Love Never Fails (Discontinued) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very interesting cant wait to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Okay okay I know I know that I will update it yesterday! But things always turn out differently with me! My net connection was playing hide and seek with me! And I do not know how to win that game! so I gave up! But today... I was learnt and came that game and yeah!!! I won!!!!!!

Hey!!! That was crap na??

Yeah I know that!

SO first of all a very very thanks for such a warm response but I must tell you Your expectations with me are making me nervous!! phew!!! Guys I am not a writer and so but I like to pen down my thoughts so I write! But if you find it crap please please dont bash me out!!! pleashhh!!!!



Note: Made for each other will take some time to be updates! SHoryy!!!!! Real world is keeping me busy!


Okay so Part 1 is updated with all my efforts... please read it, if possible enjoy and and and don't forget to comment!!




This part goes to Hina69 for our new frandshippp!!!!!!

Love you hina!!!




Here goes the update enjoy!








Part 1

"...and then the hero will come and sit at the edge...yes... at the edge and will say these lines looking directly into heroines eyes. The scene will be One take and whole focus will be on your face. Is it okay with you Sir?" the director asked to Arnav.

"Yeah! Whatever! Where's the script? I want to read the dialogues!" said Arnav in the most disinterested way.

"Here! This is the script sir! The shot will be ready in one hour!" said the director handing over the script to Arnav and leaving the van.

"Only once in your life, I truly believe, you find someone who can completely turn your world around. You tell them things that you've never shared with another soul and they absorb everything you say and actually want to hear more. You share hopes for the future, dreams that will never come true, goals that were never achieved and the many disappointments life has thrown at you. When something wonderful happens, you can't wait to tell them about it, knowing they will share in your excitement. They are not embarrassed to cry with you when you are hurting or laugh with you when you make a fool of yourself. Never do they hurt your feelings or make you feel like you are not good enough, but rather they build you up and show you the things about yourself that make you special and even beautiful. There is never any pressure, jealousy or competition but only a quiet calmness when they are around. You can be yourself and not worry about what they will think of you because they love you for who you are. The things that seem insignificant to most people such as a note, song or walk become invaluable treasures kept safe in your heart to cherish forever. Memories of your childhood come back and are so clear and vivid it's like being young again. Colours seem brighter and more brilliant. Laughter seems part of daily life where before it was infrequent or didn't exist at all. A phone call or two during the day helps to get you through a long day's work and always brings a smile to your face. In their presence, there's no need for continuous conversation, but you find you're quite content in just having them nearby. Things that never interested you before become fascinating because you know they are important to this person who is so special to you. You think of this person on every occasion and in everything you do. Simple things bring them to mind like a pale blue sky, gentle wind or even a storm cloud on the horizon. You open your heart knowing that there's a chance it may be broken one day and in opening your heart, you experience a love and joy that you never dreamed possible. You find that being vulnerable is the only way to allow your heart to feel true pleasure that's so real it scares you. You find strength in knowing you have a true friend and possibly a soul mate who will remain loyal to the end. Life seems completely different, exciting and worthwhile. Your only hope and security is in knowing that they are a part of your life." Read the dialogues.

And today Arnav Singh Raizada Lost that hope and security due to his own mistakes.

"Khushi!" he sighed.

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Today the distance between his studio and house seemed to be increased suddenly. It was taking hell lot of hours to reach back home. Every day it was only a half an hour journey but today that half an hour seemed very long.

"DAMN IT! Why is there so much of traffic today!" he barked fisting his hands.

"Sir I think it will take about an hour to get the traffic clear." His driver informed him.

"What?" he asked horrified.

"Relax A.S.R why are you so worried?" asked his assistant.

"Aman,I am going on foot! When the traffic is clear you can come with the driver!" he said getting out of the car.

"What? Are you mad A.S.R? The public will go mad seeing you and they will attack themselves on you! You can't go like this." Aman tried stopping him by pulling him back in the car.

"I don't care Aman. I have to reach home as fast as possible. I just don't care about anyone. It is only 10 minutes to home and I will manage it." said Arnav.

"Arnav you are not just Arnav. You are A.S.R for god sake. A superstar! What if something happens to you? You can't just trail out without security and..." Aman could not finish his words as Arnav was already out of the car.

"No! I am not A.S.R now, I am just Arnav...Her Arnav!" saying this he wrapped a scarf on his face and made his way to his home.

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He checked the living room, kitchen, balcony, garden, poolside and every other room in his house. He didn't find her. The only place left was THEIR room. And he dared not to check there in the fear that if he didn't find her there also then what will happen. But he had to do it. He had to find her.

And... his fear came true. She was not there. She left. She left him alone.

With a thud he sat on the couch near the bed. His palms on his face and his head low. The million dollars house seemed to fake. The lights were not able to put away the darkness from him. He was lost. Lost in his fears, lost in her, lost in the numbness and lost in her LOVE.

"She can't do this. For god sake she can't do this to me. How can she leave and go?" he said to no one but himself.

Why can't she? What reason have you left to her for staying with you? She has all the right to do this after what you have done to her!' his mind contradicted.

But ! I mean... she...she can't do this to me. She loves me! I know that! Then why has she left without talking to me. I know what I did was wrong, but she can't leave me! What will I do without her?' his heart pleaded.

Really! Do you think that she should have stayed and talked to you? Why? I don't see any reason for that! And neither she did! Accept it A.S.R you deserve this! And about staying without her! Huh! When she was with you were you with her?' his mind contradicted again.

I was... and I am. It's just that I was taken away by the air and... leave it but I was going to apologize for it. I realised MY mistake today and I would have made everything fine between us but she just left, without...without giving me a chance.' His heart chocked.

Hey hey hey! Wait! What do you think of yourself? One second this and another second that! The world doesn't revolve around you A.S.R.!' his mind said again.

But her world revolved around me... around Arnav. I know that.' His heart cried.

AND YOU BROKE HER WORLD APART!' with this the mind and heart accepted the truth that his love failed.




***Please tell me your opinions! It matters a lot.***

******This story will take some time to come on its real track, next part may contain the past history and events of the characters to make you aware of them... so please give it time for two three updates!!!******





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Edited by awsome_avi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
what he done to her that she left him...really want to read on and on...loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting part 1
Is Arnav and Khushi married or just lovers???
What did Arnav did to break Khushi's heart??
Continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
read it now
loved this story,awesome👏
do cont soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
wow awesome writing
lovely
I really love to read Arnav repent stories don't knw why 😛
waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
nice start avi!! :)
update soon :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Nice start What did Arnav do to break Khushi's heart Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start. what did arnav do that broke khushi's heart? waiting to read further

Edited by sfghfj - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww thanks alot for dedicating this wonderful chappy to me:*



Oh WOW!!!!! ASR is a superstar.Well that is so interesting!


And what he did??Acc. to his thoughts,it appears like he acted like a jerk with her:o.

Waiting to know whats in past?I would defo love to read further;)

This is honestly differnt concept!Do continue it.Ok.Its an order!!:p.And you better follow it:p:D

Thanks for the pm.
Update soon ya!
And a looong one!!

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