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iheartChai

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hope there is an update soon 😳

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AASUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Selvy

I had a chance to catch up on your OS.

I appreciate it a lot.

Tragic start as Heer was v. ill and Prem's facing a challenge as Heer refused to fight to live.

I think you did a fantastic job of moving the story from beginning up until now.

It was mystery what might have happened after Heer left Prem due to a misunderstanding created by Prem's mom and others.

Your take on this episode in the show is v. interesting.

You made Prem stand up for his wife and help even though Heer was v.reluctant to disobey her mom in law.

Well so far what you showed is v. nicely written.

Whenever there is a doubting moment the angel seemed to pick up PH from falling down in pieces. This is so cool.

Lovely title. All the characters you added both +ive and -ive play their part v. well.

Preet Meher and Kulraj Kiran as well as Prem's biological mom's family are v. supportive.

Thank you for taking to time to write and share with us 🤗

Please continue with the next ch.

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Seema sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

plss complete thiss fanfiction plsss

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Seema sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

Plss complete ur ff new2007

We r waiting Yaar where r u now

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Seema sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

plsss
plsss
plsss
update ur others fanfictions tooo

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S.B.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hope that u will complete this... plzzz plzzz update

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AASUS

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey guys Selvs is away for 15 days. She may come ol after. :)

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