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kaamchorni

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Smoke and Mirrors

"Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing,
there is a field. I'll meet you there.

When the soul lies down in that grass,
the world is too full to talk about.
Ideas, language, even the phrase each other doesn't make any sense."

- Jalal ad-Din Muhammad Rumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#2

interesting...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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.OneDirection.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#3

That seems to be versatile..!!
Interesting Start, cont soon

Will be waiting!

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ChandlerBing

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Goosebumps. This short piece, which was not more than half a page gave me goosebumps. How do you do that woman? And you still self doubt after giving us time and again stories which are strikingly different from one another but gems all the same? *Glares*

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Wow,Distinguished!!!!!!!!!!

Totally different,just like you.Your style.

Only the fact that she's smoking,is giving me the hint that how unconventional its gonna be!!!!!!

So,she part of a legend,myth.

Waiting for the mystery to be unfolded.

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For me to know and you to guess :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Wow!!!i mean incredible!!!
Cant wait :)

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dqno1

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Posted: 13 years ago

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You create such atmosphere with your words. I could picture it like an old movie playing on the screen.

Do continue soon 😃

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#8

u write very mystery type story...

but this type i'm loving these small updates...

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mayyo

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Bookmarked! Will read it soon, In Sha Allah! :)

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kaamchorni

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Posted: 13 years ago

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No problem, M, take your time :)

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