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Posted: 12 years ago
SORRY FOR DOUBLE COMMENT. I DONT GET TIME TO CONGRATULATE OR COMPLAINT IN THE FIRST ONE. HERE IT GOES...

FIRSTLY A BIGWALA HUG🤗 FOR FOR MANVIR ROMANCE. 😉😉AND A KISS FOR NOT INCLUDING JEEVIKA -VIRAT ROMANCE.


COMPLAINTS TOO...
TUNE LIGHTS OFF KYU KIYA?😡😡 HUME BAHUTH TEASE KARNE KI BATH ACHANAK EK "LIGHTS OFF" .😡😡😡 PLZ AGLE BAAR CHEATING MATH KARNA.


ACTUALLY TUMHARI IRATHA KYA HAI? I THINK VIRAT WILL ALSO FALL IN LOVE WITH MANVI. AM I RIGHT? ANYWAY AWESOME WORK WORK YAAR.
EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT PART. FRIENDS, PLZ CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi naina it was a short update:( but i liked it alot.
Continue soon
with long update:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi friend... this is fabulous... and I like manvir... plz pm me friend when u update this story and other stories also... this is my request friend...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey plzz update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
UPDATE PLZ...
EAGERLY WAITING FOR VIRMAN FIRST MEET.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz...
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😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi naina ,
I hav read all ur stories till date, i must tell u that u r awesome😊
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Posted: 12 years ago




* MILNA HI THA *

At vadera mansion
Virat : mom i am going now... bye luv u and take care...

Vanshika : apna khayal rakhna beta aur jaldi Ana aur woh bhi sab theek karke... (you also take care son and come back soon... all the best...)

virat : yes mom... jeevika...??

Jeevika : virat... virat I will miss u a lot... take me also na... how will i live without you...???

virat : what...?? (shocked on seeing her reaction and melodramatic dialogues)

jeevika : virat take care of yourself... eat your meals on time... and bahar ka kuch mat khana please... aur party bhi mat jana akele... aur please ladkiyon se door rehna... aur.. aur.. aur mujhe call karte rehna...

Virat (now irritated) : agar aap sab ka melodrama khatam ho gya ho toh main jao... maa jeevs m not going to border to fight wars... so chill... and Bye and jeevs take care of yourself and maa...

jeevika : okkk bye... take care...


Next evening
Manvi : Viren mat jao na... I will miss u baby... (pulling him back towards herself)

Viren : manvi it important jaan... i have to go but i will be back in a week jaan...

manvi : but what would i do without do...?? i will be lonely... all alone by myself...

viren : you are not a jhui mui gaon ki gori... you are the great manvi singhania... so now no emotional touchy stuff babes...

Manvi : hmm... *with tears in her eyes *

Viren : aww... (seeing tears in her eyes) come on now gimme a hug... (opening his arms wide)

manvi hugged Viren and he hugged her back inhaling her scent and somehow not feeling good on the thought of leaving her alone... a fear of losing her gripped his heart...

Manvi : i am coming with u to the airport...

Viren : ok... chalo...


At airport :
Viren : manvi take care baby... have lots of fun baby... go out for shopping, movies... whatver but dont shed a single tear... hang out with your useless friends but dont sit at home n miss me... okkk...??? (kissing her cheek)

Manvi : okk... but keep calling me... dont get too involved in that boring stuff... bye jaanu... come back soon and i will miss u... take care and try to wrap up the work fast baby...

viren : okk my princess... main yoon gaya aur yoon aaya..
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Viren went towards the boarding gate and manvi smiled looking at him until he disappeared from her sight... manvi turned and was heading towards her car when suddenly she fell because of a stone that came in her way and she closed her eyes expecting a fall... but after some seconds she didn't feel anything and opened her eyes slowly to see a pair of hazel brown eyes looking at her nd holding her waist... virat made her stand straight and looked at her annoyed...

Virat : Dekh ke nahi chal sakti...??? aankhein hai ya button...??? aur itni heels pehni ki kya jarurat jab isko handle karna nahi aata toh...??

Manvi : o hello... Maine nahi kaha tha tumhein mujhe bachane ko samjhe... aur how dare u comment on my stilettos...?? tum samjhte kya ho khud ko...??? kahin ke raja maharaja ho...??? tameez hi nahi ladki se baat karni ki...

Virat : o madam mujhe bhi koi shauk nahi hai tum jaisi maids ko bachane ka... badi aayi hoor pari... bandariya ho ek dum... bandariya... ded futiya kahin ki... aur haan ye jo apni bakwaas hai na apne paas hi rakha karo... jab se mili ho chapd chapad... aakashwani ho kya...???

Manvi : agar ek aur word bola toh mjhse bura aur koi nahi hoga smjhe tum... tum apne aap ko smjhte Kya ho... huh...?? maid...?? tumhe main maid lagti hoon...??? get your eyes checked... and if in case you need the contact number of a good doctor i will give you one... i believe in helping people... what if the person on the other side is least concerned and not worth of offering any kind of help... guys lie you are -

manvi was blabbering and blabbering and this irritated virat even more all thanks to the melodrama that took place back in chandigarh... so without thinking anything, he slammed his lips to hers and kissed her... virat vadera kissed manvi in the very first meeting just to shut her up... manvi was shocked and numb because this guy had the audacity to kiss manvi... manvi singhania that too in front of so many people... she was never being kissed by anyother guy except viren and now this guy in the very first meeting did the unexpected... but the unexpected was still to come... virat pulled her more closer and deepened the kiss... he dont know why but it felt right... it all felt right to him at that moment... but this wasnt the end... something worse was awaiting them... manvi was not in her senses that she didnt realise him pulling her more close and kissing her as if they were a couple madly in love...

" awww... such a cute couple... " manvi heard somebody saying this and she recovered from the numb state... before she could raise her voice she saw sushant looking at her coming towards her... manvi had no option and she closed her eyes and kissed him back fearing what if sushant sees her pushing this guy away and shouting on him, abusing him... hitting him... what if he thinks thinks that she isnt happy with her boyfriend (viren)... no no she cant let it happen... after few seconds manvi opened her eyes and looks for sushant... her eyes meet his and he winks at her showing a thumbs up... manvi sighs and push virat away...

manvi : what the hell do you think you were doing...???

virat : why the hell were you responding back...???

manvi : you started it...

virat : you finished it... oops spoiled it...

manvi : aww... such a cheapo...

virat : same to you weirdo...

manvi : you... you arrogant cheapster..
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virat : thats rockstar baby... get over the kiss snobbish shorty...

manvi : arghhh... i hate you...

virat : yeah yeah i love you too...

saying this they both went their ways... but who knows that they had the same destination... what is in store with these two... time will answer this question because its too early to say anything...




TEMME HOW IS IT GOOD OR BAD WE R NOT GETTING GOOD RESPONSE GUYX PLZ HIT LIKE THE BUTTON ND DO COMMENT PLZ

LUV NAINU ND SANU
Edited by sweetyvirman123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nainu I loved the update how manu was talking with viren butvi want the jodi of manvir not virman plz plz manvir ki jodi banana or kuch aisa karo jisse manvi bhi viren ke pass chandigarh chali jaye I just want MANVIR or no one else in the end nd plz plz plz plz update sokn sweety waiting for this update nd also update ur other stories as well waiting nd this was smal updaye next time I want lonnnggg

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