WILL NOT LEAVE UDAY AND GO

She said in a loud tone and got away from her dadisabh grip but the very next moment a tight slap was placed on her face , she did not say anything just tears came to her eyes brimming down as ds regretted the very moment she did that for the first she raised hands against her beloved granddaughter uday signaled everyone to go out as he looked at manyata but she was not broken she was ready for another war of words as she declared

MANYATA: no ds this will not stop me the truth is uday is innocent that adhiraaj got property paper of devgarh signed by him on his name and blackmailed uday this is the reason he had to stay away from me and from all of us he went away but only to save us

Dadisabh stood there shocked unable to say another word as finally breaking the silence she headed to uday , he looked towards her as ds caressed his face for the first time in so many years tears rolled down his cheek , as she cried like a small baby and weeped saying

DADISABH: I am sorry beta I did not trust you please forgive me it is all my fault please forgive me beta please

UDAY: it is ok dadisabh you have no reason to ask for forgiveness we should be thankful that it is over

DADISABH: now they are dead so it is time uday you get back with your family

Saying this she hugged him as manyata asked wiping her tears in a puppy face

MANYATA: am I not included in the family

Uday looked at her and outstretched his hands as she hugged him and he said in a voice fixed with sorrow of separation and happiness of meeting

UDAY; indeed you are my baby elephant

She playfully hit on his arms as they remained the same way

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Posted: 11 years ago
~!! CHAPTER 11 !!~

The entire royal family was in shock after hearing the dead of Natasha and Adhiraaj , investigation was done but nothing was found ... And after knowing Adhiraaj and Natasha dirty plan they were happy at their dead , finally Uday was back with his family his dad had no words to praise his son , as he hugged uday and said

GIRIRAAJ: I am glad that you went on your mom I am glad that relation matters to you more than riasaat I am sorry beta for being rude to you , for not being there when you needed your dad and for not believing in you

UDAY: it is ok dad lets us just forget everything and focus on the most important thing

BRIDGRAAJ: and what is that uday beta?

He moved towards unnati hugged her and said proudly

UDAY: my chotti marriage dad

Unnati blushed furiously as vijay said

VIJAY: thanks uday banna

UDAY: wait a second vijay did I mention that you are going to get married I did not approve you yet

Vijay face fell down as the entire family broke into laughter only with a clinging cry of the little sreejan as jaggat added saying to the little soul

JAGGAT: aree why do you always smile when something is serious and cry when everyone is happy

UDAY:I guess he is just a bit melodrama king like your wife

JAI: jijusa how could you call me melodrama queen?

UDAY: but you are a beautiful melodrama queen dear

They all had smiled as suddenly ujjani came running inside the door manyata and uday took her into their embrace and she kissed her dad and said

UJJANI: I missed you so much

UDAY: I too missed you

UJJANI: now come dad I will show you my shoe cupboard and then even my dress cupboard



UDAY: I feel she is a clone of jai

MANYATA: HAI NAHI TOH

They laughed and finally the family reunited


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Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
CHAPTER 12

After a week

That evening was the marriage as uday was disturbed by a servant he handed uday a letter to uday,

He opened the letter and read it quietly to himself

" uday veer singh

Trust is very important for a relation , thing crumble down if trust is broken you was parted as your family did not trust you , and so was I parted from my wife as I did not believe her , you need not know my identity all I wanted to say you should also have trusted and told police the truth about deepanika dead ...but see a single shaking of trust can break so many lives , Natasha trusted adhiraaj but at the end she was poisoned by adhiraaj and killed the same night even adhiraaj was killed you know why ? as he trusted that deepanika husband would never come seeking the truth it took so much to find the truth behind my wife suicidal murder but I trusted that I would find it and soon after my revenge started but I saved adhiraaj I waited as to me even you was guilt by hiding the truth I wanted you to feel the same pain that I felt but when I found you so helpless I could place myself I could not let another life wasted because of trust and your wife really loved you like deepanika loved me but I was fool not to believe her when I thought that you suffered a lot I killed adhiraaj for what his father did to deepanika and what he was doing to manyata and you ...it might be selfish of me to plan revenge for you but I am not evil enough to let you suffer . I am glad that you found your family back as I found mine , so do not break trust as once broken it is very hard to fix and there is no need to say anyone about deepanika the evil got their deserved punishment ...hope you a happy life ahead

Anonymous"


Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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!!~{ CHAPTER 13 }~!!

