ArHi OneShot |Scientifically Speaking|

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Posted: 12 years ago
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A small, (very!) simple, hopefully-happy little something I wrote after realising I've been writing too much angst lately :P Please excuse any inconsistencies - I've not read over this yet, sorry :s


ArHi OneShot |Scientifically Speaking|

Both Khushi's Buaji and his Mami appeared to be particularly fond of astronomy.

And they would never pass up a chance to bring it up.

It had started with a simple enough statement, a clichd enough observation.

Khushi looks like the moon, Buaji had said, all those days ago during theirhaldi. He had let his gaze settle on her to judge the merit of that statement himself.

And he had not been able to look away.

She was so stunning, so very divine.

Her creamy, flawless skin appeared to be glowing with an iridescence of its own, framed by the pure white and vivid red of flowers paying homage to her beauty. The rich brown of her glossy curls, pulled into an elaborate braid and bedecked with even more flowers, stood out even more in its darkness against the milky-white of her saree, as depthless and alluring as the night-sky.

Not fanciful by nature, Arnav nonetheless found himself mentally agreeing with Buaji's analogy.

He also decided that next to red, white had to be his second favourite colour on Khushi.

Soon to be his wife.

A heady mix of pleasure and possession had surged through him then, warming him from the inside out, and a heated smirk had twisted up the corner of his mouth.

And it had only hitched itself higher when those wide, bottomless eyes, liquid-liquor enough to intoxicate him at a glance, darted toward him and away again, the thick lashes framing them fluttering in a visible combination of nerves and thrill. A berry blush infused into the pearly smoothness of her cheeks.

Indulging himself as he was in the celestial beauty fidgeting and shifting away before him, it was a while before he recalled the throngs surrounding him, and a moment longer before he could bring himself to listen to what they were saying.

It was with something of a start and good dose of confusion that he realised his Mami had, for whatever reason, donned a pair of sunglasses.

Now if Khushi is the moon, then our Arnav bitwa is no less than the sun.

But that had been the limit of Arnav's sense of poetry. It had bothered him then, and bothered him even more now, and never failed to bother him every single time their aunts chose to address them thus, having taken a liking to those two nicknames for the newly married couple.

The sun and his moon.

But Arnav was, save for a few sentimental lapses regarding his wife, a rationalist. And as far as he was concerned, the whole analogy had now become flawed.

After all, even an elementary school student knew that the moon could never shine without the sun. That the moon's beams were borrowed from the sun's far-reaching rays, that it was that star around which the universe, or humanity's universe at the very least, revolved.

Scientifically speaking, that could only mean one thing.

He was not the sun.

Khushi was.

The rustle of bedclothes interrupted his line of thoughts, and Arnav lazily peeked through his still-drowsy eyelids to find his wife shuffling around under the duvet, shifting until she was on her side, facing him.

'Arnavji,' she mumbled around a yawn, her own eyelids cracking ever so slightly open. Her voice was thick with sleep, a few tangled strands of hair falling across her face, 'Good morning.'

And then she smiled at him. A tiny, cute, sleepy little smile that was gone almost as quickly as it came as the pull of her dreams enticed her back into their embrace.

But the smile that had broken out over his face as he had watched hers, wide and uninhibited, had remained.

Warmth blanketed his heart and wrapped it snugly, each beat sound and healthy as he carefully leaned closer to his snoozing wife, mumbling incoherently as she swayed in and out of sleep. Gliding one arm around her relaxed shoulders, he bent in even closer, and gently pressed his lips to her forehead.

'Good morning.'

His chin settled over her crown, and through his content, half-lidded stare he peered at the curtains drawn across the window.

The sun did not appear to have risen fully yet.

But that did not matter. He was holding his sun, and all the light and warmth he would ever need, right in his arms.

And as long as she was there, with his whole world revolving around her, he knew he would never have to worry about the darkness again.


I'd love to hear your thoughts on this! Thank you so much for reading and it would mean a lot to me if you could drop a word or two on what you think of it :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nafisa, sweetheart, dont do this to my future relationship. He is already caving under the burden of my love for Arnav and this kind of expectation would surely lead him to fall and maybe even run...sigh.

This was...exquisite.

I sighed so much inwardly while reading this only to have my toe curl by the end of it...Arnavji won my heart with his scientifically inclined ramblings and love for his Khushi and my own deep hatred and mistrust for science could not hamper it and thats a first!

The analogy, the confusion, the conclusion, the realization...uff! It was just so snuggly wrapped up in love, in adoration, in reverence! Beautiful is a word not enough to describe this piece of writing, the emotions it talks about or the ones that it evokes!

I just dont know what to say except...dear future husband, you better be taking tuitions from this Arnavji! And if you want anyone to blame for your this haalat, blame Nafisa!
Edited by AngelTeen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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expressive!!!👍🏼
Edited by arshi4ever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful... was feeling blissful reading this short but extremely cute piece... thank you for writing this one :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So cute indeed she is his sun and moon. oddly this reminded me of game of thrones lol one of the characters(khaleesi) calls her husband the moon of my life.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yaaay! Res!

I can't help but go awww.. This is so cute and nice and fluffy just the way i like it.. It always is when Arnav smiles lost in his pagal wife.. *sigh*

I thought I was the only one who considered hai dhoop sa woh agar, woh chandni raat si hai.. To be not apt.. Hehe.. I am so glad Arnav agrees with me.. And what an analogy.. They give and take and their world revolves around the other..

And Nafi.. You have woven such a nice story out of what would have been just another inconsequential dialogue in the series.. Something you always do.. Cash in on the details.. And i love that abt your writing and I simply loved this one shot..

You and angsty.. Hmmm.. I have loads of catching up to do.. I know.. I know.. *runs*

P.S. I miss you too! Muah!
Edited by Psychedelic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was such a simple but beautiful and dreamy shot... Where do you get these marvellous ideas from, missy? I'm falling in love with your writing!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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a lovely heart-warming one shot! it brought back memories of some amazing scenes from the show. Arnav then equating Khushi to the moon and now realizing that she is his sun, the reason for his being and the one who sheds warmth and light on his hitherto cold and dark life is moving... a sweet os that brings a smile to one's lips... that morning scene makes one go awww !
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Loved the astronomy...with the love dose.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one! yet to start on the other 3 shot.
Going by your note, is it angsty?

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