He folded the letter and threw it in the fire flames letting the fire eat it one by one , as it followed the instruction and did not reveal about the letter to anyone he headed down the steps into the hall manyata along with ujjani was already there , she was looking dead dropping gorgeous in a red netted sari while his another sweet heart little ujjani was into a small gaggra cholli finding it so hard to tackle her gaggra in one hands and move swiftly the cradle of srejaan in another as ds and all other sat watching the marriage uday took his seat beside her and as he saw the marriage his chotti looked so beautiful , he recalled all those days of childhood when he and unnati used to play around , his eyes were filled with tears while manyata hand went wipping his tears as she said him lovingly

MANYATA: it is ok uday she is not going anywhere she is just coming to our home you can always met her

UDAY: I wish mom was here to see this

As she smiled and kept her head on his shoulder resting and watching the rest marriage as she said him

MANYATA: remember uday our marriage

UDAY: I do princess you rejected me on the very first night of marriage

MANYATA: because you was drunk and the next day you scolded me so badly

UDAY: that because I thought you were behaving badly with khansabah

MANYATA: the way unnati teased you by the way Mr Singh explain me what were you doing with that princess almost in your lap in the hospital huh

UDAY: Oh I am sorry princess it was just to make you jealous

MANYATA: but I was not jealous

UDAY: oh really

MANYATA; yes

Saying this he started tickling her as she said pleading him

MANYATA: uday stop ok fine I was jealous now stop please

He stopped with a victorious smile as they watched the marriage

He sat watching the news as his son was on his lap , ratul eyes seemed to be glued as he said

RATUL: isn't she pretty dad

ANURAG: whom are you talking about bacha

RATUL: about princess ujjani

ANURAG: so my little boy likes her

RATUL: a lot dad do you think she will accept my proposal I mean tomorrow is rose day so I will give her red roses

ANURAG: certainly she will bacha now let get some sleep ok

Saying this he tugged ratul in the bed as he walked towards his room crossing the corridor he went inside to see a flower garland was not properly hanged on the wall as he took the garland and kept it in the table and said proudly

ANURAG: You look much more beautiful without this wifey

As he turned away from deepanika photo frame and slept biding the night a good bye

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Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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~!! " CHAPTER 14 "!!~

The car drove in the isolated roads , ujjani was already tired and she slept in the back seat as uday drove the car and manyata sat beside him there hands were already locked in each other as all of a sudden he stopped the car he looked at her while she felt her eyes trapped in hers , he bought his face closer to her and she was aware of his motive , her breath felt heavy on his face as he proceeded for the kiss she said in a loving tone'

MANYATA: uday ... I ... Am ..feeling

She did not complete as he asked passionately

UDAY: complete your sentence princess you feeling what

MANYATA: to puke by watching that face of yours

She burst into laughter as he turned his face , and looked away angrily she kept laughing till her stomach pained as she watched him in his serious mood a fear came to her mind as she touched his cheek and said

MANYATA: u..d..a..y

He did not reply instead he shrugged her hands off she caught her ears and said childishly

MANYATA: I am sorry uday please forgive me

He looked at her angrily and said

UDAY: now you are not feeling like to puke

MANYATA: I am sorry

UDAY: it is ok but you have to compensate

MANYATA: ok tell me what should I do

UDAY: kiss me

MANYATA: fine

Uday very well knew she would trick him and kiss him on the cheek but he was also clever as her lips touched his cheek he turned his face and captured her lips , at first she was alarmed but soon she too found herself drowned in his lips , they kissed passionately there tongue danced each other leaving the breathless as they parted with a peck she rested her body in his embrace as they let their soul burn in the BEAUTIFUL FIRE of love

Saawariya.. hha hha haa, Saawariya.. hha hha haa,
Saawariya, ohhh Saawariya

Oh dholi mein bhitake, sitrao se sajaa ke
Zaamane se churake le jaye ga
Saawariya.. hha hha haa, Saawariya.. hha hha haa,
Saawariya, ohhh Saawariya

Ohhh dholi mein bhitake, sitrao se sajaa ke
Zaamane se churake le jaye ga
ek rooz tera udake jiya
Ohh Saawariya.. hha hha haa, ohh Saawariya.. hha hha haa,
yehey Saawariya, ohhh Saawariya

udley he he, odley he he
uudrdr hey he he, ohhhdrdr he he

Palko ke shaamiyane mein, kwaboon ke har tikane mein
Teri hi parchaiya hai, tu tho har lamha yaadon mein hai
Teri khamosh pehali nazar ka deewana bana
Saawariya.. hha hha haa, Saawariya.. hha hha haa,
Saawariya, ohhh Saawariya

Oh dholi mein bhitake, sitrao se sajaa ke
Zaamane se churake le jaye ga
Saawariya..(I wanna be your date tonight) hha hha haa,
Saawariya.. (You wanna be my princess of night) o hha hha haa,
Saawariya, (I wanna love you my love at first sight, will you be my date tonight) ohhh Saawyariya



Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb Mindblowing, fantastic, amazing and just Fabulous.

But Alas! It ended. The way in every chappy you showed cuteness of Uday was simply Awwwsssum.

Loved it to the core and i have to a say,you are a really fantabulous writer with heart touching stories!

With love,

Nishaya...

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